I Started a Red Revolution in Ye Luoli's World

Let me state in advance that this book review was written after I read Chapter 135 (there is no after because I couldn't read any more), so I only express my feelings up to Chapter 135 here (there will be a reversal after Chapter 135, which will be discussed separately) First, let's talk about some of the good things about this book so far: the heroine has her own ideas and is very resourceful. The pacing is well controlled, and there are some cool moments that are all in place. The original characters are well created, among which my favorites are the forging fairy Duan Lingyi and the moon master Yue Heng. I think Duan Lingyi's portrayal is really good. Different from most fairies in Wonderland, she has a bold style and although she has calculations about others, sincerity most of the time outweighs interests. The love triangle between her and the Fire Lord and the Golden Prince is the main reason why I watched it now, because every time you see an emotional scene between the three of them, you will think: "Oh my god!! This is so awesome!!!" Even if you know that this is a conspiracy, Duan Lingyi will even withdraw directly without even a trace of nostalgia, and you will feel: at least the years they were together existed, at least Duan Lingyi really rescued the golden prince. The tacit understanding and companionship between them is real, and that long confession is enough to make the calculations in this relationship and the upcoming separation less painful. Although Yue Heng, the Lord of the Moon, did not have much time to control the empire, he really took on the responsibility of the word "king" and performed the role quite well. He corrects mistakes when he finds them, has the courage to reform, is tolerant of his people, and is generous and courteous to others. He has most of the conditions that a wise king should have. He is a true king of fairies. After praise comes criticism (containing certain subjective opinions) Some characters are a bit OOC, and there are too many private settings that change the world view. Many times, it feels like they are forcibly smearing and maximizing malice to fit the title. It is really written purely for the dark protagonist. First of all, the most serious one, which is also an important thing that promoted the development of the early plot, is the exploitation among fairies (I, Ye Luoli, have watched all 10 seasons except those six episodes, and I plan to wait until the 11th season is finished before watching it) Maybe the time span is a bit long (I watched it five years inland, but I still remember the general plot), but I really didn't see the kind of exploitation among fairies (not counting Mandora in the early days). Could it be because my eyes have always been on the protagonists? Or was it reflected sideways in the plot when I wasn't paying attention? The fairyland described by the author really does not feel like a fairyland at all, but instead depicts human society. There are also some people who feel that OOC is too serious, and they specifically name Peacock and Luo Li (Jasmine also has them, but they don't hate them that much). Peacock did have a arrogant side when she first appeared, but based on Peacock's character background, she would never say that she borrowed things from ordinary fairies and refused to return them, and she also had a somewhat domineering temperament (The author please don't say that I didn't write it in time. The article was published in 2024. Peacock's inner inferiority complex was reflected before the ninth season in 2022, and it is no different from the direct explosion after that) Luo Li gives people the impression that it is completely inconsistent with her identity as a loving fairy, and more of what the public thinks a bad princess should have. Arrogant, not taking others seriously, living a arrogant life, having small thoughts but no great wisdom, really just being black for the sake of being black. I'm not the main character, on the contrary, I don't like the main character. Xin Ling's forgetfulness of origin and turning a blind eye to the plight of Wonderland, Luo Li's wanton behavior, and Bai Guangying's speechless operation. . . . You can criticize them and say that they have a holy heart, are unreasonable, a bad person, a love brain, etc., But you can't deny that they do have things that make people feel bright (of course, these things are instantly dim compared to how they make people feel their blood pressure rises). At least Luo Li does have an enviable friendship with ordinary fairies like Liangcai and Jasmine in the plot. Peacock doesn't think she is superior to other fairies when she starts to pretend (she only thinks she is better-looking than them) After writing this, some people may say: If you feel uncomfortable, don't read it! ! ! But this book really attracted me, so I still insisted on reading it until now. However, due to some reasons, it was like a thorn in the throat, and I couldn't swallow it or spit it out, so I stopped reading. Therefore, I gave it 3 points instead of 1 point, because there are really good things about it. Overall, the writing is very good, but it's not suitable for me. I still recommend everyone to read it.

What a novel article. I re-excavated the animation "Ye Luoli" from my childhood, thought and analyzed it to fill in the logic, and then connected it together. Is it considered an alternative fairy tale background battle article? Not sure, but for now, it's worth a look. I don't know if the author will read it, but I'll give you my opinion. At present, the author's control of the rhythm is perfect, and the various forces in the vest are gradually gaining control of the say. However, this also means that there will definitely be major deviations in the plot in the future, otherwise I would be sorry for so much effort. This comparison tests the author's writing skills. Then there is the issue of the villain, which currently looks to be the royal family, a pure capitalist slave owner villain. But in the original work, the royal family has already declined. If they were to be villains, they would have to be recast as characters, which would be very troublesome. If you want the protagonist to become a villainous protagonist, then for now, the protagonist himself has too little motivation. The only one with a sense of mission is the Moon Master Vest. It just collects destiny energy, and it is difficult to quickly advance the plot. After all, it takes a long time. So I have to think about laying some foreshadowing, paving the way for the protagonist, etc., So that the subsequent writing will have some twists and turns. It's not impossible to have smooth sailing, but you have to consider many emotional lines. If you don't handle it well, it will be like the original CP, but with a different group of people. That's all for now, to summarize: Determine the protagonist's tendency and place the corresponding villain; Choose the direction of the plot, whether it is about emotion or confrontation; Finally, I can be sure of one thing —— The number of words is too few, the author has added a lot [shy]

It's very interesting, unlike most Ye Luoli fanfics, which help humans/fairies, or humans who are contracted by fairies/fairies who contract humans, it's very novel and interesting. The only shortcoming is that there are too few, and it's not enough to read.

Don't give me a rating. Well, I support the author very much. This novel is very well written [Love][Love][Love]. The subject matter is very novel and full of details. The relationship and way of getting along between the avatar and the main body is very warm. It is like a rich and harmonious family. The relationship is extremely close, very protective of each other and able to completely hand over each other's backs. The trust value and happiness are full. The development of the empire is also very exciting, exciting and exciting. I am very, very curious about how the empire will develop in the future. The protagonist is like the mastermind behind the scenes. How can he improve? After using them all, the force value increased sharply! ! ! As the saying goes, all fear comes from insufficient firepower*╭︎(˙º˙)╯︎* The reasons why I like this book: ①The lifestyle between the main body and the avatar is simply like a family that can shelter from wind and rain, not too warm at all. ②The creativity of the empire, I seem to see the shadow of China in the empire. As a patriotic person, I have an unexpected favorable impression of the empire. Watching this development, from being weak at the beginning to being strong now, I feel very excited. ③Secondly, I particularly like the character Yue Heng. He is cold, powerful and a bit sinister. There is a hint of unseriousness in the seriousness? He treats the Empire with all his sincerity, of course not only him, but also others, but I still like him more. He is also very gentle with Mandola and guides her very well! ! ! ④The settings of some of the little characters in the article are also very good, such as Qiluo and Xingduo. Don't underestimate these two little characters. They can directly sublimate the entire novel, allowing readers to see a more real and realistic life of the oppressed people at the lower levels. They make people feel sad but helpless (it is impossible to steal a cannonball and bomb it). They also establish a more perfect image for the empire and are the hope of the people at the bottom. I can't find anything else I like about it (ᗒᗩᗕ)՞ I really can't remember it, but it's well written and there are a lot of side descriptions. Hey, after saying so much, I don't know if it's right ૧(●´৺`●)૭ I hope the author will continue to update, and by the way: I will always support and keep my eyes on you <(￣ ￣)> Update There are too few articles, which is not enough to read (இωஇ). However, the prerequisite for updating articles is good health. Only when you are in good health can you hold a pen, otherwise it will affect your inspiration. If the speed of updating leads to a decrease in the quality of articles, then you should not go so fast. In addition, I would like to say: Happy New Year to everyone! ! ! The inspiration for the updated article is endless ╭(ᵔ_>ᵔ)╮Be happy every day and have no shortage of worries (me too!) Hiss, when I look back, I accidentally wrote so many words. (╯°Д°)╯ ┻━┻Shocked!!! Originally I just wanted to write a few simple sentences, hehe ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з Look! ! ! I finished this book in 12 hours of reading, and of course I must have read it several times (´◔‸◔`) Hope it doesn't stop updating! ! ! Absolutely not ≥o≤, it's not easy to find a book that I really like to read. It's really not easy to find a good book, especially the one about Ye Luoli (◢д◣) Oh yes, I forgot to mention, reading this book is like learning history. I am always bad at history. ಠ╭╮ಠ Is not bad, not bad, and I can also learn knowledge ( ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤ )

This is the first Ye Luoli fanfic I have read seriously. The world view of the original work was somewhat attractive to me, but I couldn't stand the plot collapse, the ridiculous amount of romance, and the overly distinct characters of the protagonist and supporting cast. I didn't follow the show at all, I just watched a few weird videos. In my impression, the original work is comparable to Douluo Continent in its world of love brain and ignorance, and is even worse than Douluo in terms of logic... This book clarifies the story line, the storyline is detailed and appropriate, and the characters are well established. Whether it is the main characters, secondary characters or NPC passers-by, they all have their own stories, which can be logically justified. It further expands the world view through the analysis of the original work and reasonable second settings. It is indeed very interesting, even I, a man, can read it. The protagonist's stance is also wonderful, and the clones' white and black characters are also very interesting. There are just a few updates, but with this momentum the author should be able to finish telling the story, so I'll push for updates every day.

I finished it after not sleeping all night. It's really good! I rarely come across novels that are completely in line with my preferences. Basically, I just abandon them when I encounter something I don't like about halfway through. In my heart, this book is the best among all Ye Luoli! Highly recommended! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

It's very interesting. It's written in a real world without much involvement in the plot. It's about the time when the love princess was just born.

To be honest, I really like some of the vests created by the author, and the characters are all very interesting! Especially Fluffy, they are simply adorable. These new settings are also very interesting. As for why it is not five stars, it may be because I think some characters are a bit OOC, but I know it may be because a villain needs to be created and someone needs to take on this role. Therefore, the character behavior of some original anime characters will be a bit far-fetched. But the main body is very good, each vest is very three-dimensional, the plot has ups and downs, some are sweet and some are sad. By the way, I find that most people's evaluations are too general and make this novel too perfect. In fact, I think there are still shortcomings, so I will avoid some minefields for some readers. I know that many people may not be able to stand the OOC characters in the original book, because the author added many new settings in this book. In order to make these settings and plot more reasonable, some changes had to be made to the personalities of some of the original characters to let them play negative roles. If you can't accept the big background changes, the OOC of some characters, and the removal of CP, then my suggestion is not to read it. This is a very novel theme, and the main plot is also about career development. The vests will have ambiguous relationships with the fairies, but these are all for a purpose. Friends who can't accept it are not recommended to watch it.

It's really good to watch. Machiavellianism and interests are the norm in the world. Only struggle and unity will make the world develop better. Let's take a look at this kind of plot from Ye Luoli's screenwriter. What is he writing? What was passed on? Is the author's fandom more in line with the development of the world? I like it! The author's book is beautiful! Please keep writing in the future!

So far, this book has not received a five-star rating. Its current rating is not high, just because there are too few updates and too few people have read it. Those of you who have discovered this book are blessed, it is definitely a treasure. The most important thing is that this book is logical. No matter what you do or what kind of language you use, it has a certain purpose, not because of the so-called blind impulse of love or emotion. It is gratifying to have strong individual abilities, but it is more difficult for a group to move forward, and this book truly achieves reform. He himself has a very fair and aboveboard goal to pursue, just like our revolutionary ancestors. What we do is just to live a better life. This is human nature. As long as the writing doesn't collapse, more people will definitely read it in the future. Although the character creation is already good now, there is still room for improvement. Through the advancement of some small events, the personality of the self-created character can be more reflected. In this way, the various settings of Ye Luoli's plot can be used as the background. The theme of self-created character vests can attract people who don't read Ye Luoli to read this fanfic, and there won't be any logical problems after reading it. In this case, it will attract more audiences. Of course, the best thing about this book is that its logic and IQ are online. This must not be lost. Adding a little bit of emotional drama, I really want to be friends with you, but you are tempted, what? I don't know, I'm completely innocent. I just want to be friends with you, why do you think so? Although it was promoted by the mastermind behind the scenes, he was innocent on the surface. It is this contrast that is the best. (I like ambiguity, single arrow is fine, so no cp is the best) Although I like to read the MJA text, the most important thing in the entire MJA text should be the main body. Although the main body does not appear frequently, it must be the most important! ! ! Ma Jia Wen cannot put the cart before the horse. Normally, the sense of presence can be low, but in important moments, the highlight of the body must be reflected. Of course, this is just my idea, I like this. (My personal preferences do not represent others) I personally think that when it comes to the creation of villains, only villains who are strong enough and smart enough can reflect the importance and strength of the heroine, so the creation of villains is also very important. So far, it is a very good book, with online logic, three-dimensional characters, and a very strong villain. There are also many characters who have not appeared, which is enough to make people look forward to it.

What a great article. It's the first time I've seen a fanfic that collects the history of physics, chemistry, and politics. There's no ambiguity about whether revolution is a true revolution. The revolution will eventually win. Long live the core values ​​of socialism (^O^)

Absolutely great book! No loss in investing! I feel like it is a very novel fanfic, and it has no surprises for me, a thunder and lightning mother. The protagonist Min Yun (Fairy of Destiny) is a time-traveling character. The other characters are all clones. The clones have emotional lines. Among them, Rongrong and Duan Lingyi have the most emotional lines. But don't worry, these two characters have been offline. I have read the latest chapter and I would like to ask the author @Careless Water for a Day. Can you take the Ice Princess away? I like A Bing very much and feel that she is not happy about the contract she made with Wang Mo (Also: there is no Pang Ying, only Pang Zun and Rongrong's unrequited love, Yan Bing should be gone, and Jin Luo/Jin Mo is gone, only Prince Jin and Duan Lingyi)

It's super good, as you can tell by how long I've been reading it. This is the first novel I've read continuously. It's wonderfully written. I've always been a very sloppy reader of ratings, and I don't rate it often. If it's not good, I'll give it three stars. If it's well written, I'll give it five stars. But this book deserves five stars! Well-deserved full marks! The title of the book seems to be more casual and funny, but it is actually about revolution (what am I talking about?). Each character has a distinct and three-dimensional personality. I can't forget Qiluo and Xingduo now. Why did I write them to death? I have always hated Wei Churuo because she killed Yiluo and Xingduo. Okay, now let's get down to business: you can watch it even if you're outside the industry. If you haven't read the original Ye Luoli, you won't feel confused. Min Yun (the protagonist) has no cp. , The clones (Zhouyin, Duan Lingyi/Ling, Yueheng, Rongrong, Shiyin, Wen Zheng) also have no CP. Each clone has an independent consciousness and a distinct character. Even the supporting characters have their own ideals and ideas (I think of Qiluo and Xingduo again [crying]). For example, Qiluo and Xingduo quoted a sentence from the author's article to describe Qiluo and Xingduo, "Facing the evening breeze of the forest, two free souls ran away." It was really shocking at the time. Qiluo gave up her "stable" life and ran away with the privileged fairy Xingduo. They went to the empire. They ran away for their ideals and ideas. I'm sorry for talking so much nonsense, but I want to say that this book is really wonderful, but I want to say that this book is really wonderful. Don't miss it [Sending Hearts] @ (Can the author write a side story about Qiluo and Xingduo? I can't forget them [crying])

Super pretty! ! Super pretty! ! ! The logic is clear, each vest has an online IQ, and the characters are well portrayed. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the front. Help, I really want to see the moment of detonation later! ! ! !

Invincible. The setting is really great. The author made a lot of personal settings. It reasonably explains many loopholes in the original anime. At the beginning, there are two opposing groups, night elves/fairies and ordinary elves/fairies. By liberating the oppressed night elves/fairies, we will establish an empire of equality, justice, rule of law and harmony, gradually win over the ordinary elves and fairies at the bottom, and liberate the entire fairyland... In the end, a three-party system was created to contain and guard against each other. (Human World, Muten Pavilion, New Wonderland) The author's grades in Chinese, physics, and history must be very good. The writing is good, and a lot of physics knowledge entered my mind in a vicious way. The protagonist and his avatar founding the country and engaging in external conflicts are very consistent with historical development. Mainly written about career. There are not many emotional lines. There are several pairs of CPs, but they all have their own setbacks, and few are normal.

It's okay, it feels like the writing is at a high school level, which is pretty good among Tomatoes. However, the author's grasp of the characters of the vests is a bit off. When reading, you will unconsciously feel a strange and cunning villain feeling, the kind of villain who is evil, which is a bit different from the pattern and ideological consciousness of real historical revolutionaries. It is recommended to polish it later. The plot of this article is good, but the overall shortcomings do not hide the good points.

It's great. This is the best book I've read among the derivative works about Ye Luoli. It has a large layout, and secondly, the perspective is different. Many derivative works focus on the big fairies, but this book starts from the bottom. In fact, when I first read it, I felt a little uncomfortable, because the impression, the image of the great fairies was too different from the author's creation, which gave me a sense of separation. My original cognition was competing with this book. This is also the reason for the stereotype. Although there are a few flaws in some places, the flaws are not hidden. The author has filled in many pitfalls and has to fill them in the official version of the plot. I feel sorry for the author. The characters in this book are well created, but the protagonist is not a good person. , Can only be said to be a fun-loving person with basic sympathy, but a gentleman's fault does not matter his heart, and she really made the outcome better.

The fun of Ma Jia Liu has never gone out of style (of course, the premise is that it is well written). The protagonist and the doppelgänger in this book have online IQs and are not simply love-minded (but they are not incapable of falling in love), which is enough to kill 90% of fan fiction. As far as Ye Luoli's fans are concerned, this book will definitely get a score of 9 or above, and the author is convinced.

The author has his own ideas about Ye Luoli's subject matter, which is quite enjoyable to read. Except for some secondary dialogue at the beginning, this fanfic is considered to be of high quality.

It's really, really beautiful. There's a lot of knowledge in it, and it's easy to understand at a glance. The author really saw Ye Luoli's anime very, very thoroughly. He imagined all the levels. The world view is really grand. This is the best Ye Luoli fanfic I have ever read. I really recommend you to take a look.

The logical framework of this world is simply amazing. The world view is very grand and will not be limited to one point. It can be said that if it were not for the small number of readers pursuing comprehensive comic novels, this novel would have already reached a high score of 9.6 Or even higher.

It feels like the author has written out the other side of Ye Luoli's fairyland. The plot is closely linked to Luo Ji's, just like reading a Machiavellian novel.

It's great. This is the best fanfic of Ye Luoli that I've read. (This is just what I have read, and I have no intention of comparing it with other Ye Luoli novels. If you think there is something better, don't worry about it, thank you)

It's so beautiful, I almost cried after watching it. So this may be a script, a script written by the protagonists, but I am still so heartbroken [crying][crying][crying][crying]. I just finished reading the last chapter and found out why I am stuck in the place where I need to know how to save Velvet Velvet. Please update it quickly. It is best to update Chapter 20 tomorrow.

I didn't expect so much when I read Ye Luoli before. After reading the author's novel, I realized that there are many events that can be traced organically. It's super good-looking and I really like it. The author keeps up the good work [Love] I wish this novel and the author will become a big hit on Tomato 🍅

The author is very awesome [sending my heart], Ye Luoli 2's creations are all about saving, blackening, and charming love brains (for saint-level fairies). It's the first time I see a different Ye Luoli wonderland.

So far, it looks really good. Can the protagonist be male or female, or should it be said that it is both male and female? I want to see the love process of other princesses and princes, I'm curious!

Super beautiful, indescribably beautiful. This is the best Ye Luoli fanfic I have found from Tomato, bar none! I hope the author updates 100 times a day so I don't have to wait!

It's really super good-looking, and it's rare to see such a popular piece of writing in fan fiction. Who knows? When reading this novel, I always feel like I am reviewing politics. Some people may not like the first few chapters, but if you read a few more chapters, you will definitely like it after reading it!

[Send heart] Wow, I found a treasure [Like]: Written from a new angle, let us see the other side of Wonderland. Each vest has its own unique personality. I like Forging and Moon the most, and there is also a red empire created in it. I like it even more. I look forward to the follow-up [exploration]. Come on, author, you are the best [Like] [Please update]