Star Dome Railway: When the Ancients Watched the Live Broadcast, Everyone Was Stupid

Hey guys, I am the author. Let me talk about the problem of this book. It is that the first part is relatively slow, and I paid a corresponding price. Many readers said that the first part is very weak. Because it was the first time for the author to write a book, he didn't know anything about the Golden Three Chapters, and there was no one to guide him. As a result, he finished writing the first 40,000 words, and the progress was very slow. Later, when people read it, everyone gave their opinions, and I worked hard to make changes later. Therefore, generally speaking, the feedback from subsequent readers is good, and I hope everyone can be patient. Thank you very much. This is my problem, but I can't change it. I can only work hard now. If possible, please leave a message. Thank you.

I'll give it four stars first. It feels like a lot of history mixed with a little bit of gaming. It's more like taking a history class than reading a novel.

I want to see the pv of each character There are too many pvs that are shocking, especially the one about "What is joy" made me smoke. But I still like it very much, so I give it full marks.

Among so many ancestors who watched the movie "Collapse of Iron", the one about historical figures has the most reactions.

It feels okay, but I came here to get extraordinary rewards. I hope to be a saint in front of others after I get the power of destiny.

Children, run quickly, Shennong was poisoned to death.

It's okay, but the description of the game is a bit lacking. After all, it's a live game.

Wow! Here comes another one! The virus has spread! [Sinister smile]

The writing is pretty good, but I hope the plot from Ice Hockey to Fairy Boat can be shortened a bit. After all, those books have already been serialized, so it would be boring to read it again.

Path of destiny - Tao Star God——Taozu Destiny walker - ascetic Envoy - Personally passed down by Taoist ancestors Imaginary internal energy - spiritual energy of heaven and earth Various factions - major sects Just change it to a fashionable name

Why is a Romance of the Three Kingdoms inserted into a bunch of history?

After all, this kind of subject matter is rare, and it can only be given good reviews to extend its life.

The front part is too slow, but the back part is good. I support writing content that takes a different approach. The main story is too boring to watch.

After writing this chapter, can the ancients take a look at the Book of the Universe? It sounds super nice.

It's a pretty good book, but maybe the three ancestors stood at the end of the road and no one read it.

New book, there is a new book

The title of the book can be changed to, Live Broadcast: Star Rail: The Train to Eternity

I'm curious if the author will write a super showdown in an unknown realm?

It's okay, it's pretty good, as long as it's not full of nonsense like other novels.

Not bad, keep it up

Big cheers for the author!

Beautiful, highly recommended

The game could have a little more plot

When did you write The Migration of the Five Dragons?

The plot is very interesting, keep it up

Actually I think it's pretty good-looking.

When to put Otto quotes?

Just don't write a running account

Nice. Mu wood

Yes, I feel that it is the best one among the several books. It has the most descriptions of the ancients. I feel that if I continue writing it, it will surpass Little Pufferfish.