This Time, I'll Make the First Move

Is the author probably in the system? Both stories are centered around the system, but one story and one written are really good. It seems that I have never laughed so wonderfully in all these years of reading novels. Keep up the good work.

The story written by the author is super beautiful. Ning Ning is strong and confident and never gives up. Jing Yan is gentle, single-minded and brave in pursuing love. The story of them running in both directions is very good, but it feels that the ending is a bit sudden and there are some minor flaws. Jiang Man who was written at the beginning later became Wang Man (a bit of a drama). There are also a few places where the heroine's name misses "Ning". I hope the author will pay attention next time, hehe. The author is really great, I wish you all the best, and I wish them happiness forever in the parallel world. We are destined to meet again, bye [please take a closer look]

It's very well written. If you follow Xu throughout your life, you will become a die-hard fan in the future.

Why is this book only rated 70%? It is better than the 85% rated books. The relationship between the male and female protagonists, which are very close to real life, is written very delicately. There are not many twists and turns about the female character, and it is not annoying and vicious. I especially like the father of his daughter. Every sentence is a joke. In fact, it would be good if the male and female two are together. Can it be balanced?

The description is very delicate, and the atmosphere between the male and female protagonists when they are together is very comfortable. It's a very heartwarming novel, there isn't that much intrigue, and the second female lead who chases the hero is also very cute, not annoying, she just likes someone. Even if the hero's father objected, the hero and heroine didn't make things difficult for her after they got together...

It's pretty good, it feels quite realistic and quite fictional. It's just a little short, I want to see the scene of them together later. I think the reason for meeting again after a long absence is because I met such amazing people when I was young, and it will be too difficult later on. In fact, it's probably because both of them are fierce species! Hahahahahahaha. . .

It's a good read. This is the author's second book. You can write more. We love to read it. There will also be follow-up stories about getting married, having children, and getting promoted.

It was pretty good, but it ended a bit suddenly 😂 😂

The writing is very delicate, the love reunited is so beautiful

The author's writing style is delicate, smooth and relatable, worth reading...👍🫶🌹