Kill the God: Frost and Snow Jue Xiang

Reading instructions, the review is long, please read it patiently. It's pretty good to read. The author's writing is okay but the characterization needs to be improved. I'm looking forward to the next book. Here are my thoughts after reading it. As for other people saying that this book is charming to men, I really didn't see it. And about the word dream girl, I don't know how most people think of the word dream girl, but from the first chapter to the eighteenth chapter of this book, I I didn't see any meaning that the author is a dream girl. What I saw is that the author is a cook who likes the character Uzumaki and feels sorry for this character, so he created such a character to protect his cooking power. So, can I think that the reason why you say the author is a dream girl is because the protagonist in the author's novel is not like you? Haven't you ever imagined that you have the ability to travel through time and space to save your girlfriend and fall in love with him or her? It's true that you can't understand the thinking of some people. If you can't stand it, don't read it. The escape button in the upper left corner is not a decoration. Ps. I think the term "Dream Girl" should mean that if you like a character, you think you are the main palace of this character, thereby preventing other people who like this character like you from liking this character. For example, in the second game, there is a character you like very much, and you push him or her, and someone directly says to your face, "I am the main palace of this character and you are the junior third, and use it to attack others. In my opinion, this is the dream girl, so I don't think the author shows that he is a dream girl." Let's go back to the matter of the author's charming character. In the first chapter of this book, the protagonist draws a concept-type forbidden ruin, which shows the fact that this is a powerful protagonist. So where is the charming character? And most of the articles have very little content related to male characters. How much description is there about Persona? How many male characters are portrayed in the Church of Truth? From beginning to end, only the whirlpool has more descriptions, but only a little bit. What's more, the whirlpool only appears later. Coupled with the author's own setting, is it necessary for a powerful protagonist to flatter others? It's already pretty good if others don't flatter the protagonist. I can't understand some Beibei's thinking. One final point: I don't like to read replies. It's useless to scold me because I don't care about you at all. Don't take yourself too seriously.

I think it's a God-killing fanfic, a transmigration, a childhood sweetheart, and I really can't refuse it! Although the author was depressed because of some bad reviews and didn't want to write. The plot is pretty crappy, but it's still worth watching. When I tried to write fanfic before, I found that nothing came out after writing for so long. I really cherish the author who generates electricity with love l I felt that there was quite a lot of sugar in the plot point. I was eating sugar every day (referring to losing each other's horses). The two teams were secretive and suddenly they were honest with each other, which made me laugh to death. Finally a single whirlpool cp article TvT l In the plot, except for being forced to be a doll and then pretending to be a family drinker, I didn't like it (because I feel that it would be better for the young couple to develop on their own, and I didn't like it when other people intervened forcefully without asking about their wishes). The other plots are all good to watch!

In fact, I think it's pretty good-looking, and I would say the same goes for those who say it's about the author… I'm a bit embarrassed to say it, so I won't say it anymore. . . I mainly think that when it comes to writing, the first thing is that I am willing to do it, the second thing is that I am willing to share it, and the third thing is whether you like it or not, and no one forces you to read it anyway. After all, it takes motivation (such as inspiration) to keep writing. Anyway, I don't have the perseverance.

It's so beautiful. If anyone publishes a new book, be sure to kick me. I really like this book. The characters are very distinct and have a lively feel. Axue has a plain grown-up feeling, which is very popular. I don't know how to speak, so I can't describe it. But I really like it, I really like it, and I hope that I will publish a new book. Tomato does not allow passion to write articles. This kind of writing is called naked updating. The kind that I write and publish on the same day [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] I hope I don't care about other people's opinions, they are so angry! [Cry][cry][cry]

Author, I like the articles you write very much. If you can also write original articles about the heroine CP Uzumaki, I will read it. Apart from you, the author, no one can write about Uzumaki. I just rely on you. It's okay if I don't write.

The teacher's writing is very good, but maybe it's because of the recent negative comments, so the teacher can't continue writing, right? But teacher, if you don't want to write, that's it. Teacher, you'd better adjust your state recently. If you don't want to write, you don't need to write anymore. I'll continue to see you after you adjust.

It's very interesting. The author doesn't have to worry about other people's opinions. Can he continue writing? I like it very much [cry][cry]

This is really beautiful! I just like this kind of thing that doesn't follow the main line. It's very interesting and novel! And it's really cool to create your own faction! The character setting is also very interesting! ! Nice! There must be updates every month!

Come on, author, don't stop [sending heartfelt messages] It's a pity that the author didn't finish it, alas. Bad words hurt others. I hope readers will be merciful and quit reading if they don't like it. Why should I say bad words to others? Accumulate virtue with your mouth. Don't argue. If you argue, I'm right. Yeah, you can be right, that's it.

Kill the God, the frost and snow will never sound The heroine, Mu Xue Male protagonist, Li Xuan (whirlpool)

The author's writing style is really good. If you don't like reading the person who scolded the author, then don't read it. Why are you scolding him?

Super pretty. Few people write about whirlpools

Damn, I think your writing is very beautiful. If so, can you continue writing? [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

A rare fanfic of God-Slayer Uzumaki. It's beautiful, the heroine is strong, and the emotional line is sweet. It's very suitable for my taste [Sending my heart] [Please update]

Nice, rare fanfic of Uzumaki, why don't you continue writing ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's so beautiful. Author, you must come back [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Oh, don't care about other people's opinions [Blow a kiss]

The content is exciting, the characters are well set, and the plot styles are very different.

I fell in love with the content of this book. It's so sweet. I love Chen Muxue so much.

Looking forward to the author's next book, it's very well written [love] [love] [blowing kiss]

Very interesting, the first cp whirlpool I read

It looks good. I quite like it. Come on.

Who said this article is bad? This article is great. The heroine is so strong.

It's great. Author, you don't need to care about other people's opinions. It's really great. It's very well written.

I think this is okay. Who is it? You are scolding the author for coming out for a beating, but you are the ones scolding the author for writing this kind of article! I can't even write this kind of article, so I blame the author. I think this article is very good. If the author hadn't collapsed, it would have been a very good article.

The author writes really well (//∇//)

At least it's a good read, and there are some moments of enjoyment. I gave it 4 stars because I didn't finish it.

The author writes very well! ! ! ! Don't let negative emotions affect your mood! ! ! ! ! You are the best, got it? Don't be sad.

Super pretty! The plot is super interesting, thank you to the author.

Happy New Year, author