Kill the God************

It's very nice. The characters don't have OOC. I just want to ask if they can have no cp. Qiuqiu, Mingfei is not suitable. I interact with Hongying every few chapters and hug him from time to time. I'm afraid it's cp Hongying again. . She is the only one in the team who interacts with her. .

Author, please, don't write about Death Zedian! ! More than half of the reason I like Dragon Clan is because of him. Our Zedian is already miserable enough, so let him stay with his favorite brother, and let Mingfei no longer have to experience losing the most important person (on the surface, Mingfei doesn't have a good look at Zedian, but in fact, she cares about him very much, Although he wants Concubine Ming's perspective, please don't write it to death! ! !

Can you please stop having CP? I really don't want Lu Mingfei to have CP [crying][crying]

It's pretty good so far, but I think Mingfei's strength is a bit understated, not to mention physical strength. How has Mingfei been trained by the principal after Long San? Her attack skills should be very strong. Mingfei's fighting skills are not shown very much. I also think Hongying is a bit like a senior sister. So the heroine is a little monster. Don't leave the harem. If you don't resurrect the little monster, won't it be Jiangnan? [Staring]

It's really beautiful, and I feel like the author's language is very awesome: "Welcome to join you, Mr. Lu Mingfei" [This night, I seemed to see again the scene when Professor Guderian met me for the first time. He also held my hand tightly, as if holding some kind of hope] by Lu Mingfei He was born to roar into the world Between each word, the spirit of words buzzes He is a person who lacks love. If others treat him well, he will naturally respond. It's ridiculous. He used to desperately want to escape from ordinary life, but now he regrets it. "When you have the chance to make a choice, don't regret it." When Lu Mingfei calmed down and picked up the gun, everything unrelated to the outside world seemed to be giving way to him, and only the thread of fate connected it to the target. On the top of the head are sharp claws that can tear it apart, and the rest are broken raindrops. Under thirty-two times acceleration, everything in the world slowed down in his eyes. He used to be cowardly and timid, but that was him in the past, and that him was already dead, dead in Hongjing, dead in Tokyo, and dead in the heart of that girl. Something for nothing. Losing your soul in exchange for ultimate power and power. Shattered into thousands of pieces, this is the punishment for the following offenders.

So far it seems to be OK, but there are a few minor issues. When Lu Mingfei used violent blood for the second time, it was only a violent blood attack, but it caused him to undergo obvious dragon transformation, with dragon scales growing all over his body. And I remember that this has to be at least 2 degrees, or even 3 degrees of violent blood, for a person to have obvious dragon transformation. Another problem is that when he used the violent blood for the second time, he also used the time spirit and the moment spirit at the same time. I remember that Lu Mingfei mentioned in the previous article that he also felt that this first attempt was indeed risky. But why did he pardon the people around him when he was using Time Zero, so that they would not be affected by Time Zero? This allowed most people to forgive the impact of Time Zero. I remember it was mentioned in the second part that this would put a greater burden on the user. Lu Mingfei was already in poor condition at the time, so why did he have to increase his burden? And there was another problem when Lu Mingfei used the sixth level instant, and after adding time to zero, he was injured because he was too fast. You must know that Lu Mingfei's own physical fitness is already at the level of an A-level hybrid. He also performed violent blood, which can also improve the physical fitness of a hybrid. And I remember time zero. No matter how much time is slowed down, no matter how fast you are in the eyes of your enemies, it will not put a burden on your body! It only takes a moment to put a burden on your body, and because the speed is so fast, you can't even see clearly the process of swinging the knife. So why did it take only six times for an A-level mixed-blood dragon scale to shatter, and the body surface to start bleeding continuously?

It's pretty good. I hope the single female protagonist will paint Li Yi and let the little monster appear soon.

I feel like at the end I could write a movie extra about the famous scene of killing gods and watching dragons [Thoughts]

It was a nice read, but I have a few questions. First of all, the scenes in Qiye Mental Hospital are a bit lacking. After all, he is originally the protagonist of Zhanshen, and the world is also Zhanshen. Although most of the readers are familiar with Dragon Clan, Zhanshen, but the mental hospital is not written much, which makes the plot of Qiye a bit abrupt, and many extraction abilities appear suddenly, which affects the reading experience. Therefore, should more plots of Qiye be added appropriately? The key is to improve the word count, especially for such an author who has a very short time [laughter] Is the Second Ming Fei too strong? Cross-border killing is too easy. At his speed, as long as he does not encounter the Supreme God or the strong person of the law of time, he can run away, so should it be weakened appropriately? After all, it is relatively easy to increase mental power in the God-Slaying World, so increasing mental power should also improve perception. Even if you can't match the speed at close range, you should still be able to react. In addition, the high-risk words of turtles, ramen masters, and little monsters in Jiangnan fandoms are weak after one use. Ming Fei's use of high-risk words ten times eight times is like drinking water, which is not consistent with common sense. In the past, Brother Shui's character Lin Nian pressed down on the Dragon King and beat him, which has been criticized by many people. If you want to write about invincible and semi-invincible flows, I won't say anything about it. Third, is the plot progressing a little too fast? Concubine Ming is always written about, and the plot is a bit monotonous. Can some small descriptions of other people be added, just to build the characters? Fourth, the author is too short. It only takes one or two minutes. Can you update it quickly? I read it in ten minutes after reading it for several days [face covering] It turns out that the dragon characters only have little monsters. I suddenly thought that Ming Fei's high combat power can save Nai. Lunbai might also be cured. I feel that they are somewhat similar to the little monsters, which can solve the alienation between the little monsters and other main characters. Isn't that what the author thinks?

The plot is pretty good, but how do I remember that Lu Mingfei is King Bai? The two characters "White King" combined mean "Emperor", which is orthodox, while "Black King" combined means "Mo". One stroke is missing, indicating that it is not orthodox. Lu Mingfei is the white dragon at the top of the World Tree, and Lu Mingze is the black dragon at the bottom of the World Tree. The squirrels crawling up and down the World Tree caused internal strife between the two dragons. In the end, the squirrel fisherman benefited and became the new Black King, and for the sake of orthodoxy, a new White King was created. (I have read too many fanfics, so there may be a bit of confusion. Has the original work mentioned it so far?)

She gave you a test paper and gave you full marks no matter what you wrote, but you missed the exam ---- But Eriyi still gave full marks

A rare dragon novel, but it's a pity that the author is not like the readers of the original work

I came in after seeing Eriyi's copywriting, [smile]

The structure is tight, the writing is good, and the plot is not procrastinating. The theme of God Killing connecting with the Dragon Clan is very novel. The overall feeling is good, but it is not enough to watch. As for the problem of letting people from the Dragon Clan world come to the God Clan World to reunite with Lu Mingfei, I don't think there are too many people. If Lu Mingfei does not join the Night Curtain next, I think it is necessary for the Caesar Three Group to form a separate entity. If the Night Curtain is added, it will be another matter. If all the main characters in the Dragon Clan come When it comes to killing the world, there are too many people and it is inconvenient to write. I think the perception will be slightly lowered. If every character in the book is satisfied, then the development of the plot will be uninteresting. Now that we have them all, what else should we work hard for? If we want to pass through, I think it is better to think about the main characters first. Caesar, Chu Zihang, and Lu Mingfei, these three are the core characters of the Dragon Clan, and the others are secondary (personal opinion) Appropriate addition of characters will make the image of the main character fuller.

It's so beautiful. As long as there's no cp, I'll keep chasing it.

Since I already have Eri Yi, I won't ask for more, and Nono can come out too. You have to be honest. Although Eriyi said he is a little monster, to be honest, he is not normal. He is just a child. Moreover, the senior sister basically paid for the freight and went through the most dangerous places, and sometimes even gave up her life to Lu Mingfei's senior sister.

It can be regarded as one of the best books I have read about Lu Mingfei. This one really recommends it. If there is too much to say, it is better to read it yourself. Well, I also hope that the author can persist in reading more. It may be difficult and there may be difficulties. In short, come on!

Just Oki Eriyi reappears, you deserve this five-star [cry]

Eriyi wins the Easter match, that's five stars

If I write, I will write a story about Si Xiaonan trying to take advantage of Lu Mingfei, but in the process she gradually fell in love with him and began to distance herself. However, during the battle between Cangnan Gods, Lu Mingfei asked her if she was willing to leave sincerely and then started to have sex, [laughing evilly]

It made me call Jiangnan the old thief, I'm ***, to be honest, I yelled so loudly at the time, but luckily my mother didn't hear it [crying] [face covering] After all, I haven't watched Dragon Clan and the fandom for a long time, and when I recall it, I was a little...,, Not sad that they died, but angry towards Jiangnan [angry] [face covering] [rolling eyes] Hey... Dragon Clan's writing is really good, but it's a pity that there are too many knives. All in all, this fanfic is very interesting, I recommend it.

Lu Mingfei's new book. The author's writing is pretty good, and he updates it twice a day.

The author hopes that there will be Eri Yi among the heroines

Can you write a side story and use Eri's sword again? [Laughter]

Will senior brother come out? Fast forward to Gao Tianyuan's circle of people and encounter the memorial (funny)

What would happen if Team 136 suddenly discovered that there was an extra set of dragons on the table?

Objective evaluation: You can look at it, but don't think about it deeply.

It's a great hack, and it's pretty cool to ignore some of the character issues, and there aren't a lot of magic changes. I highly recommend it.

I haven't watched Dragons, so I can't comment on the plot and character settings of Dragons, but it's really good to watch!

I'm very good-looking, but when will Eriyi come out [smile]?