The Scheming Campus Belle Can't Cook but Insists I Move In with Her

This is my first time writing a daily love story on an urban campus. Thank you all for pointing out a lot of points that I should pay attention to. I have read every comment and book review you have, and have replied to most of them. The content of the chapters has been slightly revised, and I take my advice [send my heart]. Although the first show is over now and the volume has begun to drop, I will still insist on updating it. Thank you everyone! Please give us your support!

It is a good book. As a love novel, it has the purity of campus and the reality of society. The emotions of the male and female protagonists are pure and beautiful, and their experiences are inevitable in society. The combination of the two makes the characters more three-dimensional and the personalities more distinct. But I gave it four stars mainly because some things were a bit too much. The characters in the book all have their own backgrounds. This is a way to shape the characters, but it is not explained clearly at the first time, which makes it feel like there is a darkness in front of you many times. Excessive procrastination is just a patchwork in the eyes of many people. Sometimes the plot that I thought would fill in the holes was still fooled by the characters, and one hole after another was left unfinished. Appropriate foreshadowing will attract readers' interest, but too many riddles will affect the quality. Sometimes expressing it openly will make readers feel enlightened. Just like emotions in reality, keeping it in your heart will not only make you uncomfortable, but the atmosphere you exude will also affect other people. In the end, too much pressure will overwhelm you. If you can talk generously to the people around you, you will not only reduce your own pressure, but others will also know how you are deep in your heart, and more people will be attracted to you. I think the same is true for novels, so I hope that certain plots can be completed immediately, and the subsequent foreshadowing is cleverly interspersed to make the plot clear at a glance and attract readers.

It's quite interesting, the plot is not deliberately procrastinating, the author listens to opinions, and has a lot of interactions, and it seems to be an autobiography, so I can tolerate it, but if you are really 66, author, then I'll see you on the rooftop 😠 😠 @ a glass of wine hangover

It is a well-written book, with good plot and rhythm. There is no cliche plot about a rich family breaking off their engagement, and it does not whet the reader's appetite. It is also suspected of being the author's autobiography () [sneery laugh] Not much else to say, full marks here

This novel is overall good! But because the school beauties I read are all aloof, arrogant, and gentle, this school beauties are lively and cheerful with a bit of a splash, which is a bit inconsistent with what I read before! But it does not hinder this high-quality novel. If you are interested, you can read it! 🍉[Learned][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript] (The male protagonist is also a must-have)

The author's writing is quite good, but the progress and so on feel a bit weird. I didn't feel this way when I was reading Su Baizhu and Luo Ye's book (the author has time to read it). Su Yi and Shi Yuan are generally very sweet, but ⬅️it's a bit early for such a big life event. Come on, author, I hope you can see it, and I wish the articles you write will get better and better [Top post][Top post][Top post] It's the book about the school beauty who never had any scandal until I went to college. The author hasn't finished reading this book yet, but I will try my best! Add more updates (about the senior You Yue you are discussing, I think a life without regrets is a regretful one, isn't it?) As for the emotional line, I prefer a slower one, and a faster one would be a bit unacceptable to me, but the author is really attentive and listens to advice, and the grasp of some details is still very good. Isn't Su Ziqian's private matter very... I get dizzy easily. Love stories should have the look of love, so there's no need to make things more or less. As for Wuze's urban-bloody plots, I personally suggest that there be fewer plots. Only ordinary life can be called happiness! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] Give you five stars to show your encouragement [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I like the values ​​​​of this book very much, and they are quite similar to my ideas, especially those about the relationship between men and women. How can I put it, the three views are upright, and the characters are not brainless. Other novels about ex-girlfriends and ex-girlfriends' mothers are very... Um... Very so-and-so. Being harsh and mean is good, but stalking is something I don't like very much. I don't quite understand the male protagonist's tendency to take action when he doesn't agree. Of course, it's my own idea. I feel like it's very senseless (it's not an Invincible novel, so why write it like this). Of course, I also have my own thoughts. It's to bring out the uncle and the subsequent plot. Of course, it's just my own guess. And the author, brother, I don't want you to write an autobiography 😢 (I don't want my brother to suffer, but I'm also afraid that my brother will drive a Land Rover). Come on, update quickly, I have read more than 200 chapters in 4 days, write quickly [smile][please update][please update][please update]

非常欣赏你的写作风格，它充满了独特的魅力和个性色彩。在你的文字中，我感受到了你强烈的创造力和想象力以及敏锐的洞察力。你的语言运用得非常恰当得体，情感真挚动人，让人不由自主地被吸引。此外，你的排版和设计也非常精致美观，给人一种舒适愉悦的阅读体验。总之，我非常喜欢你这种独特而优秀的写作风格，期待你能继续创作出更多优秀的作品来展示自己的才华和魅力！

It's super good-looking, and the plot is not sloppy at all. The important thing is that this author has something that he really teaches, and he doesn't hide it at all (PS: I just said that you can learn real things by reading novels [laughter])

The overall writing is very good, the writing logic and so on are quite good, including some of the things contained in it have a certain basis. The content of more than 1 million words covers emotions, daily life, cities, etc. The distribution of content is also very reasonable, and the plot is all natural. But I personally hope that there will be some follow-up plots, such as life after marriage and the development of subsequent children, etc. But the protagonists are two giants, and the follow-up development is not easy to write. I quite like the whole book. Cheers, author, send flowers ❤️