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I wrote it a bit too fast. I could divide it into paragraphs and add more scenes and psychological descriptions. The author probably has a lot of ideas, but his pen is limited and he can't write many of them. He can think about it again. In addition, segmentation is very important, otherwise it will be very confusing and the impression will not be very good. I hope that the author will greatly improve his writing skills next time he comes back, and that the book will be loved by more people. [Blowing kiss]

I like my wife's style and look forward to the author's continued efforts in the future. I have ideas but my writing skills can't keep up, and there are still a lot of foreshadowings in the early stages.

Stream of consciousness, there is a knife in the early stage

I really like the author's writing style, it's great! Come on! !