I Became a Digital Evil God and Ushered in the Supernatural

After seeing Chapter 60, evaluate it. The rhythm is very tight. It can be said that one chapter contains more information. The writing has lost some slowness and gained some rush, and the supporting characters have been flattened. It is worth watching. There are no big problems in the plot logic, but there are some small problems. If what the character is likely to do in the next plot, you can let the character imagine it in advance, or hint to the reader how the subsequent plot will develop through other descriptions such as personality, background, experience, etc., To attract the reader's desire to read on, that is, "breaking the chapter." The plot about the name of the sea god in the plot of the Water Mist Man is a good hint for the plot that follows. Godhead is in the weapon, and there is a price to pay for becoming a god. It is said that the Sun God's Fierce Sun Bow will be handed over to Yanlong, which implies that these two people may become gods and have the possibility of a battle. There is also the plot of Lin Hai's shadow. The characters of the two are typical of the kingly protagonists, with their bodies being weaker and their possessions being stronger. Moreover, there is a confrontation between the two to snatch the body, but it is not a fundamental contradiction. It is conceivable that after a long period of time together, the two will become like Naruto and Kyuubi. There are no other countries involved in the story stage, but two worlds. Five stars, looking forward to future developments.

The author remembers to mark the group portrait. How come the protagonist doesn't appear after reading more than ten chapters?

Good-looking, love watching, real behind-the-scenes I feel like system girls will be a failure, as the rewards for simple tasks are too generous. A country is so busy that no girl can be rewarded simply by completing a few tasks! It's better to write a well-balanced behind-the-scenes article 🤦

It's a pretty good group portrait behind-the-scenes flow. The protagonist has no sense of presence and basically doesn't show up. It's not like some novels that use the behind-the-scenes flow banner but end up with the protagonist showing his face and causing trouble.

Is the protagonist the source code that makes the game world real?

The writing is pretty good, but the Church of the Stars has too few people and needs to be strengthened.

This is one of the few tomatoes that looks pretty good. I hope the author will keep it updated.

Saw the latest, very good, good grass. It's good as a behind-the-scenes article, but there aren't any conflicts and the plot is a bit thin.

Not bad, it's very beautiful. It's a pity that it seems to have been discontinued. It has not been updated for 7 days now.

Currently, it is non-toxic