Dao Luan: Players Enjoy Fighting and Don't Want to Be Fooled

I really like the author's writing style, which has the feel of a vernacular novel. Words such as "", " beside", and "" sound much simpler than "nothing", "others", and "throw". It has the style of speaking with an old sword from the Kamakura period. Moreover, the author is very knowledgeable. Not only does he understand the structure of the knife very well (for example, "cut first" refers to the tip of the knife, the protagonist said "burn it first, cut it first" which really shocked me. Most fans only describe the tip and handle of the knife. How can it not be shocking in comparison), but also has a high level of literary literacy. I can learn a few idioms while reading the article. Finally, the content of this article is my favorite - after all, the writing style can only be regarded as the seasoning, and the real feast still depends on the ingredients - I like the true feelings of this article, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, their emotions are natural and not pretentious (As an aside, I have become less and less able to read articles about cosplay costumes recently. The main reason is that I don't like to see a protagonist with a blank background or even a happy family disguise his tragic life experience through makeup. The tears of knives) And the tragic experience of the protagonist is very poignant to me. I am a lover of tragedy. The reason is that I feel that tragedy is a method of expression that is derived from reality and is higher than reality. I stubbornly believe that tragedy is the best ending. The sense of reality and heaviness it brings makes people breathless, fully mobilizes people's emotions and makes people deeply reflect. However, the happy ending brings only illusory comfort, just like fast food, delicious but not nutritious. However, I will not interfere with the author's choice. No matter what the future ending is, I have already enjoyed the present. I hereby leave a five-star review as a tip for this gluttonous feast.

The first and second volumes are what attracted me. I like the integration of players and the real world very much. The reaction of "NPCs" to the strange behavior of "players" is also very interesting. I am currently reading the third volume and am in the state of reading a chapter for a few minutes. It is a bit too sharp. The author's portrayal of the protagonist is also too weak and subtle. Logically speaking, he He has great power, but he always becomes... How should I put it because of mental problems... In short, he has a "miserable" look that is forcibly created. The description of his appearance has always been biased towards "fascinating" beauty (sorry, my subjective opinion, I don't really like this kind of over-description), which makes it impossible to see the "strongness" he should have. In addition, the mythological content added by the author in the third volume always feels like a drama, which does not fit the world view of Sword. However, the author's writing style is very good and makes people want to read more. This is also a point that attracts me, but I believe that some book friends may not want to see so many "self-created" settings. There are more "miserable" descriptions in each chapter (once the threshold is exceeded, it is easy to become indifferent to the knife content that may follow, and it is difficult to continue reading.) (A small suggestion, the author can write some light-hearted daily plots, so that everyone cares about the plot more, and the knife later will be more interesting~) There is also the emotional line between Odenita and Onimaru. If it is not CP-oriented, maybe there will be less plots where outsiders misunderstand their relationship? I have seen the repeated speculation paragraph "They are definitely talking, right?!", Which may be a bit discouraging for readers who don't like this couple (if so, pretend I didn't say it.) If it is cb, it is also very good. The complicated emotions between them are written by the author very well, that is... Can it be less "pushing" (Zhang Yu himself can't find other words for a while, so he can only temporarily use this derogatory description, sorry.) What about the description of the relationship between the souls? There is another point... Dadian Tai has a description of "sacred cutting" in the third volume. I know that the disputes between countries cannot be ignored now, and I am not un"patriotic", but suddenly seeing this in the article will still cause drama, right? What's more, this is a fanfic about swords. I always feel that something is wrong... Of course, this is just my opinion. If you have different opinions, just treat it as nonsense. Don't scold me... Finally, I just want to say that the author's writing is very good, although in my opinion there are some minor flaws, but... After reading so many sword writings, it was this writing that made me fall into the trap of "swords", and I fell in love with this "autistic white-haired man" Onimaru Kunitsuna, although his fandom is very little... Not enough at all... Cold and reassuring... In short, I look forward to the author bringing us better works!

Teacher, look at me! Oioi! Teacher, look at me! (Slaps belly) It's really a random essay that suits my taste. . The main beauty is strong and miserable + the brain teasers make me really sympathize with her. . . This is simply a state banquet! It's a lot of work for my wife to update her code——

(Just personal thoughts) Overall, I can watch it. There are a lot of knives, but it doesn't feel too sadistic. On the contrary, there are too many and I don't have much feeling. Moreover, the feeling of knives in the front is still inexplicable, because the previous plot is not mentioned, and there are many detailed descriptions, referring to physical and mental abuse.

Stick to Chapter 20. How should I put it? Appropriate torture is very interesting, and the audience's reaction is also very interesting, but continuous torture will only make people a little tired...

I have read Touken Ranbu fanfics which are pretty good, but when I saw the third volume, I had severe reading difficulties. What kind of series is Snake Country? It was originally created by the author. I couldn't read it and couldn't read it. They were all unfamiliar terms. For me, the novel stopped after the second volume. I could only read the contents of the first and second volumes over and over again, and then wait for the author to finish writing the plot of the Snake Country, and then see if I can continue reading.

The content and writing style are okay. I feel that the description is really on point, but it is too on point. When I saw the guy who was probably the consciousness of the world talking to the protagonist, I was really angry [angry][angry][angry]

Although it feels like torture for the sake of torture, the first and second volumes are very interesting! The third volume was a blur at the beginning. It added a lot of original settings and was a bit boring to read. Overall, it was okay. I recommend the first two volumes.

The writing is really good so far. To quote Onimaru's own control knife in the comment area, Onimaru-don can really always stab all the woos indiscriminately.

A story full of love, peace and healing? Is this different from saying that Magic Circle is a healing show? An Onimaru Push has been quietly broken into pieces.

The teacher's writing is super beautiful, but there are too many words in each paragraph, which is a bit hard on the eyes when reading. I beg the teacher to have fewer words in each paragraph.

It's nice to look at. I just like this kind of knife with a cheerful (?) Inside it. No, it should be said that the knife is hidden in the smile () I also love the setting of the protagonist. (Minor spoilers below) () But he said that he was good at pretending and didn't care about the harm. I thought the persecution he suffered was punishment or something, but I didn't expect that it also had color (anger). The old man was really humiliated in all aspects! ! ! When the protagonist said he would be humiliated, I thought I would kneel down at most, but I didn't expect... I didn't expect it! ! ! ! I'm so angry, you old man! ! ! ! But apart from anything else, the red camellia tattoo is really astringent (eyes avert), and it directly exploded my xp (ahem)

The writing is very good and sharp, but towards the end it feels like torture for the sake of torture, the torture is a bit stiff and numb. It doesn't feel that big anymore at the end.

As long as it doesn't end badly, I'm sure I'll love it! ! ! I really like how other characters are created by the protagonist. It's really fun. Hahahahahahaha~ I really like it.

Nice! Just love this peaceful feeling of madness. Compared with the kind that is always sensational and redeeming, this kind of harmonious and solid knife is crisp and fragrant. If the three-dimensional time is not limited, I can stay up late to tie it. Looking at the author's comments and interactions, it seems like he is in the job hunting period? That really resonated with me. When I was frustrated in my job search and career, I also loved writing short stories to repay society. Finally, I felt embarrassed when I saw a comment about the problem of segmenting sentences. I also like to write long sentences with a lot of attributives and transitions, but when I write it, I don't feel that it is really easy to have dyslexia when watching other people write [face covering]

I have to say that the author is very knowledgeable... The more I read the story of Izumo Country, the more confused I am. But overall, it is still a good book. A Huai's experience is really painful and painful... CP or CB with Mitsuyo-chan are both great, come on! Looking forward to your next volume!

It's so beautiful, but it's a little too sweet. It's so sweet that my heart aches.

My favorite book of swordsmen introduced me to the game Touken Ranbu, and I fell in love with this white-haired autistic man. From only a few dozen chapters to now, the happiest thing every day is to see the author's updates, so cheers! I will keep chasing [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's good to watch. The protagonist's experience is very distressing, but it's also funny to see others being harmed by him. Anyway, it makes me happy. I hope the protagonist can establish more bonds in the Touken Ranbu world.

Really good-looking! If there are newcomers who feel that the previous sentences and paragraphs are too lengthy, or are not used to the first person, please don't give up! It's been normal since about ten chapters! The writing is delicate, and there are many words that I don't know but it looks professional! The setting is very exciting for me! Roll and watch

It's perfect, it's so perfect, it's simply a peerless article. The writing style is so perfect that it makes me so immersed and mesmerized. It's so perfect, and the bond between the swords is so real. My heart warms and my body and mind are purified like spring. Hahahahahahahaha [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

The author writes very well, here are the arguments I gave: 1. The writing style is relaxed and has its own unique dramatic tension. The rhythm of the dialogue is just right. There is a full sense of conflict hidden under the plain narrative shell, which makes it very immersive when reading. 2. The emotional creation of the characters is very brilliant. There is no need for long paragraphs of straightforward expressions. Instead, the hidden resentment, shock, and confusion of the characters are naturally conveyed through the description of tone and expression, with a full sense of layering. 3. The narrative perspective is flexible and smooth. While the main line dialogue is advancing, the inner reactions of other characters are naturally interspersed, and the atmosphere of the scene is enhanced from multiple angles without appearing monotonous. 4. The language style is highly personal, with a sense of joking and seriousness blended into each other. The complaining lines are lively and interesting, and the words are vivid and not stiff when read. 5. The atmosphere is created very well. Just using the interaction and psychological activities between the characters, you can build a scene full of pictures, making it easy for people to immerse themselves in the atmosphere created by the story.

Very sweet, really. I personally tested it and saw that the knife has not appeared yet. I highly recommend this book to everyone. I quit after about the third volume. I didn't want to read it anymore. The back part was not good, and the front part was not good either. It was okay at the time, but now I feel it's really hard to continue reading. Editor 2: Add one star, the crime will not lead to death

I beg you, the author, it's so beautiful. Can you please add more? After reading your article, I have been beaten into the pit (Vertical into the pit jpg.) (Lie peacefully jpg.) My great master Qingtian, my Kamisama, my God, my Gugu Gaga. It's so beautiful. How could there be such a beautiful thing? If I don't see the follow-up, I will turn into a star in the sky and look at you with incontinence:) Woo woo woo woo, boss, boss, please update more, werwerwer──I love you, the author, see you tomorrow. They said, if there is an end to the urge to update, I will be the savior.

It's so delicious, it's so sweet, come and eat it, no, come and have some candy, come and have some candy, come and have some candy, it's so pretty, my family is so sweet, it's so sweet that I'm sick of it, it's been sweet to me for three days, and it still has a lingering power

You are so special. You are different from other writing teachers I know. You give me the feeling that I can write ten times a day. You are constantly writing, lively and interesting. You are just limited by the word count of 🍅. In fact, you should write more, but you are defeated by reality. You give me the feeling that Yu Hua wrote so awesomely. You catch my eye any time I see you. Even if you only wrote a few hundred words, I think there must be more in your draft box. It's just that you have your own protective film and don't want to be broken by the outside world.

The world view of Gu Tai is so sad. Alas, the protagonist is really miserable, but why is it so small? Come on, ma'am! !

It's a super good book... Although I didn't get used to it in the first few chapters, it became super awesome from the back! The writing is smooth and the plot is also very good [laughs] It also gave me a www, and (misunderstanding?) CP can be knocked! Teacher, please stay in this state and finish writing this book!

There are so many long and difficult sentences... I feel a little out of breath when listening to the book. It's a bit difficult to read, but the overall content is acceptable. If you have the patience, you can take a look.

Very nice, I really like this But because I read it intermittently, the more I read, the less I understood it. This is my reason, not the author's. Don't say the author, don't say the author, don't say the author For a person like me who has super fragmented time, reading a large paragraph at a time is still too forced, hahaha Teacher, please write more. Teacher is hungry.