[Travel ability + cyberpunk + game invasion + strong woman + no cp]
copywriting
"Do you believe in God?"
"I believe it."
Because I am my own God.
"God will definitely bless me."
Qin Ximu clasped his hands together.
"God will definitely bless you." The preacher looked at her with a smile.
Qin Ximu shot through the preacher's head, and blood spattered on the statue. Qin Ximu's eyes were indifferent, "My god has come to protect me, where is your god?"
Someone dragged the body down.
With a "clang", the door was closed, leaving her alone to face the statue.
An unknown thing was staring at her from the darkness.
Qin Ximu lit the candle, clasped his hands together, and recited piously: "God will definitely bless me."
I will definitely bless you.
The copywriting part is in the fourth part
Pai Xia Lei: If someone likes the protagonist, he will die
Reader comments
Very nice.
But you can write more specific content. Many sentences are too simple. You can expand and write two more sentences.
The biggest problem seems to be that the plot is relatively fast-paced, and some parts are not clearly written, resulting in a bit of stream of consciousness.
And in terms of character creation, everyone talks very little and looks very cold. You can tell at a glance that they grew up in the same environment. They all have similar styles of doing things, and their backgrounds are basically decisive/brutal/nihilistic/action-oriented/crazy. It seems that the whole world is like this, and there seems to be a cold-toned filter when watching it.
Re-edited. Female amateurs enter the pit vertically.
An author who is gradually getting better. The plot is very smooth, and there are many elements that are integrated without being obtrusive. The elements include time travel, science fiction, supernatural powers, world integration (apocalyptic, ordinary modern, technological future), upgrade flow, strong protagonist, and enjoyable writing. The disadvantage is that the number of words is too few.
Editor 3: Come on, the more you write, the better.
I really like the character of the heroine, she is decisive in killing, kills those who threaten her, kills those that bring benefits, and sometimes shows a little kindness when she can. And a very important point is that there are many female supporting characters. I prefer novels with many female supporting characters. I just feel that the author is not very good at writing how to change situations. The subject is not very clear, and there is a lot of missing description, which makes the connection very unsmooth. It's like the next line is suddenly on the other side. I can't explain clearly. The article looks a bit strange, but I can understand it if I read it carefully.
Should I go to this one...? I'm not sure. Let me just say that I am commenting now that I have read Chapter 8. I feel that this book has unlimited potential. After observing it again, I feel a little excited now. The heroine is really calm and perceptive. Oh my!
It has strong women, many female characters, and the protagonist is a bit like a robot, very calm, cool, a killer, decisive, ruthless, and not merciless. It's a bit exciting to hide your identity and avoid being hunted. There are no insulting words in my impression. The disadvantage is that it is too short, and some places may be difficult to understand because of the ambush pen.
I was almost misled by the comments. It was very well written, and I felt like the whole world would attend my funeral if I survived, but if I didn't survive. There is a mystery about the heroine. I am curious about what she was doing before traveling through time. How can she do it so calmly? Five-star praise
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone watch it? She's such a strong heroine. She kills you as soon as she opens her eyes. Please don't stop updating it. Please, it's really beautiful.
If you like the heroine, she doesn't suffer, she has brains. The opponent also has a brain, it's not a boring plot like a flat push.
Looks good, this killer is cool
It's good-looking, it's so cool and refreshing [please update]
It's quite good-looking, and many of the female characters are very attractive. Although the heroine is ruthless, she does not kill indiscriminately. The heroine has a calm temperament, is decisive, and is very powerful (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Really pretty
Give me five stars [laughs]
Great. Come on, author. Don't be fooled.
It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it, the heroine is very strong! There are many secrets, one is revealed and another is revealed, it's beautiful! The author will update soon!
Very interesting setting, the heroine is very powerful and beautiful
I feel that the author has written it very well. The heroine is decisive in killing the enemy and still has some inner tenderness in the early stages. The plot doesn't drag on either.
Very nice. But you can write more specific content. Many sentences are too simple. You can expand and write two more sentences. The biggest problem seems to be that the plot is relatively fast-paced, and some parts are not clearly written, resulting in a bit of stream of consciousness. And in terms of character creation, everyone talks very little and looks very cold. You can tell at a glance that they grew up in the same environment. They all have similar styles of doing things, and their backgrounds are basically decisive/brutal/nihilistic/action-oriented/crazy. It seems that the whole world is like this, and there seems to be a cold-toned filter when watching it. Re-edited. Female amateurs enter the pit vertically. An author who is gradually getting better. The plot is very smooth, and there are many elements that are integrated without being obtrusive. The elements include time travel, science fiction, supernatural powers, world integration (apocalyptic, ordinary modern, technological future), upgrade flow, strong protagonist, and enjoyable writing. The disadvantage is that the number of words is too few. Editor 3: Come on, the more you write, the better.
I really like the character of the heroine, she is decisive in killing, kills those who threaten her, kills those that bring benefits, and sometimes shows a little kindness when she can. And a very important point is that there are many female supporting characters. I prefer novels with many female supporting characters. I just feel that the author is not very good at writing how to change situations. The subject is not very clear, and there is a lot of missing description, which makes the connection very unsmooth. It's like the next line is suddenly on the other side. I can't explain clearly. The article looks a bit strange, but I can understand it if I read it carefully.
Should I go to this one...? I'm not sure. Let me just say that I am commenting now that I have read Chapter 8. I feel that this book has unlimited potential. After observing it again, I feel a little excited now. The heroine is really calm and perceptive. Oh my!
It has strong women, many female characters, and the protagonist is a bit like a robot, very calm, cool, a killer, decisive, ruthless, and not merciless. It's a bit exciting to hide your identity and avoid being hunted. There are no insulting words in my impression. The disadvantage is that it is too short, and some places may be difficult to understand because of the ambush pen.
I was almost misled by the comments. It was very well written, and I felt like the whole world would attend my funeral if I survived, but if I didn't survive. There is a mystery about the heroine. I am curious about what she was doing before traveling through time. How can she do it so calmly? Five-star praise
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone watch it? She's such a strong heroine. She kills you as soon as she opens her eyes. Please don't stop updating it. Please, it's really beautiful.
If you like the heroine, she doesn't suffer, she has brains. The opponent also has a brain, it's not a boring plot like a flat push.
Looks good, this killer is cool
It's good-looking, it's so cool and refreshing [please update]
It's quite good-looking, and many of the female characters are very attractive. Although the heroine is ruthless, she does not kill indiscriminately. The heroine has a calm temperament, is decisive, and is very powerful (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Really pretty
Give me five stars [laughs]
Great. Come on, author. Don't be fooled.
It's so beautiful, I can't stop watching it, the heroine is very strong! There are many secrets, one is revealed and another is revealed, it's beautiful! The author will update soon!
Very interesting setting, the heroine is very powerful and beautiful
I feel that the author has written it very well. The heroine is decisive in killing the enemy and still has some inner tenderness in the early stages. The plot doesn't drag on either.