Perfect Life or Everyday Life?

I value the characters more than the plot. They must be developed so that all plots can proceed smoothly. Because their flesh and blood details are full, the overall plot has the possibility of perfection - in this case, even if I don't understand the subsequent plot, it will develop on its own, because everyone has their own position and personality. In this way, it is necessary to add some practical significance to it. Although it is a cool article with no logic, it must be enjoyable to read. At least it must look like that. There must be details and a shaping that is close to authenticity. At the same time, it must pay attention to some realistic issues so that it can have a sense of immersion. Woohoo, I am the author, I am talking nonsense, it is my first time to write an online article, I don't feel very good, but I will try my best! When the book test reaches 200,000 to 300,000 words, I may change the first few chapters. Do you have any suggestions? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] Changed to Chapter 12 2024.12.24 14:00:41 Changed to Chapter 15 2024.12.25 00:11:20 Changed to Chapter 17 2024.12.25 13:03:52 Changed to Chapter 30 2024.12.25 16:41:32 Changed to Chapter 60 2024.12.26 12:13:54 Changed to the latest chapter - book test started The book test is over 🤦 2025.1.1 23:12:44

I can't comment. In the latest chapters, 9 points of intelligence can only do this thing. It's hard to say, 9 points. In most fields, one can become famous at a young age. It's difficult. The difference between intelligence and physical fitness is too big. People with high physical fitness appear every year, and there are several in each province. However, only one person with high intelligence appears in the entire world in decades. There is no equality. This is a problem. That 9-point Su, I can't understand his situation. If 9 is compared to Gauss, it means that Su is one of the top five geniuses in the world for thousands of years. Your performance is too poor. Didn't you ask before that intelligence at 9 points is not all about mathematics. Gauss is invincible in mathematics and also has a great status in other subjects. At 9 points, he is among the top five in history (he loves Olivier). At 8 points, he can be regarded as Chen Lao in China. Chen Shengshen can be regarded as the first person in domestic mathematics (in my personal opinion, it can also be someone else). He is a rare genius in the world. The lowest is even in the mathematics conference. In terms of the ability to give a report, 7 points are among the top in the country, and one won the fourth prize in mathematics. That is to say, for this status, 6 points are considered a big boss in the eyes of ordinary people, and 5 points are asymmetrical as an average point. From a mathematical point of view, 5 points have been studied in mathematics more deeply, 4 points are in mathematical theoretical study, 3 points are about the average, and 2 and 1 are considered to be incompatible with each other. So I feel very uncomfortable looking at this intelligence rating (my problem) Only 4 points, I hope I can improve

Low, at least an 8-point starting point. The relationship is very sincere. The characters of the male protagonist and several female protagonists are also very attractive. There are not too many brainless links. The interaction between the male protagonist and several female protagonists is also very sweet. Although the setting about extraordinary abilities is a bit abrupt, overall it is still good.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is good. I really feel the author's progress in shaping the heroine (of course I don't know if the author deliberately failed to portray her well). From the sports girl at the beginning, to Qingmei, to Jiang Wanyu, to the stepsister, each one is better than the last, so the first two stand out. The heroine was not well portrayed. Until now, I think the masterpiece of the light novel is still "I Loaded the Love Game". It is so well written that Jiang Wanyu feels like Rin Kiyono, but it is too superficial and not deep enough. It is just a small feeling. I hope the author will get better and better. Happy New Year 🙂

It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like there aren't many people. First of all, the heroines are not too homogeneous. Basically every heroine has her own label. In terms of character creation, I personally feel that the best characters are Wanyu and her childhood sweetheart, followed by my sister (with buff bonus) (the heroine is to be determined), and finally Xie and the popular idol Li Yin (the heroine is to be determined). There are three levels. Needless to say, Wanyu's character creation is really cute, some of her childhood sweetheart's words and her feelings for the protagonist. I was quite impressed, and it really touched me. Although the younger sister didn't have much interaction with the male protagonist (compared to others), and her playing time was shorter, it was okay, and there was a sister buff bonus. Then there are Xie and Liyin. To be honest, they didn't make me feel anything special for the time being. Of course, Liyin is tentative, so I won't talk about it. As for Xie, maybe his ability is not well demonstrated and his personality is not outstanding. Anyway, I don't feel very deeply. Of course, everyone's experience is different, this is just my personal experience.

I read Chapter 52 in one day. The protagonist is indeed going to become a genius of Blue Star. Although the protagonist doesn't care much about relationships now, I am still a little curious about what will happen next. Come on, author ❤️

Although he looks like a human being, he is actually a god. I feel that his character is a bit too indifferent. Ordinary people should not be like this. I always feel that he is on the road to becoming a god and cannot have any emotions. But the writing style is very good and the expressiveness is also very good. The character issue may be supplemented later. The biggest problem now is that it is too short (¯へ¯)

It is a pretty good system novel, and it is different from the ordinary Long Aotian-style protagonists. He has his own independent thinking and is not a puppet of the system, nor is he the kind who can't walk when he sees a woman. I am looking forward to the future, and I would like to give a few opinions of my own. ① Improve the male protagonist's strength in all aspects, so that he has the strength to control the Shura field. It is good if there is a plan and goals to improve. Don't rise like a rocket, otherwise you will not have the thrill of fighting monsters and upgrading. ② I hope there won't be any mindless plots such as eating or buying a car. The classic law of being looked down upon by others ③ If there are more than one girl, it's pretty much what I saw in the introduction. Don't be ambiguous and give too many shots to characters who are not the heroine! Take a look at the time!

The writing is very good, but when I saw Chen Qingyan, I couldn't stand it. It's not that it's bad, it's just that I felt uncomfortable. It seems that there was such a child before, but he was not so lucky. He seems to have died in my memory, leaving only a body that indulges himself and cannot see the future.

It's a pretty good book. Although the first conflict is a bit tough, I still like it.