Siheyuan: From the Start, I Send Banggeng to Juvenile Detention
四合院：开局送棒梗蹲笆篱子
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 201k Words
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
89Chapters
4.7kReads · all time
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The plot changes are very abrupt, as if they are done just for the sake of doing it, rather than the plot changing to the point where the protagonist should do it naturally.
It's well written, but the paragraphs are too big. It would be better to have more detailed paragraphs, more dialogue, and express the inner monologue from the side.