Red Mansion: Breaking into Lin Daiyu's House at the Beginning

It's quite good, at least it's to my taste. To be honest, many novels like Dream of Red Mansions can't control the pacing well. Some of them can be written for more than ten or twenty chapters for a small matter, and some are about fighting all the time. Those are all skip-reading. This novel is okay. I read it chapter by chapter without any desire to skip chapters. Apart from the unpleasant name of the protagonist, I don't have any other complaints at the moment. The above opinions are only personal opinions. Forget it, the Dream of Red Mansions fan fiction should be based on the garden drama, supplemented by other things. This novel is full of wars. I just finished the battle in Beijing and wrote dozens of chapters. I will go to Datong to fight alone and start over there. It is estimated that I will write hundreds of chapters. Then I will pick up Lin Daiyu and the others after finishing the story. It is probably the end by then [face covering] I want to read a story about war and hegemony. Why am I watching Dream of Red Mansions? Isn't Dream of Red Mansions mainly about these golden hairpins? Disappointed, I withdrew [face covering]

The author loves Lin Daiyu so much, he loves her to the core. If this suddenly happened and Lin Daiyu fell in love with someone else, it would be fun to watch.

It's okay now. I hope I won't collapse after arriving at Jia's house and don't lick hard.

I don't know what state of literary power I have reached now. I only know that I have actually read 70 chapters of this book. I feel that I am about to break through to a new level. This book is so spiritual that my Dantian is full. I am going to the lower world. Take a look. I hope all you book friends will become immortals soon. Bye, everyone.

Almost everyone in the Red Mansion community must rebel and become emperor, otherwise the Jia family will not be able to end well. Jin Chai couldn't be protected either. Although not every golden hairpin is worth saving, how can one miss it if he is a collector? This book is also a routine for practicing martial arts and training, as well as being good at both civil and military skills. A fanfic worth reading.

It's pretty good. I've read more than 200 copies of The Red Mansion, but only a dozen are top-grade. This one is rare. In Red Mansion, like other fics, the characters are all fixed and there is not much room for maneuver. I really admire the author for being able to write a top-notch story. It's rare for the author to reply to many comments, obviously he is very attentive, five-star praise!

The writing is very delicate, and the characters are well described. Although the ending feels a little rushed, it is time to wrap up, and the writing will be a bit long-winded. The harem is very good, and if the harem text is well written, it will be even better!

Now I have read more than 50 chapters, and I feel pretty good, but there are too many female protagonists. That's it, run away

I don't give five stars because I'm afraid of being blocked. After all, the age setting is indeed a bit too young. The plot is quite good. It feels like an invincible novel so far. I hope it won't involve the prehistoric era or anything like that in the future. It's also a bit short. Give it a try.

When the flowers fade and the flowers fly all over the sky, who will feel pity for them when their red color disappears and their fragrance disappears? The soft hairspring is tied to the floating spring pavilion, and the fallen catkins lightly touch the embroidered curtain. The daughter in the boudoir cherishes the twilight of spring, and is filled with melancholy that cannot be relieved. Hands hoe the flowers out of the embroidered curtain, and bear to step on the fallen flowers to come and go? Willow silk and elm pods are fragrant, regardless of whether the peach blossoms or the willow trees are flying

It's very well written, but it's a pity that it's limited in popularity!

Tsk, it's just not astringent, no details at all

[Pauses face] Hey, please recommend some Red Mansion novels that are not fantasy! ! I ducked my waist! Ran away! It's not that the author's writing is bad, it's my own problem. I can't stand fantasy, so I give it four stars! Don't blame the author, I'm afraid it will happen again!

So far it seems that the writing is very good. Anyway, I really like reading it. But Sister Lin is too young and it will take a long time to grow up.

After reading it, I can say that although there are flaws, I can see that the author put his heart into it! Okay, that's it, not much to say, overall it's pretty good. Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It is also top-notch among Red Mansion fans.

It's not perfect though! But let's pass the time and express the impossible fantasies in men's hearts! Still pretty good! !

It's well written and worth reading.

In addition to being witty and humorous, he is also quite perverted.

I stayed up all night to read it. I haven't stayed up late for a long time. The author is doing a lot of harm to others. The key is that it's really not enough to watch.

It's a pretty good fanfic. Although I don't read the original Dream of Red Mansions, I still like the background. Although the changes are a bit big, I think it's pretty good [Please update][Please update]

This is a very high-quality book in Red Mansions. There are no major flaws. Except for the loose content in the early stage and the incoherence of some articles caused by revisions, the plot is worth reading.

Don't ask for anything else, just finish writing.

There are so many restrictions, it feels like a spider web

It works. It's all the black room's fault.

Give the author some encouragement.

It's very good. If you can, you can help the world. If you are so poor that you have many wives and concubines, you have achieved it.

Generally speaking, there is no problem. A little thorn is harmless.

Good guy, my eyes hurt when I watched it, but I finished reading it. I thought it was over, but I found out that it was still serialized. It's a surprise, I hope the plot doesn't collapse later.

Very organized and consistent with the historical situation of ancient literature Author, won't you lose it?