Siheyuan: Give a Stick Stalk to Squat on the Fence at the Beginning

Can such books be published on the platform?

The plot changes are very abrupt, as if they are done just for the sake of doing it, rather than the plot changing to the point where the protagonist should do it naturally.

It's well written, but the paragraphs are too big. It would be better to have more detailed paragraphs, more dialogue, and express the inner monologue from the side.