I Have a Narration in the Martial Arts World

A radius of thirty miles was reduced to rubble, and it was enough to be the emperor with a smile on his face. In the book Swordsman, the protagonist can turn a thirty-mile radius into rubble when he fights with Dongfang Bubai. How come the more he practices, the more he stretches his hips? Jin Yong's first magical skill in the Taixuan Jing is actually not as good as Jiuyin. A big project like traveling through world planes requires the protagonist's physical body as fuel, which is far beyond the ability of a nuclear explosion? The more I read, the more disappointed I became. All kinds of nonsensical nonsense was added in the back, and the dialogues of the supporting characters also had to be written that were meaningless. In the front, I wrote that the protagonist established a path of self-centeredness. He pretended to be cold and started laughing at the same time. He even accepted a servant and showed no emotion.

The author should be an old monster in the system. There is no problem with logic, and the plot is also good. There is no trace of pretense, no garbage emotional lines, only a heart that asks the heavens. It is very good. I have already recommended it to all the novelists around me [blowing kiss]

Okay, the first and middle stages are more interesting, the protagonist has his own thoughts and views on things, and the growth line is relatively clear, but later on it is a bit boring for me. How should I put it, too dissociated. Of course, I know what the author wants to express, but it doesn't feel well integrated. But I like articles that have my own (reasonable) thinking about the plot. Even if some places are not completely consistent with my views, it doesn't matter. I hope the author will continue to work hard and exercise plot control. It will be better in the future. I am looking forward to it.

Shen Nong's Storytelling: After a lifetime of practice, I have become a motor oil. I change my body in each world. I have practiced in my previous life and transformed myself into energy to travel through the world. This point is more difficult to stretch, and the classics suppress the combat power. At least I saw that I had changed my body after traveling through two worlds, and I had become a motor oil in my previous life.

Sigh... I am satisfied with reading it, but it is still too short and there are too few updates, author! It's cool to have no cp, to become stronger wholeheartedly, and not to be dragged down by the personal affairs of children [OK][OK][OK][OK]

I have finished reading the first volume [Swordsman]. It is very well written. It is the best among the Swordsman fans I have read. As an aside, looking at other fans and film and television dramas, it is obvious that the Jianghu people in the Song Dynasty have a very close relationship with the imperial court. There is Qiao Feng, who left the Song Dynasty and returned to the Liao Kingdom and became the king of the South Academy.

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was going to be some kind of heroine who couldn't compete with a time-traveling girl, which was a bit frustrating, but I didn't expect that I felt really comfortable after reading it. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and clever, can afford to take things on, and doesn't give the scumbag a chance. They are very knowledgeable and have an online IQ, so they will never suffer. 2. Jiang Yan, not much revealed, you will sigh after reading it 3. The writing is solid, the descriptions are detailed and vivid, and the beauty of ancient literature makes people feel comfortable. Yes, I am short of words and cannot describe it, but it is a very comfortable feeling. I think it's not a loss to invest in shares.

Why is it that the strength of the dungeon has not increased even though it has always been low martial arts → low martial arts → low martial arts?

The author's skills and insights are really high! (ᐛ )👍The analysis of martial arts and some characters is very accurate and unique!

As far as the three volumes are concerned, they are considered high-quality in martial arts. They feel like they were written by an experienced hand. They are very organized and logical in handling things and practicing martial arts, and they are very smart! This is not a mindless article! Although it is a harem-less version, it is a solid martial arts novel. In addition, I hope it won't be a prehistoric one in the end [laughing and crying] The original martial arts ended up being a prehistoric one, which was so boring. Really, I think it would be good if it turned into a mythical Da Luo or the inner universe.

After listening to 57 chapters, overall it's good. It's concise and the end is not lost, the intermittent plot is promoted efficiently, and the whole process is silky smooth. The only pity is that no one showed up at the end, which makes people feel that something is missing, empty, neither up nor down. There is no explanation, no one comes forward to show the saint, and there is no legend. For the author, it is really cool to pretend to be 13, but for the readers, it is a bit uncomfortable. It's like, a very good dish, full of color and flavor. Just after finishing it, I found a 2 mm maggot on the bottom of the dish. Even if you are not a reader, you probably can't feel it. If it is very popular, it will easily get angry and irritate the readers.

There is no need to involve the imperial court in this copy of Mingjian Villa. The only way to save the people in the Southern Song Dynasty is to start over and become emperor yourself or help Wanyan Gou solve the three problems of childlessness, second emperor, and confidence in defeating Jin. It is too troublesome, it is better to just change families.

This book is already a masterpiece of martial arts on Tomato. There is no brainless plot, there is no virgin bitch behavior, and there is no brainless sleeping woman. The protagonist kills decisively and pursues the truth. This is the martial arts in my mind. The only problem is the reincarnation of the soul. Every time I have worked hard for decades, I will show my face and be reincarnated. Then I restart the practice again. I can't stand it again and again. I really can't stand it. The current mass market is really not suitable for soul reincarnation. Many readers have given up after soul reincarnation. I hope the author has learned his lesson and will not write about soul reincarnation in the next book. I look forward to the author's next book. Come on.

Whether it is the earliest traditional martial arts, the later new martial arts novels, or popular novels, or the fantasy, fairy tales, and time travel after the popularity of online novels, it is actually the same. The author constructs a virtual world, and the development of the story and the shaping of the characters are expressed in words. If the virtual world can unfold in the reader's mind when reading, it means that it is a good work. This book should be considered a masterpiece. In future works, it is recommended that not only the protagonist be portrayed lifelikely, but the supporting characters should also be portrayed in a subtle way.

At first I thought it was another invincible novel, and I missed it a few times. I recently opened it and read it, and ended up reading it straight to the end. Let me talk about why I can continue to watch it. One is that the plot of "The Swordsman" at the beginning is no longer the continuation of the past, but breaks the plot to create its own plot. I have read many related fanfics, but none of them made people feel relieved and let go of their regrets. So I like it very much and have the desire to watch the follow-up. The second one is about martial arts. The author's martial arts setting is very good, and there are many great masters in the comment area. I still want to pick out some issues. My knowledge is limited and I don't know whether they are true or false, so I won't go into details. People who have read many novels about martial arts settings have a general idea. I think this one is quite detailed and well-sourced. The author can always tell you something (of course, it may be because of the author's poor word count [snickering] [smirking]), so I quite like it. Three is the protagonist. There have been many settings for the protagonist over the years, such as normal, strange, crazy, heartless, virgin, and so on. I don't know the word count. , His affectionate side is only for a few people, not much, but he will also find ways to strengthen the corresponding few people. After he leaves the current world, they will live better than before, and they will not be separated without him. He will also try his best to repay and erase the relatives and causal relationships related to the identity he occupies. This seems good to me. Unnecessary entanglements should be dealt with as soon as possible. Maybe it's because I can't do it in reality, so I like it. Okay, that's it, you should like the book after reading it yourself. I have limited knowledge and can't say more, so I won't say anything else. I like it, so I am willing to write a lengthy review of several hundred words so that others can also like it (oh, it can be used as a diary, haha). Finally, I hope this book will get better and better and more people will read it.

The plot is plain and gentle, not amazing, but not flawed either, just average. The protagonist is a genius martial arts idiot, and his character is as ruthless as written in the book. On the outside, he is as gentle as jade and a scholar, but on the inside, he is a god of all things. He is very cold and lonely. The protagonist doesn't kill people like crazy, doesn't pretend to be a slap in the face, and doesn't have the heart of a holy mother. She is the type of person who gets along with others by following the cause and the heart, a bit like the male version of Xiao Longnu who is immovable in love.

My suggestion is to finish watching Swordsman

The writing is very nice, the author's writing style is good, the writing is also very delicate, and he is very thoughtful, but I can't stand it, because I just delete the file and replay the next world, basically starting over.

What can I say, it's still pretty. The first world, Xiaoao Jianghu, is the best, and I can't say it's bad after that, but the more I watch it, the less I feel... Now that I've watched World of the Condor Heroes, I feel tired, but I can still watch it slowly. It feels like the male protagonist has been pretending to be a competitor, just like he wants to have a master's temperament, but what he sees is that he has a king's temperament... [The description may not be accurate, but it feels strange to watch it anyway. It's obviously the first world, even if I'm pretending to be a rival, I don't feel awkward... It's just weird... [Cover face] [cover face] [cover face] Personally, I feel that Xiaoao's writing is really good, just so cool. Five stars for the author's hard work in coding.

The transcendent perspective, the attitude that everything does not bother the mind, the ethereal and lofty perspective, is a rare good book in Tomato. (I am a male, and it is not very acceptable for a grown man to use a girly tone to express a man's tenderness and humanity. For example: Really? Okay? Is it okay? Is this it? I can't read this... If there are male readers, please read it with your mouth or try to speak with family, colleagues and friends in this tone. To clarify: I have no objection to the author, but I personally find it difficult to accept this way of expression. If the author thinks it's okay, please treat me as a fart)

I originally wrote a large article. Unfortunately, I didn't pay attention and mistakenly clicked on the automatic shutdown confirmation of the phone [laughing awkwardly], so let's talk briefly about it first. I am an old bookworm who has been reading online novels for more than ten years. I have read many books of all kinds in the past ten years. I read Qidian before, but I only read Tomato in the past two years. My feeling after reading this book is: it's good, it's worth reading. Don't discard this book because you think some parts of it are not handled very well. After reading it all, you will find that except for the later stage of becoming a Daluo Jinxian, which is too simple and mechanical, everything else is fine. I won't go into other personal analysis. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. In short, it's just one word. Look.

Respect the original work and don't express subjective opinions. It can be read in this way, which is good!

The organization is clear, the plot is smooth, and the protagonist's goal is clear. As for those things mentioned in the comments, they are all time-traveled. Does history matter even if we know it is another world? To put it bluntly, the protagonist has reached the top of every world, and he can do whatever he wants, there is no need at all! The protagonist's goal is very clear, to cultivate himself! The people who wrote negative reviews are not here to read fantasy martial arts novels, but to read historical angry youths. As for the protagonist's participation in the court, it is simply nonsense. The protagonist's goal is to have the highest resources to cultivate, and then continue to travel through the broken void. Intersection is also the cause and effect of the monasticism! I almost missed a good book due to negative reviews!

This cheat is good, this is a good cheat system that will piss off the host to death. Is this the cheat system being used as the comic source of this book? [Laughing and crying] This world of smiles and pride is also refreshing to me. I joined the imperial court as a Taoist, and the situation seemed to have become bigger immediately. It feels ridiculous to find out martial arts from the Taoist classics of my predecessors, but Mr. Jin Yong has set it up like this, and this is how the Nine Yin Manual was created; The changes in the entire Huashan sect are reasonable if you think about it carefully. How many people are educated when they are young will determine what they will become when they grow up. Those apprentices of Yue Buqun in the original play were actually not educated well. The Linghu Chong in this book feels like he was educated by the protagonist since he was a child. This book once again proves that Yue Buqun cannot teach his disciples! [Cover face] Finally, I hope it will be more exciting in the future!

It's very good. There is no cp in the article. You focus on the road, pursue strength, and constantly improve yourself. The protagonist's personality has also changed. It's a very good martial arts article. I like it very much! I hope the author will keep at it! I have a small request, can you write The Legend of Huang Yaoshi and The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty? I really like these two [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's pretty good. Overall, the content is tight and you won't forget anything. Although some plots are a bit too complicated, the overall look is good. I read miscellaneous novels, but I also read a lot of martial arts novels. Most of them stop reading after more than a hundred chapters. The more I read, the worse the writing becomes. It's not that it's not good, but it just goes wrong at the end, the context is not connected, etc. Although I don't have the ability to write novels [Please update me] [Please update me] [Please update me] [Please update me] This review is not good. The author said that writing novels is not my main job, so it doesn't matter. I feel pretty good about it. I don't have to be too neurotic and disgusting to pursue the reality of the original novel. Do you know what a novel is? I still feel shocked that you still pursue the real reality like SB. Very, this is written by the author in his spare time, but it is much better than other martial arts novels I have read. I really like it. I wonder if it would be better if the author concentrated on writing novels [code hold]. Anyway, it is this novel. I really love it [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [code hold] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please update] [Please] Explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Sending my heart]

It looks good, without the sticky love, love, love, Luo Liba Sui. The author's writing style is concise, and his skills are evident in the details. Although it is a familiar world, the supporting characters are not stereotyped or watered down. It is a work of conscience.

I look forward to the author starting a new book. This book is quite interesting and logical. Anyway, it is not as fast as other novels I read before. I read it slowly. The storyline is relatively calm. The first world is well written and is also the basis for the protagonist's thoughts and strength to continue to grow. It will not make the protagonist's strength quickly become stronger and abrupt, but will be more natural and natural. The sudden ending is unexpected. , And within reason, I feel that it is not easy to write in the main part. The world view is getting bigger and bigger, but the story of the low-level world in the front is more interesting. Unexpectedly, I remember that there is a chapter that keeps getting stronger. Through injuries and other factors, it continues to be low-level, calm, natural and logical. I hope the author will open a new book, change the way of thinking, add some original reading experience, or improve it [laughs] [laughs]. The heavens, martial arts, and ideas gather together

The plot is smooth, but the characters are not fleshed out. The author said that he would take his children out for spring outings, work in an agency, be marginalized, and be promoted in the middle of the novel. He mentioned that he went to the countryside with the leader to inspect, and found that the people there were prepared. It seemed that it was the first time they saw him, and he was curious, like a young man. The plot is a TV series from the 80s and 90s, like a middle-aged person. When I encountered an old classmate who I hadn't seen for many years and introduced a friend, I declined. I mentioned it to the readers in the book and it seemed that this situation was not common. The author should have been promoted and be able to manage practical matters. The author looks like a young man who is entering middle age. I guess the author is about 35 years old. He is a deputy cadre of the city and county government. He graduated from college and took the public entrance examination. The author is not busy at ordinary times, so he can update steadily. When he is busy, he can also update a chapter or two. Have you ever been caught writing materials for your boss? The coding speed is quite fast. I am very envious that the author was able to write this book under such circumstances. It is the life of my dreams. I hope that the author will be promoted step by step, preferably to go to Qingxian Yamen and write more novels. I like to read them. I was wrong. The author's life exceeded my knowledge, and I had only seen part of it. The author almost became Guo Jing!

I just finished reading Swordsman. I personally feel that the author wrote it very well. I recommend it with five stars. I look forward to meeting the protagonist in another world after Dongfang wakes up and seeing where Dongfang's path will go in the end.