Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Ten Thousand Spirits Pearl

"The overall style of this work is in line with my reading preferences, but there is still room for improvement. It is recommended to add some grand war scenes in the scene description, and not be limited to the perspective of the protagonist. You can focus on depicting the heroic posture of the Nascent Soul commander strategizing, and depict the grand momentum of the entire battlefield. In particular, the plot of the Nascent Soul Dzogchen monks breaking through the gods and triggering the war between the human sea clan can deeply depict their inner obsession. For each accidental event, three traceable hidden lines are buried. In terms of conspiracy and power, it is recommended to learn from the thousand-year-old fox's city and incorporate some officialdom wisdom, which can make the story more real, three-dimensional and in-depth. In addition, regarding the issue of obtaining resources for cultivating immortals, we might as well learn from five thousand years of Chinese wisdom and design some sustainable ways to obtain spiritual stones to avoid always improvising. This will not only allow the protagonist to achieve 'Spirit Stone Freedom' faster, but also increase the authenticity of the story.

I read 6 chapters one after another for more than ten days in a month, and then I couldn't help but read the book reviews. The author wrote 800 chapters. Let's not talk about the quality. There is definitely no shortage of imagination and hard work. Even though there are 800 chapters, there are only 800 people who reviewed it. The ratings are still low, or... Like me, it ruined the popularity of the movie at the beginning, or there were some things that were not handled well in the later stages. I left first, and gave four stars as an encouragement [facepalm]. From the beginning alone, I couldn't stand it. It's hard to agree with others. Maybe it just wasn't my cup of tea. [Facepalm]

It's really good. The low rating seems to be due to the details of the opening, which leads many people to comment after reading just a few words. The content is still very good, and the number of words is enough, making it worth reading. The author is worthy of having written three books about family cultivating immortality, which is good I am King Akaashi. I just read it every day when I am bored. After a while, I forget to read it again. After a while, I forget to read it. I curse a little and continue reading. If there are good ones, I forget about the old ones. This book seems to have both big and small ones, but the advantage is that it is large and full. The plot is readable. If the book is exhausted, you can read it. If you don't want to read it, it means that Tomato has something to read again [makes a face] [laughs evilly]

Without hesitation, Wang Zhaozhu stuffed the entire pot of silver marrow rice into his mouth, and then began to spin the "Five Elements Soul Controlling Sutra". Can I make my mouth bigger during the Qi training period, and can I stuff it all in at once? [Smile]

I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together!

The writing is very good, mainly because of the lack of ink. I couldn't stop reading a book before, so I wanted to find something similar, and I actually found it. The previous book had almost 4,000 chapters. It was okay to read from the beginning, but once I stopped, I couldn't read it anymore. The main reason was that the book was too detailed and I couldn't pick it up if I didn't read it for a long time. This book probably can be read after a long time, and it feels very familiar. Sure enough, after reading it, I went to see what other books the author had. When I saw it, I found this book on the author's shelf, I opened a farm in the fairy world, and the protagonist of this book gave birth to a child. A big family, with many female protagonists, is the only book with many female protagonists that can be read. The book Taming Beasts has never had a female protagonist. I like it too. Recently, it has two tool heroines, and only one son. This is good. There is no emotional drama. They are all family-style. The space accelerates the planting of alchemy and refining tools. The routines are similar. I just like them. Some authors want to change the routines, but they are criticized for nothing. Come on and update

To sum up, there was a little bit of poison in the early stage and a pure and refreshing story in the mid-term. However, the poison points have become more and more since more than 500 pictures. I will talk about the biggest poison points. First, the acquired Five Elements Dao Body cannot overcome the war, and after the war, it relies purely on magic weapons to fight against magical powers. It seems that this Five Elements Dao Body has no use except for the increase in practice. The biggest thing is that the protagonist's son is actually more talented in cultivation than the protagonist. Looking at the protagonist overall, if all cheats are given to his son, the son will be more like the protagonist [laughing and crying] Generally speaking, I may not want to overwhelm the protagonist, but the effect of writing it is such that the son is half happy and half unhappy. It is best not to surpass the protagonist and not to be in the same realm as the protagonist, otherwise the effect will be somewhat difficult to collapse.

There are actually hundreds of them. From what I saw before, this cheat might be a bit big, because everything from the mortal world to the spiritual world seems to be included. If the space is too big and invincible, it will be bad if there are fifty years, one hundred years, etc. In one year outside. This book should not be like the previous one, and write more about other tribesmen. He hasn't recommended it to me for so long. Fortunately, he hasn't recommended it. It's too little and not enough to read. Please read it first before commenting @

It's a great book. I've read more than a hundred chapters so far and there's nothing poisonous about it. The most disgusting novels about cultivating immortals are The Holy Mother, The Licking Dog, and The Stallion. There are none of the above books. It's worth looking forward to the author's support.

Although there are some minor points, it can be regarded as an excellent and enjoyable article.

For family stories, I still hope to have a heroine. It doesn't need to be too many, just one or two, and the emotional line should be well written.

It's well written, but I need a spiritual snake with the blood of a true dragon to be the protagonist's spiritual pet.

Not bad, overall pretty good-looking. For me personally, it feels a little fast-paced, but not too fast. There are some minor flaws! For example, the description of the family, after reading more than 600 chapters, is still about the few people surrounding the protagonist, and then there are the family rules and regulations. I feel that I can briefly describe some of the halls established by the family, such as the alchemy hall, the weapon refining hall, and the law enforcement hall, the hall that takes care of the elixirs, the fighting hall with each other, and the Baizhan Hall that enhances strength, etc., To briefly touch upon and enrich the content of the article. There are also more than 400 chapters of the Three Tribulation Dragon Eggs that have been released as soon as possible. I really want to see them!

The content is exciting, the cheats are reasonable, and it's worth watching.

It's well written, very good, but it's still something belonging to a big boss in the fairy world. The first level has more than ten acres of land, which is really a bit lacking.

It's really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

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The more you go on, the more exciting it becomes, and the more you write, the more interesting it becomes. There are many interesting settings in the family's way of controlling beasts and cultivating immortals, such as the cave in the body of the beast, the teleportation array between the caves, etc. It is a very safe and excellent trump card. The world view is grand, and the map can be switched gradually from one corner to the other. It is worth a look.

Very exciting! After listening to it for several days and hours, the author is going to write it quickly!

The writing is very good, not procrastinating, not too watery.

Very good-looking, my personal feeling about the beast-controlling family

The writing is quite good, it makes people patiently continue reading, and it's a little bit fun, but it's not mindless. [Blow a kiss]

Come on, the author is great

It looks good for now, keep it up [salute]

To be honest, I personally quite enjoyed reading it, and the writing was pretty good, but after reading the comments, I was afraid that the author would stop updating. Please give me a boost [please give me more updates]

It's well written and I look forward to your perfect ending.

Not bad, good-looking👍*. (๑･∀･๑)*.． . When will there be a heroine?

It's beautiful and well written, but the male protagonist's name doesn't quite fit his identity.

It's good to watch. More of it is not enough. There is currently no heroine. I hope there will never be one. I like to watch the bond with the pet beast. Hahaha, Modo Modo. I'm really afraid that one day the author will stop writing. I feel like no one will read it, but it's really good!

It's beautiful, why is the rating so low?