The Sleazy School Beauty Doesn't Know How to Cook, so She Insists on Dragging Me in with Her

This is my first time writing a daily love story on an urban campus. Thank you all for pointing out a lot of points that I should pay attention to. I have read every comment and book review you have, and have replied to most of them. The content of the chapters has been slightly revised, and I take my advice [send my heart]. Although the first show is over now and the volume has begun to drop, I will still insist on updating it. Thank you everyone! Please give us your support!

It is a good book. As a love novel, it has the purity of campus and the reality of society. The emotions of the male and female protagonists are pure and beautiful, and their experiences are inevitable in society. The combination of the two makes the characters more three-dimensional and the personalities more distinct. But I gave it four stars mainly because some things were a bit too much. The characters in the book all have their own backgrounds. This is a way to shape the characters, but it is not explained clearly at the first time, which makes it feel like there is a darkness in front of you many times. Excessive procrastination is just a patchwork in the eyes of many people. Sometimes the plot that I thought would fill in the holes was still fooled by the characters, and one hole after another was left unfinished. Appropriate foreshadowing will attract readers' interest, but too many riddles will affect the quality. Sometimes expressing it openly will make readers feel enlightened. Just like emotions in reality, keeping it in your heart will not only make you uncomfortable, but the atmosphere you exude will also affect other people. In the end, too much pressure will overwhelm you. If you can talk generously to the people around you, you will not only reduce your own pressure, but others will also know how you are deep in your heart, and more people will be attracted to you. I think the same is true for novels, so I hope that certain plots can be completed immediately, and the subsequent foreshadowing is cleverly interspersed to make the plot clear at a glance and attract readers.

It's quite interesting, the plot is not deliberately procrastinating, the author listens to opinions, and has a lot of interactions, and it seems to be an autobiography, so I can tolerate it, but if you are really 66, author, then I'll see you on the rooftop [angry] [angry] @ a glass of wine hangover

It is a well-written book, with good plot and rhythm. There is no cliche plot about a rich family breaking off their engagement, and it does not whet the reader's appetite. It is also suspected of being the author's autobiography () [sneery laugh] Not much else to say, full marks here

This novel is overall good! But because the school beauties I read are all aloof, arrogant, and gentle, this school beauties are lively and cheerful with a bit of a splash, which is a bit inconsistent with what I read before! But it does not hinder this high-quality novel. If you are interested, you can read it! [Eating Melon][Learned][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript] (The male protagonist is also a must-have)

I like the values ​​​​of this book very much, and they are quite similar to my ideas, especially those about the relationship between men and women. How can I put it, the three views are upright, and the characters are not brainless. Other novels about ex-girlfriends and ex-girlfriends' mothers are very... Um... Very so-and-so. Being harsh and mean is good, but stalking is something I don't like very much. I don't quite understand the male protagonist's tendency to take action when he doesn't agree. Of course, it's my own idea. I feel like it's very senseless (it's not an Invincible novel, so why write it like this). Of course, I also have my own thoughts. It's to bring out the uncle and the subsequent plot. Of course, it's just my own guess. And the author, brother, I don't want you to write an autobiography [crying] (I don't want my brother to suffer, but I'm also afraid that my brother will drive a Land Rover). Come on, update quickly, I have read more than 200 chapters in 4 days, write quickly [smile][please update][please update][please update]

The author's writing is quite good, but the progress and so on feel a bit weird. I didn't feel this way when I was reading Su Baizhu and Luo Ye's book (the author has time to read it). Su Yi and Shi Yuan are generally very sweet, but ⬅️it's a bit early for such a big life event. Come on, author, I hope you can see it, and I wish the articles you write will get better and better [Top post][Top post][Top post] It's the book about the school beauty who never had any scandal until I went to college. The author hasn't finished reading this book yet, but I will try my best! Add more updates (about the senior You Yue you are discussing, I think a life without regrets is a regretful one, isn't it?) As for the emotional line, I prefer a slower one, and a faster one would be a bit unacceptable to me, but the author is really attentive and listens to advice, and the grasp of some details is still very good. Isn't Su Ziqian's private matter very... I get dizzy easily. Love stories should have the look of love, so there's no need to make things more or less. As for Wuze's urban-bloody plots, I personally suggest that there be fewer plots. Only ordinary life can be called happiness! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] Give you five stars to show your encouragement [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's super good-looking, and the plot is not sloppy at all. The important thing is that this author has something that he really teaches, and he doesn't hide it at all (PS: I just said that you can learn real things by reading novels [laughter])

I really have nothing to say, it's really good-looking, with three or even four updates a day, and it also interacts with readers and listens to readers' suggestions, and it seems to be the author's autobiography [smile] [smile]

The overall writing is very good, the writing logic and so on are quite good, including some of the things contained in it have a certain basis. The content of more than 1 million words covers emotions, daily life, cities, etc. The distribution of content is also very reasonable, and the plot is all natural. But I personally hope that there will be some follow-up plots, such as life after marriage and the development of subsequent children, etc. But the protagonists are two giants, and the follow-up development is not easy to write. I quite like the whole book. Cheers, author, send flowers [love]

I think this book is very good in terms of writing logic, plot conception, and character creation. The author's detailed description of the characters makes me feel that the author's literary quality is higher than that of many authors on the platform. I have read other romance books before, and their plot design is not good. However, the entire story line of this book is very reasonable and has ups and downs. The design is very clever. The score of 9.3 Is really incomparable with other 7-point books. I support the author very much. The author updates it basically every day but his writing is not lacking in quality. This makes me see the shadow of a great writer. The author must insist on updating. If the author can write a book by then, I will be the first to support it. Of course this book can be improved, but I still give you five stars to support you.

The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, making it enjoyable to read. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. This composition is novel in material, wonderful in conception, and vivid in language. The fresh breath of life and children's interest are revealed between the lines. The article narrates the events of... In the order of their development. The language is relatively fluent, the levels are clear, and it seems enjoyable from beginning to end. The full text has a bright rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun. It is a joy to read. The narrative of the full text is concentrated, without branches or branches, the language is simple and smooth, and the emotions are sincere and touching. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, making it full of wit and fun. It is hard to put down after reading it. The author has a clever conception, is good at selecting points to expand on, and the writing is full of ups and downs and is thought-provoking. There are many noteworthy sentences in the whole text, which adds some literary interest to the article.

It's quite interesting, the plot is well designed, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are also quite interesting. As for the female supporting role, I think You Yue is very good. I hope there will be a good ending. I also want to know which school this is based on. I hope the author will update soon. [Send heart][Send heart]

This second novel after the book shortage is worth recommending. Regardless of whether it is an autobiography or not, the protagonist's character is portrayed in great detail and Su Yi's love story is more like the author's autobiography. I have to say that the story is very attractive to readers from the beginning to the end.

Overall, it's okay. It's not too sweet as a daily article, and there are a few shortcomings that I personally think: (maybe a little spoiler) First, some plots are a little stiff and unnatural. For example, the curriculum should not be able to distinguish one work even if I write a paper. It is suspected to be a bit too formal. However, given the differences in real school curriculum, this is not a problem, but the look and feel is slightly worse; the scene where the heroine suppresses the Peng family is indeed a bit stiff, and it will be a bit awkward to watch. Secondly, the heroine's character in the early stage seemed a bit unruly, and she may have been a little discouraged. Now that she is in love, the author's writing skills in writing about love are not enough to transform the heroine's image into a beautiful one. As a daily novel, as long as the sweetness is high enough, the love writing is strong enough, the heroine's image is well-shaped, and the plot and early minor problems are not a problem, I will continue to read it. If the author writes better and better, I will review it with five stars.

It's a great novel. I like the first 200 chapters very much. Later, when fake death and feng shui appear, it's similar to urban supernatural novels, which I don't like. The first one is very sweet and great, but the second one is just that I don't like this type, but the author's writing is still great.

This book is okay. It's different from other books. It has the author's unique art. It's just that not many people read it. It can score very high. Come on. Also, can you see if the male protagonist is strong in multiple fields (he is already highly intelligent, you said it yourself). Anyway, as long as the match is good, you must coordinate the balance of relationship and status.

Very well written! The characters and characteristics of the male and female protagonists are well displayed, and they don't feel so boring and childish. The author hints that there is a plot behind the plot. The male protagonist's father has never appeared, so look forward to it. [Love]

Good-looking, the plot is reasonable and smooth, sweet

The writing is okay. It's a campus love story at the moment. It's quite sweet. The plot is logical and has foreshadowing. For example, the male protagonist's father is not sure whether he is dead or alive. If he were alive, I would be curious about how his father could bear to let his wife support a family by herself.

The plot is interesting. Although some of the plots are a bit cliché, I love to read them. These plots appear just when I am bored and arouse my interest to continue reading. The plots are still close to life. Unlike some novels, I think I can write a good love story after reading a few love novels (there are still some good ones). The plot seems to be made up at first glance, and there is no logic. This novel incorporates some of my own whimsical ideas from real life. Overall, it is quite well written. Although it was a bit boring at the beginning, it was just to set up the plot, and there was only a little bit. Kudos to the author [Like]

The author touched my heart. The writing style is really amazing. I hate Internet romance novels. Your plot is not cliche, and the knife and the foreshadowing are also detailed. The content setting is meaningful, the character portrayal is very vivid, and most importantly, the writing is very meticulous. Very few authors write like this. I really met a fairy author.

The first few hundred pictures are about normal school themes of love and affection. The next six or seventy chapters are mainly about business wars, which are very brain-burning. The last two or three chapters have some metaphysics, but not much. The protagonist's IQ is online. Those who didn't know it thought it was a rebirth novel. This book looks pretty good. You should read it slowly when doing business later. After all, it's quite convoluted, otherwise you won't understand it.

The writing is quite good, but they keep saying that the male protagonist is average-looking, and the female protagonist said that passers-by also said that the female protagonist is a school beauty, and they feel that their looks are a bit different, and they don't have the sense of CP that they imagined. I feel that if you match a school beauty, you should at least be handsome. Even if you are not handsome, your face can be more distinctive and attractive. But I didn't expect that a few readers in the comment section ran away because the male protagonist looked average. Other than that, which I don't mind, the novel is still very interesting.

After reading it for a few days, I have finished another romance book. The previous one was by Sister Congee (not intended to divert attention or provoke controversy), so that book gave me the feeling that daily life is sweet and full of life. I just started reading this book when I was in Shang Zhan I'm still not used to the ups and downs of the content, but after reading it, I felt refreshed. The ups and downs of the plot and the tight storyline gave me a novel experience. This book deserves a five-star rating. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

Sweet but not greasy, you can eat it with confidence. The plot is not sloppy. The regrets of the supporting characters are for the happiness of the protagonist. I personally think it is more interesting to read if you have regrets. It has already been 200 chapters and I look forward to the development of the main plot.

It's pretty good to watch, although it's a bit of a mass plot, but overall it's pretty good. It's a pity that there is only one female protagonist (it's not an autobiography, right?)

This book feels quite good to me. The first half of the article is about the love between the male and female protagonists, and the second half is about the family background of the male and female protagonists. A novel can feel two themes at the same time. It varies from person to person. As far as I am concerned, the first half of the novel is quite sweet, and the plot of the second half is sufficient. There is no problem, but it lacks some daily love life. Overall, there are no knives, and it is quite enjoyable to read. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's good-looking. As of now, there are no poisonous points or knives. It's a nice little sweet story. It's very comfortable to read. The male and female protagonists are well described. Even if a villain appears, they will be arranged quickly and will not make the reader uncomfortable. The rhythm is also very good. It's not ambiguous and uncertain like some books. When the writing hits the point, it just goes with the flow. Personally, I think it's a plus. The roles of the supporting characters are not particularly heavy and they don't steal the show. It's very good. I highly recommend it.

I haven't seen much of it, but I think it has potential, but it looks a bit like a multi-heroine, and there are a lot of descriptions of You Yue.