Demon Slayer************

It's really well written... It's great to have Xun by Mr. Yuanyi's side... Mr. Yuanyi in the original work has always belittled himself, saying that he is just a dust. He lost his gentle mother, his wife who grabbed the kite string, and his brother who gave him the flute. He lost a lot of things. He was obviously talented but failed to kill Wu Mei and was told that he would never have another chance until he died. When I saw this plot, I felt suffocated. It was clear that Yuanyi was a calm narration, but it was as if I could feel the sadness in Yuanyi through the comics. It was so thick that I almost couldn't breathe. A person leaves home alone and embarks on the road to slay ghosts. A person leaves the Demon Slayer Squad and wanders alone. So it's great to have Xun by Mr. Yuanyi's side, it's great to have someone to accompany him... My poor language skills are not enough to express my love for this book. It is easy for me to empathize, so I saw Xun touch Yuanyi who was sitting in front of his wife's body. The Lord said that Xun's eyes were very beautiful. Kaoru changed due to Kaoru, Hideaki made a flute for Kaoru, Kaoru committed suicide without hesitation, Kaoru shed tears on Yuanichi's shoulder, and many other plots were really touching... Kaoru cuddled up to Yuanichi, but Yuanichi didn't cling to Kaoru... This is actually my first time writing a long review but I really enjoyed this book. To be honest, I feel that the gentle breath is about to overflow from the words written by the author!

Superbly written! Ahhhhhhh❤️❤️❤️ Xun is so cute, a warm and kind-hearted, yet strong and thoughtful child. I also really like the portrayal of the family relationship with Yuanyi. It was as if I saw a big cat and a small cat Tie Tie. 🥰🥰🥰 Sui Suinian and the author's food travel are also very well written, but it made me feel hungry in the middle of the night🤤🤤🥹🥹 (the author planted ice rice) It's really to my liking. I'm still not satisfied with reading it. The author please update as soon as possible❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

It's good-looking. The protagonist almost doesn't rely on the system, but relies on hard work. The psychological changes are described in detail. The balance of Demon Slayer's combat power is not broken. It's mainly stories outside the plot line. It's very well written [please update]

It's really super, super, invincible and beautiful. The emotions written by the author are really incomparable and delicate. It seems that I can follow Tsukuni Iwakatsu to feel his mood: from unwillingness to be jealous of his younger brother surpassing him, to discovering that Kaoru understands him, and is even very similar to him; to his unwillingness to accept Kaoru and leaving him as a ghost, so he begins to hold grudges. And Kaoru can feel his initial desire to improve the relationship between his father and brother, to his hope to inherit the moon breath of his successor Iwakatsu, to his collapse and pain when he cannot accept that his master Iwakatsu shot and killed the lord who had taken care of him tenderly since childhood, and finally to his despair in thinking that his father is really dead. Enichi Tsukuni also wrote about the despair of losing the poem at the beginning, to living a good and serious life for Kaoru, to the sadness and worry of seeing his child injured and sick, and finally to the sadness when he faked his death. Author, how come you are so good at writing? ! Please, can you give me a few more chapters? Can it be done without cp? And they have already paid so much, so let them end it here. Wuxian, please get me off the leash immediately! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's good-looking, the emotions are very delicate, the language is coherent, and the protagonist is also very gentle. It's not the kind of movie that goes against the will of men. There is a process of the protagonist becoming stronger, and the characters are not OOC. I highly recommend watching it.

The writing style is okay, the plot is online, the characters are not OOC, the original characters have their own characteristics, the description is delicate and fascinating, I express my gratitude here [send my heart], and also urge you to update it here [please update]. Overall, it is very good.

The low-flow version: delicate, warm, not OOC, not cool writing, Small shortcomings: The combat power is a bit confusing, and sometimes there are typos (but rarely It is a very thoughtful and delicate book written by the author. Maybe I am personally more sensitive. I cried more than once while reading this book (👉👈). I feel that the author has a very thorough understanding of Jiguo Yansheng... Xiaoxun is a very gentle child... When I saw Xun handing an earring to Yuanyi, he really made me cry to death [crying]. Random thoughts: In fact, in the early stage, I always thought the protagonist was a girl (👉👈)

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This novel is really good. The protagonist is very gentle. From his perspective, we see the other side of Yuan Yi and Iwa Sheng. The whole plot is innocuous, the characters are vividly created, and the writing is delicate. It is worth reading.

The writing is good, the characters are well developed, the plot progresses reasonably and fits the original work, and the transitions and connections don't feel too stiff. I didn't search for culture and the like, but it should fit Sakura. I haven't read the rest of it yet. Generally speaking, it's an advanced fanfic with a score of 9 or above. I don't understand how it got a score of 7.2. Is it because there are too many rumblings in the front, but the rumblings in the main text are rarely within an acceptable range. Personally, I feel that it is at an excellent level among Demon Slayer fandoms. It is readable and highly recommended.

I re-read it several times but forgot to review it [laughs awkwardly] Generally speaking, it fits my fantasy of demon slayer very well. I thought Enichi was very handsome when I saw him for the first time. (I still like red-haired ones very much) ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ Although it may have been discontinued, it still deserves a five-star rating! So pretty! At the beginning of the school year, I would wait for updates every day. It's the end of the semester, when will it be updated? (It seems that a new book has been opened...)

A very awesome Demon Slayer fanfic!!!＼(◎O◎)／! The emotions are very delicate\^O^/The characters are not OOC (゜ロ゜) Overall, it's beautiful! It's worth recommending, and it's updated every day. It's a very good author (´▽｀)ノ♪ I would like to ask if Xun will save Qiantu later Σ(|||▽||| )

I think it's well written [laughs crookedly]

The article is very good and thoughtful, with a little bit of knives. The early stage is very warm, and the characters are plump and fit the original work. The ideas are clear and the plot is novel. Come on, please update more! It's not enough to watch. I finally discovered another book with potential.

Very beautiful! Step Kingdom Brothers is well written and not OOC at all. The early plot is very warm, and I really like the protagonist's daily life as Yuan Yi's son healing the two of them. However, the protagonist was too injured in the later period. I expected him to turn into a ghost and lose his memory. This would allow a lot more to be written, but I feel that it is a pity that the author did not plan to do this. The biggest problem is that this seems to be a trap

It's very beautiful. The author's emotional description is very delicate, but the update is too slow, which is a bit unreadable. But all in all, this book is really beautiful, and the subject matter is also very novel. The child who is reincarnated as Enichi Kuni is very beautiful, and the author's writing is also very smooth. In short, it is a perfect book, but I don't understand why the rating is so low? (◇)

This is the best Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever seen. I read it in one sitting. I felt no discomfort and couldn't stop. It's really great and beautiful😘🥰😻 Author Update soon🙀👀👀👀🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♀️[Sending Hearts]

You can really read deep emotions! I'm at a loss for words, all I can say is that it's very beautiful!

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Sky! The writing is great, the characters are not broken, the writing is good enough, and the emotions between the characters are well controlled! It's just a bit sad [crying] I hope the ending is better

Very beautiful, come on, big [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][sending heart]

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It's very interesting, the writing is very good, and the author is also very cute [I learned it]

The author writes well, the emotions are very delicate, and the writing style is also very good. Come on The author's writing is really good. Don't be fooled.

Super invincible and beautiful! Very warm feeling.

They are all good children [almost crying]

Another great meal!

I really love this

Super super pretty^ω^