Arknights: Sorcery and the Anvil

There are many shortcomings in the writing, but as a new author, the writing is still very good. Please encourage me [Salute]👍 This book also made up for a lot of my regrets, which I haven't seen in other books. (Finally, I saw the expected love plot between the male and female protagonists 🤦) The early writing was very good, with compact content, rich settings (very cool abilities), and many self-made settings. However, the problems are also obvious, such as the emotional line problem (Xiao Ge and Shi Erte), and the conflict between the original plot and self-made settings (invasion from another world). But I want to complain here. There are two places that I personally find very uncomfortable. 1. The solution to the bear group. The protagonist only got along with a few members of the Bear Group for a while. From the perspective of the Bear Group, a powerful stranger rescued them inexplicably. It felt that it was not handled well and not very harmonious. 2. Xiaoge's surgery. In a sense, this is a plastic surgery. Although there is nothing wrong with the overall process, I think it would be better if "Xiaoge is dying, the doctors are powerless, and the protagonist carries out emergency treatment." The above is my personal opinion. If there are any problems, please correct them. Finally, I wish this book continues to prosper and the author all the best [top post] @ feather collection enthusiasts Does the author have any readership or anything like that? Recently I also want to write a book, and I would like to see what suggestions you have.

Yes, it's pretty nb. Although there are many parts that I don't like (such as the plot of Red Raid and Cheng Shou, Mei Fei and Faust were not directly killed by the protagonist, Wei Liaowu's self-righteousness is disgusting, and Hei Li was not killed by Sister 42's Levantine after almost killing the protagonist). I didn't feel happy enough after watching it, but it is already very good. Keep up the good work.

My friend, can you win this resurrection match? Your book is really beautiful [rolls eyes] Oh hoo, I won the battle

Halfway through reading it, your book has been blocked or something?

Won the Easter match!

Why did he die so quickly if he wasn't raised well?

Urgent, urgent, urgent, why was it sent suddenly (

Where are the books? How did you send it?

I'll give you five stars, plus a few more for love, a single female lead in Shirte, how about that?

Although, author, your name should be Qi Xiaobai's nickname [sneaky laugh][sneaky smile][sneaky smile]