Slay the Gods: Forbidden Ruins? My Words of Spirit Awaken Without Limit

It's very nice. The characters don't have OOC. I just want to ask if they can have no cp. Qiuqiu, Mingfei is not suitable. I interact with Hongying every few chapters and hug him from time to time. I'm afraid it's cp Hongying again. . She is the only one in the team who interacts with her. .

Author, please, don't write about Death Zedian!! More than half of the reason I like Dragon Clan is because of him. Our Zedian is already miserable enough, so let him stay with his favorite brother, and let Mingfei no longer have to experience losing the most important person (on the surface, Mingfei doesn't have a good look at Zedian, but in fact, she cares about him very much, Although he wants Concubine Ming's perspective, please don't write it to death!!!

Can you please stop having CP? I really don't want Lu Mingfei to have CP 😢😢

It's really beautiful, and I feel like the author's language is very awesome: "Welcome to join you, Mr. Lu Mingfei" [This night, I seemed to see again the scene when Professor Guderian met me for the first time. He also held my hand tightly, as if holding some kind of hope] by Lu Mingfei He was born to roar into the world Between each word, the spirit of words buzzes He is a person who lacks love. If others treat him well, he will naturally respond. It's ridiculous. He used to desperately want to escape from ordinary life, but now he regrets it. "When you have the chance to make a choice, don't regret it." When Lu Mingfei calmed down and picked up the gun, everything unrelated to the outside world seemed to be giving way to him, and only the thread of fate connected it to the target. On the top of the head are sharp claws that can tear it apart, and the rest are broken raindrops. Under thirty-two times acceleration, everything in the world slowed down in his eyes. He used to be cowardly and timid, but that was him in the past, and that him was already dead, dead in Hongjing, dead in Tokyo, and dead in the heart of that girl. Something for nothing. Losing your soul in exchange for ultimate power and power. Shattered into thousands of pieces, this is the punishment for the following offenders.

It's pretty good so far, but I think Mingfei's strength is a bit understated, not to mention physical strength. How has Mingfei been trained by the principal after Long San? Her attack skills should be very strong. Mingfei's fighting skills are not shown very much. I also think Hongying is a bit like a senior sister. So the heroine is a little monster. Don't leave the harem. If you don't resurrect the little monster, won't it be Jiangnan? [Staring]

So far it seems to be OK, but there are a few minor issues. When Lu Mingfei used violent blood for the second time, it was only a violent blood attack, but it caused him to undergo obvious dragon transformation, with dragon scales growing all over his body. And I remember that this has to be at least 2 degrees, or even 3 degrees of violent blood, for a person to have obvious dragon transformation. Another problem is that when he used the violent blood for the second time, he also used the time spirit and the moment spirit at the same time. I remember that Lu Mingfei mentioned in the previous article that he also felt that this first attempt was indeed risky. But why did he pardon the people around him when he was using Time Zero, so that they would not be affected by Time Zero? This allowed most people to forgive the impact of Time Zero. I remember it was mentioned in the second part that this would put a greater burden on the user. Lu Mingfei was already in poor condition at the time, so why did he have to increase his burden? And there was another problem when Lu Mingfei used the sixth level instant, and after adding time to zero, he was injured because he was too fast. You must know that Lu Mingfei's own physical fitness is already at the level of an A-level hybrid. He also performed violent blood, which can also improve the physical fitness of a hybrid. And I remember time zero. No matter how much time is slowed down, no matter how fast you are in the eyes of your enemies, it will not put a burden on your body! It only takes a moment to put a burden on your body, and because the speed is so fast, you can't even see clearly the process of swinging the knife. So why did it take only six times for an A-level mixed-blood dragon scale to shatter, and the body surface to start bleeding continuously?

It's pretty good. I hope the single female protagonist will paint Li Yi and let the little monster appear soon.

I feel like at the end I could write a movie extra about the famous scene of killing gods and watching dragons [Thoughts]

It was a nice read, but I have a few questions. First of all, the scenes in Qiye Mental Hospital are a bit lacking. After all, he is originally the protagonist of Zhanshen, and the world is also Zhanshen. Although most of the readers are familiar with Dragon Clan, Zhanshen, but the mental hospital is not written much, which makes the plot of Qiye a bit abrupt, and many extraction abilities appear suddenly, which affects the reading experience. Therefore, should more plots of Qiye be added appropriately? The key is to improve the word count, especially for such an author who has a very short time [laughter] Is the Second Ming Fei too strong? Cross-border killing is too easy. At his speed, as long as he does not encounter the Supreme God or the strong person of the law of time, he can run away, so should it be weakened appropriately? After all, it is relatively easy to increase mental power in the God-Slaying World, so increasing mental power should also improve perception. Even if you can't match the speed at close range, you should still be able to react. In addition, the high-risk words of turtles, ramen masters, and little monsters in Jiangnan fandoms are weak after one use. Ming Fei's use of high-risk words ten times eight times is like drinking water, which is not consistent with common sense. In the past, Brother Shui's character Lin Nian pressed down on the Dragon King and beat him, which has been criticized by many people. If you want to write about invincible and semi-invincible flows, I won't say anything about it. Third, is the plot progressing a little too fast? Concubine Ming is always written about, and the plot is a bit monotonous. Can some small descriptions of other people be added, just to build the characters? Fourth, the author is too short. It only takes one or two minutes. Can you update it quickly? I read it in ten minutes after reading it for several days 🤦 It turns out that the dragon characters only have little monsters. I suddenly thought that Ming Fei's high combat power can save Nai. Lunbai might also be cured. I feel that they are somewhat similar to the little monsters, which can solve the alienation between the little monsters and other main characters. Isn't that what the author thinks?

The plot is pretty good, but how do I remember that Lu Mingfei is King Bai? The two characters "White King" combined mean "Emperor", which is orthodox, while "Black King" combined means "Mo". One stroke is missing, indicating that it is not orthodox. Lu Mingfei is the white dragon at the top of the World Tree, and Lu Mingze is the black dragon at the bottom of the World Tree. The squirrels crawling up and down the World Tree caused internal strife between the two dragons. In the end, the squirrel fisherman benefited and became the new Black King, and for the sake of orthodoxy, a new White King was created. (I have read too many fanfics, so there may be a bit of confusion. Has the original work mentioned it so far?)