The Ultimate Pokemon Breeder

Okay, I can say that my teacher values ​​me more. The teacher is a powerful alliance professor. He should know a lot of people, and he is also familiar with his grandfather. He knows that the owner of the incubation room is from Team Rocket and Team Something must have happened, people died, and then the protagonist appears as a savior to save the world. If a child at home says that someone is a bad person, are you able not to pay attention and investigate?

Typos, when can they be corrected? After reading it once, I found it was a bit too much, and it affected the viewing experience. I saw that the author added some self-created Pokémon, such as the official scrapped Flying Eevee, and the self-created Ancient Dogman. I can only say that it is barely acceptable, but it is a poisonous point for some people. I hope the author can control this level. Be sure not to add other things, such as Digimon, and Pallu. I have seen a few books that were very disgusted with the addition. I looked through the comments and found that there are many negative reviews, all about the inclusion of spirits that do not belong to Pokémon, so I hope the author takes this as a warning. In addition, I hope the plot of Longlongyan can be changed. It was a bit too exaggerated. I skipped through that plot, but the plot of Stinky Mud was okay. I hope the author can keep a certain degree of control, otherwise it will easily lead to negative reviews. There's nothing else. It's good to see that the author said there is no female protagonist. After all, in the animation, the characters like Sister Cabbage and the heroines in some regions are really unimaginable from the plot... There are also some Xiaozhi interactions that are good. If they are robbed, it will be really disgusting, that's it.

The writing in the front is pretty good, but the evil god Darkrai appears in the back and it feels quite baffling that he doesn't like it very much. Moreover, the protagonist's power to protect himself is not constantly being attacked by poachers.

It's very toxic if you get points deducted in a battle, so you can't refuse.

It's okay, but the setting of using four skills in the competition is too game-like. Then the setting of strength is unclear.

The rhythm is pretty good, but I'm confused as to why there is a setting of deducting points for battles. Can you tell me something?

Nice! It's very healing. It feels like following the Pokémon anime. There's no ambiguous plot. The Pokémon are cute and the children are cute too. I hope the author can continue writing and not stop updating! It's really beautiful!

It looks okay from the front, but an original Dog Man comes out from the back. ╮(¯▽¯)╭ He even gave away Marilou, who liked the protagonist so much.

The writing is good, and the plot is not too slow. After all, you have watched Breeder and you don't want to see why the trainer's battle rhythm is so fast. Isn't it just for people to write about the harmonious development of Pokémon? After reading so many books, Breeder is basically fine. As long as the plot does not drag on and the writing is still like this, I will definitely get a rating of 9.0 Or above.

There's a bit of a problem with combat power, but everything else is fine.