Collapse of Iron: the Pioneering Journey of Dome and Stars

Very good, and also about the harem, you can try it if you think you can handle it, but if you think you can't, I advise you not to do more than try. After all, this harem thing is just like you doing it again. A dish of moderate difficulty. Technically good. Anyone can accept it, but those with poor skills can accept it. Then no one can accept it. But the main thing is to look at yourself. After all, you are the one who wrote the book. Don't let irrelevant people influence your first and best ideas. Some sentences may be a bit confusing, please forgive me. In short, do what you do best. Come on! After all, I am still looking forward to your subsequent plot, author.

It's pretty good, but the words "brother protects you" can slowly be reduced and turned into some details in life, such as covering Xing with a quilt when Xing sleeps.

Author, update, read it [please read it carefully], I have read a lot of Bengtie fan fiction, but I still haven't seen many novels with two protagonists, please give it a thumbs up [like it]. At the moment, I personally don't think there is anything sinister about it, maybe because I haven't seen this type of dual-main character. I can only say that the future is promising, and I look forward to the author's updates. Ahem, I'm quite curious about one thing. What would Kafka's expression be like if they knew what happened to Star and Sky [smile]. (I'm even more looking forward to the plot of Pinoconi written by the author. Should Firefly be with Xingqiong and March Seven? [Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh][Sneaky laugh]) No, author, don't interrupt the update, I still want to continue reading [cry][cry][cry] @ Friends Creek

The first sleepless night: The night outside the car window is brilliant Don't forget to close your eyes before you wake up You take part in this scene and change your posture Answer, ending, how should I guess? Memory is the prologue of dreams (The scar is covered up but still there yesterday) Time is waiting for you to wake up (Take me away) Don't be broken again, don't wither again Continue to indulge in self-detour Last taste of eternity See you again in the next dream of that night The more hypocritical it is, the more perfect it is Falling asleep with sweet dreams, reincarnation of despair As soon as you close it and open it, you start to go backwards See you again in the next dream of that night (The foreshadowing has not been solved, the suspense is still there) Time is waiting for you to wake up (Sing with me) Don't be broken again, don't wither again Continue to indulge in self-detour Last taste of eternity Have a sleepless night as an ending The more you want to be happy, the more you want to be broken Right or wrong, don't understand anymore Forgot time, come to the dream party Have a sleepless night as an ending Why do I feel that my contribution value has dropped so much [Thinking]

Haji Zuo, you guy, are you burned out because of double opening. . .

Very beautiful star text, it makes my Heavenly Fire Saint keep spinning (♡>𖥦<)/♥

That being said, those who can accept the avatar can continue reading it. The writing itself is good, but some people may think the avatar is poisonous.

Since the middle part has to have overwhelming combat power, you might as well write it a little weaker at the beginning, and then slowly improve it, or if you don't mark it out, it won't really have any impact. If you have to mention it, I feel that the middle part is uncomfortable [smile], but I did mark it in the introduction as a cool article, five stars for encouragement [like] Wrong typing, give me five stars [face covering] [like]

Are the only heroines in this book are Hoshi and Mitsuki? In fact, I think the introduction of the book can be changed to have two heroines, otherwise it will be misleading.

It's good to read. Keep up the good work and support you, author.

The author must complete the update and don't interrupt it for no reason! The plot between the two of them, Xing and Qiong, is really interesting. Even if you have already played it, you won't feel bored if you watch it again! Come on! Effort! Please! ! ! (Swallow, how can I live without you? Swallow!!)

It's really good

I hope you don't stop updating, otherwise... To live or not to live, choose

It's beautiful, exciting, and exciting, but I'm just afraid that one day I won't be able to get out if I go in [smile][smile][smile]

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, so good looking

The author writes really well. Speaking of which, do you want to score points?

Great author! I like you! Can you let me be your ⭐😡? !

Nice! There are not many books about Twins in the Starry Vault, so the author is just trying to make fun of it and is going to die! ! ! 😁😁😁😁😁

Isn't it delicious when Jizi cooks? Did I remember it wrong?

This is the most comfortable novel I have read so far among the Starry Twins novels. Come on.

Support support support

It makes no sense for me to give five stars, but I want to say one thing about the author, give Three Kingdoms Five stars.

Even if it's for the sake of this world, use the dimensional black hole on him.

I just started watching. I want to ask if Cocolia still has to die so reluctantly. [Crying][Crying] If he dies, I have to skip that part

Beautiful, love watching. Author, I want to read Kafka and Hanabi

Highly recommended. This is one of the most enjoyable novels I have ever read.

A very good one. Beng Tie said that he is looking forward to the plot of Ompharos and the Holy Grail War. And the Pinocchio plot

It's so beautiful. I'm keeping it up, but it's a bit lacking.

Yes, very yes🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑 🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑

Very good, hope the author can continue to persevere. Come on!