In the City, I Stole the Protagonist and Villain’s Homes

MD is grinding, killing if you can, and harvesting if you can. After more than ten years, the system will become a god? And your system is very rubbish. You can't see other people being reborn, or traveling through books, or other people's systems. You all rely on your own guessing. And that Mu Yaqin will become good friends with Xiao Jingyu soon. If they can become good friends, they can sleep with each other immediately. Give girls away, what a fool. Our protagonist is still addicted to women. Didn't you say you want to take that Lin Tian away? As a result, six or seven chapters were written without even a shadow. The following chapters were basically filled with those who walked through the book or had systematic dialogues. The protagonist didn't even have a shadow😅😅😅😅 @

I gave the protagonist a passerby skin, but in fact it is still the same as the villain story. I support the villain story about opening a harem and collecting girls! But the author's approach is meaningless. When the heroine sees the protagonist, it's as if she's been poisoned by an aphrodisiac. She basically makes him sleep with a 100% favorable impression from the first meeting, and even gives him a double sex. This kind of thinking is not normal! Then the author is afraid that there are not enough women in the protagonists, and asks the system to send women😅😅😅😅The biggest difficulty in villain novels is that it is difficult to deal with the problem of female protagonists, because with the successive appearances of Destiny's Child, there are more and more female protagonists, and then the author will be like Alzheimer's, accepting one and forgetting one, resulting in nothing interesting! This author went against the grain, and I guess it's hard to avoid censoring this crappy book!

It would be better to directly write about the villain. There are many stories in it and it would be better to directly write about the villain. This is a mess, not to mention that the protagonist's presence is very low, and the heroine's presence is even lower. Let's say it's Liu Beiwen! There are no details of the fart, and the heroine is also very amazing. She sleeps with the protagonist for no reason and has a good relationship with her. There is no emotional line, and the heroine is someone else who helps her out. It makes no sense for her to increase the protagonist's favorability. Save by others. She's not as good as the protagonist looking at her. There's no explanation for your succubus body. Anyway, it's completely mindless🤦The subject matter is quite fresh and the writing is really bad🤦If it were changed to a pure villain novel with so many stories and the heroine is not a fairy, it would be awesome👍

There are too many perspectives, which makes people feel messy. At first, I eliminated Destiny and Villain at the same time, which was okay. It got a little messy later on. I wrote Destiny + the number of villains at a time, totaling 5, but their plots were everywhere. The protagonist was more of a stranger than a stranger, and often didn't appear in several chapters. This is really a bit contrary to Tiangang. The plot of the villain and destiny can be fast-forwarded. All you need to do is where they go and what they do, and then add a few lines. However, what follows is a lot of nonsense, including a lot of boring lines for dialogue between several people. The subject matter was originally very good, but the author played a bad hand.

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It's pretty good. From Doute's perspective, multiple protagonists and villains are going on at the same time.

What's written in the front is okay, but what's written in the back is really hard to read. It's a mess. I want to ask the author, do you know what you're writing? It's nonsense, it's nonsense, it's like a tiger and it's like a mouse. I can't read it. How many books have you read? This is the first time you read something like this. Is it meant for people to read? Even a fool can't see it

After being born into a big family for twenty years, they are still very wretched and have no temperament. The evidence is Ye Chen's villain's twin sisters. Before meeting them, the protagonist's thoughts were so obscene. Also, I have nothing to do all day, and the whole book is about women.

This dream is okay. It's like a dream ending🤮

It's quite innovative, and the adaptation is quite good. It's true that there are too few chapters. Two chapters a day will take a long time. I'll read it again next year.