Set up a Stall to Sell Dali, My Brother from Jiangnan

Very good, even Qingfeng's description techniques are integrated into it, like a pretty face blushing, a small mouth curling, a small waist thrusting, and a small foot stamping. To make up for the regret, Li Mingshan and Chen Daoyi died in an egg hatching machine. Also, Qingfeng only mentioned "brothers and sisters" in the end, and those who consummated the marriage were Xue Xue, Lang Mie, Shanmao Sister, the blonde beauty, Mi Ye, Ladou Ying, Jiang Ning, Li Bing, Jiu Lan, and Warning Ji. Chong Feiyu, the immortal cultivator from another world, and Jiangnan's landlady's daughter, who is from the radio system, have all been mentioned in one stroke. The only bad thing is that the pace is too fast. It always feels like a trailer or a snapshot of a major event. Many plots can be opened up and written. For example, before going to Area 53 to get to know Jiang Ning, should he first get to know Little Hot Sauce? Otherwise, why would Jiang Ning be attracted to Jiang Nan in advance without the conch key? Another point is that it is really difficult for readers to empathize with things like experience cards. I hope that the Zhuxian Sword Formation and Dutian Shensha Formation can be upgraded to permanent versions after the times are used up. Just poor opinion. Four stars doesn't mean I don't like it, I just heard that five stars doesn't count as a rating. If it counts, change it to five stars. Looking forward to: Next is the American plot, the change in the battle situation brought about by the appearance of the main character in the melee in the metropolis, the main character dancing onion dance without throwing out the flaming sword energy, the encounter of Wu Liang, the iron bull, how the old man was attacked by Nan Shen, the escape of Jiang Ning and Jiang Nan, how the seriously injured Jiang Nan can return to the country without Li Bing's gifted spiritual skills, and whether the main character can gain the ability to store a small part of the wave-colored particles to open the door of the ten-color creation particles later. Very much looking forward to it! Come on, author! I am also looking forward to the catastrophe of a thousand stars that the two of them will cause together, and what the protagonist's domain will be. Come on, author! Finally, I would like to present one of my favorite poems in Dali, which comes from the chapter of the next moon core after the second lunar counterattack, the chapter title is "Monument": The sword sweeps away the eight deserts and the six autumns, Build the Great Wall to defend against enemy invaders. All the bullshit gods are thieves. The prosperous age is not peaceful and the emperor is worried. I just hate that this body will disappear and die, Time waits for me to ask the question! ————Emperor Qin

It's very interesting. The author's writing is very good. I hope the author can make up for the regrets in the future. Li Mingshan's slave mark, Li Daoyi who burned his life to protect the city, the parents who have never been masked, and the egg incubator killed by an angel. I hope the author can make up for these regrets. Please [cry]

This is the Dali fan I want the most. Now they are all slayers. Dali has almost no one, let alone slime. The plot is good, the description is okay, but it is a bit short. It is too uncomfortable to be a light bulb and let people feed dog food.

Come on, author, this is the first Dali fanfic I've ever read, and it's also the most interesting one.

666, I am a big fan of it. This is the best fanfic I have found so far. Good luck! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's true that there are very few Dali fans, and even fewer people want to find a protagonist like Jiangnan. I hope it can make up for some regrets. Some plots can be more detailed. It goes too fast and there is no sense of substitution. The original text can be brought in to feel the despair and passionate fighting in Jiangnan. This is a bit like a cool article. If you can, don't be so cool. Just slow down and change the coolness and still continue.

Author, do you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Establishing at Thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website will praise you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to hear, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want! Update soon! ! !

Super pretty and very creative. , It's just that the author updates too slowly. It's for Dali. I've watched it twice, hoping for a different version. , Not too sharp, not too sharp.

It's not much different from the original version. It gives me the feeling of watching the original version, which is really good and worth watching. What we often say about working hard is not that you don't work hard enough, nor that you compare your achievements with others, but that you sincerely feel that you are more than this, you deserve better, and I hope you can be treated well and favored, so don't give up and keep working hard.

As Tomato's only strong fanfic at the moment, it's generally okay. It doesn't steal the heroine. Those who are interested can read it.

Great fanfic. Depending on the situation, the heroine should be. Ye Ye and Li Bing. (Of course it's possible, Jiang Lan.)

I have read it several times. You are the first one to read it better in the fanfic. Come on. It's just that the update is too slow and it's easy to lose popularity. I don't dare to keep the book for fear that it will be gone. Speed up the update, come on!

Fast-paced and cool article! The prehistoric plug-in system! Come on together (๑ ͡° 蓓 ͡°) Judging by how long it took me to read, you can tell how valuable this article is! Xuexue recommendation

It's good to read, but it's a bit sparse. I update it every three days, with three chapters at a time.

Dali fanfic, one of the best written ones

The content is good, the protagonist setting is okay Rather than calling him the protagonist, I prefer to call him Jiangnan's humanoid plug-in

The writing is quite good, it is relatively faithful to the original work, and there are no poisonous points. There are still too few strong fans. Please support me [Love] [Love]

I think the most beautiful Dali fan

Come on, I've always wanted to read a novel about Dali, and I finally got to it.

One of the better ones among Dali fans,

This is a very good book. The basic content has not been changed much. The plot is very funny and humorous! Recommend! !

It's pretty good, but updates are a bit slow, but there are quite a few words, so it's understandable. It's so boring back there

Really wow! Come on, author! ! ! The only one! ! !

I don't want to talk too much about Dali's fanfic, it's good, it's good to read, more to come ^ω^, I feel like the author still doesn't follow it too much, it's not enough to read.

Not bad, not bad, very interesting. Please write an update soon. Come on, author✊

It's a very nice children's book. Small events have been changed, but the big events remain. I like this kind of fanfic so much.

The best Dali fanfic I have ever read, highly recommended.

It's really good to watch. It would be nice if the funnyness is closer to the original work [laughs][laughs]

Love to read, a good Dali fanfic

It is more consistent with the original work. I personally also like Li Bing [laughing][laughing]