A Detective's Life in a Steampunk World

I have probably gone through it once, and the advantages are: the protagonist is worthy of the name "detective", the author has good writing skills, I should have asked Conan Doyle to write it (crossed out), I have gone through the first three golden chapters to see the world view and the protagonist's reasoning ability (this is very important), the supporting characters are flesh and blood and are not like NPCs who answer all questions, the villain (?) Is intelligent The businessman's crime techniques are quite clever. The heroine is also a detective and is white-haired (white-haired characters can bring their brains into the book). The male and female protagonists help each other. The protagonist has his own "Watson (male)" world view, which is very interesting. It is probably the British in the Victorian period (overhead version). Douban (crossed out) rating can be given to 4.3 (5 Is a perfect score) Disadvantages: The details are not handled well, there are many unnecessary psychological descriptions (suspected to improve the word count), the emotional description of the protagonist is a bit too "carved", it feels like a machine born for investigating cases, the plot is too fast (suspected of forcibly advancing the plot) Summary: The writing is good but somewhat lacking (less environmental description, it is recommended to add more, too much psychological description, it will hurt the eyes of the viewer), the main and supporting characters are human beings and not "NPC". There are too many main perspectives, it is recommended to add other people's perspectives, the protagonist's emotions are too light and like a machine (the female protagonist would be better if she has more CC) [crossed out], there is currently no emotional line (hopefully) Don't be too pretentious), it's better to have more foreshadowing. After all, detective novels are about recycling foreshadowing to explain and overturn the inference to the readers. The first-person literary and detective novels make this book necessarily not very popular (it belongs to a niche boutique). It is not easy to support the author with five stars for this book (after all, you can read the free novel) ) Extras: The author quickly updates Wattasi, Ernegai, everyone can do everything. Was my comment swallowed?

The logic is very strong and the writing is good, but the updates are a bit slow. You can add a bookshelf to keep it and read it again after the case is completed.

Can the heroine have more roles?

The details are very good, it's pretty good, but not many people read it, so I probably stopped writing after a while.

Very nice, this book.

How old is the male protagonist 🍉

When can it be changed? There are really not many tomatoes of this type.