The Disciple I Raised Is Definitely Not a Sickly Child!

The quality doesn't look like a 🍅 book [like] The logic of the entire book makes sense, and both male and female protagonists are growth types. The heroine's psychological journey has a certain clear context, which shows that the author has a good control over the portrayal of the character. The male protagonist's calm demeanor also appealed to my taste, and it was very comfortable to watch. The author's double-line description of the ups and downs of the development climax also adds to the plot a sense of tension about the impending storm. In short, I strongly recommend it, take a look and cherish it, 🍅 is like digging for gold in the waves, fortunately I did not miss [love] [love] [love] [love]

The author can clearly explain the single heroine in the introduction or label. Those who like pure love can see it directly. This also allows people like me who like multiple heroines not to waste time.

The first and second half of the book are really well written. It's been a long time since I've seen such a heart-stirring book. The characterizations are very vivid and the emotional transitions are naturally connected with the plot. It's a pity that the author got a little lost in the later period. Ever since I saw the male and female protagonists realizing that reincarnation and karma will affect their emotions, the plot and their various performances felt very awkward. It was very rare to skip chapters in the first and middle stages of the movie, but since I saw that, I have been skipping chapters. It's such a pity. But overall the writing is still very nice.

Wonderful and advanced, complicated and crowded. It is both deeply affectionate and humorous. After reading more than 180 chapters, I feel like I have lost focus after returning to the spiritless world. One of the male and female protagonists is deep in thought and self-righteous, while the other is letting himself go and completely messing up. It is hard to see how many ups and downs the plot has. Of course, it may be that I am not suitable for watching "decryption" plots all the time. I hope the author can slow down the development of the plot. I suggest writing more images of other characters. I always feel that the plot is too fast and the supporting characters become background panels. Of course, the two protagonists have to be described at length. A lonely hero is beautiful, but a united will unites people's hearts. I hope the author can continue to perform at a stable level and tell fascinating stories without losing the original intention of his creation. This is my first review of a novel, so please forgive me if it offends me.

This book is generally well written, and a particularly good point is that the psychological changes of the heroine are shown step by step, without being stereotyped. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The scene in which the protagonist is killed by the heroine cannot be said to be bad. I can only say that it is almost boring in all aspects and seems to be very flat. First of all, this is an emotional turning point for the heroine, but the length is only the words Yu Yin said and the memories of past lives. I think it is not enough to support the point where the heroine's emotions explode. This answer was told by Yu Yin to the heroine, but how could the heroine believe it completely? It would be better if the search for "Heaven" and the subsequent psychological changes of the heroine were included. Secondly, this section is a bit messy and rushed, mainly because the memories have been dismantled too many times. It doesn't matter if you spend a few more chapters writing memories. Too many interruptions lead to emotional choppiness, so having the main character killed off seems bland. As for the modern chapter, I am not too fond of this genre. In summary, I enjoyed watching it, and the flaws do not hide the good points.

It's very good. The plot is smooth and the plot is laid out easily. The writing is bland but there are no major problems. It's a good novel, but do you know why I gave it four stars? Because you have so little, you make me feel uncomfortable😡😡😡

Not bad, at least the story is told well. Although the protagonist's persistence is a bit strange, it's not a big problem. After all, it is just used to promote the plot. I hope it will be updated soon. I can't wait to see the scenes I love to see! [Shy] Speaking of which, I saw that the author said that he would simply go back, what should the heroine do, go find him in Shattered Space? I can't think of anything else, so don't make it a super sad ending [crazy]

1. This novel successfully attracted me to immerse myself in it with its unique narrative style and fascinating storyline. 2. The author skillfully uses rich details to create characters that are lifelike and unforgettable. 3. This novel conveys profound truths and values ​​by telling a touching story, making people think deeply. 4. The author has demonstrated excellent language use skills in the novel, making the story flow as naturally and smoothly as flowing water during the reading process. 5. This novel shows the glory and dark side of human nature with a unique perspective and imagination, allowing readers to gain a profound understanding of life while enjoying reading.

The quality is very good and the quality is guaranteed. It is a very good choice. Many friends want to buy it after seeing me using it. I recommend them all. The quality is very good. It is exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeds expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with my purchase.

The strange story of the villain in the book Gu Cheng traveled into the fantasy chapter and became the villain and caused trouble. The heroine is talented and powerful, but the villain knows that his life is on the line. Fortunately, the tragedy has begun ten years ago. The whole family was slaughtered and the blood was still wet, and the heroine was furious when she returned. Let's see if the villain's new plan can rewrite the old fate. The road to upbringing is turbulent, and the fate of the yandere is at stake.

After reading the whole book, I still have more to say. The story is good and the writing style is simple. It is rare to write a long review. First of all: basically all the foreshadowings that should be recycled have been recycled. The story has multiple female protagonists. I like it very much. It would be nice if the author's profile is marked. Some book friends think it is just a single story. There's no big surprise, emmm. If I have to say it, Bai Fulan's place is considered a surprise. Although it is explained in the book that the original body possessed Bai Fulan after death, but I can barely pass it. On character creation: First of all, I affirm that the male protagonist is upright and upholding, rather than a gangster. I don't like the useless or despicable protagonist character portrayed in some novels (unless he is like the Great Love Immortal). The confusion, entanglement and relief of the protagonist later are well explained. Next is the heroine in the book. What impressed me the most was Yuyin, followed by Shen's yandere, Qing's companionship, and [Shen]'s open-mindedness and cruelty. Fortunately, in the end, the story is complete. I really want to watch the second part, or follow up. And, looking forward to new works.

In the blink of an eye, I have been reading and chasing for so long, and it seems that it is almost finished? The characters in this book are pretty good, the writing is pretty good, and the updates are pretty fast. I won't say much more, just wait for the ending.

It's a very interesting book. I'm halfway through it now. There are a lot of Riddlers in the early stages, and a lot of the narrative interpretation rights rest with the author. He's a bit too led by the nose, and sometimes it feels quite sluggish while reading. Moreover, the heroine's upgrade process is too fast. The cultivation speed in her previous life has been incredible. In addition, the male protagonist spares no effort to help. The male protagonist has the system blessing to practice at the speed of driving a train, while the heroine rides on a rocket, the kind with extra gear. For example, you can understand the way of killing without killing anyone, you can master the way of desire if you don't understand love, and you can learn to control emotions. Don't worry about whether she understands it or not. Anyway, she will know it no matter what she learns. In addition, the male protagonist has a systematic training experience. In the plot, the male and female protagonists lack the sense of substitution that makes them stronger little by little. Putting aside the above shortcomings, the overall plot of the female protagonist killing the male protagonist has begun to pick up. The multi-line narrative style of the past life, the present life, and the nine realms and the soulless world is a bit like the original reading of Taoism. Nice.

It's super beautiful, and the knife is also unforgettable. Anyway, I like knives. After I returned to the earth, I felt that my mind was a little confused and I always didn't understand it. Anyway, I highly recommend it.

Well, after reading the latest chapter, I feel pretty good about this book. Many of the final touches that set up the story are also okay, giving people a sense of letting nature take its course. The author's writing style is very good, and the characters in the book are also fully described. I feel that the final rating of this book is It should be around 9.3~9.5. Good cheers, author. I look forward to the development of your subsequent works. They are very interesting and interesting. I feel that these first two chapters are paving the way for the third chapter. I believe in myself and I will be able to write good works. Good work, good work [Salute]

Okay, I can see the main plot, but I still prefer to watch the daily life between the female protagonist and the male protagonist. It talks too much about cultivation and paving the way. It may be because the female protagonist's cultivation is too low now. It should be better in the later stage. Come on. Come on, author, push the emotional line and use less foreshadowing. The plot is okay, come on.

To be honest, the overall plot of this book is very good, and the plot foreshadowing is also very good. The early and middle plots can be said to be the main attraction, but the middle and late stages are a bit boring. The main reason is that the male and female protagonists interact too little, or that the male protagonists interact too little with the real female protagonist. I read some comments, mainly talking about Yuyin, but if I really look at the past, Yuyin is actually not counted as the heroine's previous life. After all, it is based on Yao Yue's consciousness. It can be said that she is also Ruochu, Yao Yue, or a combination of the two. But I have to say that this setting is quite good, and the plot is very comfortable. And if I guessed correctly, Yuyin should sacrifice himself in the subsequent plot to help Chengxing and Ruochu. The chapters in the middle of returning to Blue Star are indeed boring, but the plot is actually quite fulfilling, and it sets the stage for the subsequent plot very well. To be honest, I was very excited and looked forward to the rest of the plot when I read it slowly. In short, the plot is not broken now. I hope the author will continue to work hard. In my opinion, this book is really well written and I like it very much. I am considering printing a souvenir copy myself. [Shy] What's more, this novel has a really strong sense of fate. It's reincarnation again and again, and it comes back again and again. To be honest, when I look at the end of it, I always feel helpless about reincarnation, and I feel a little regretful for the male and female protagonists in previous lives. Moreover, the description of Ruochu's emotional changes is really good. There is a hazy yet clear feeling that I really love her.

This novel is really interesting. The overlapping of various reincarnation memories and the contrast between before and after are really fascinating. The pursuit from life to life is emotional. Of course, there are some knives in this book. I never thought that there would be such a small moment that I wanted to cry. At the same time, the speed is quite appropriate [smile][smile]. I really look forward to the author's subsequent updates and other works.

A very nice Madonna novel, recommended by Shuhuang to read it

Looks good. Look how the heroine turned into a yandere.

The book is a good book, but unfortunately it is too short and makes people feel uncomfortable when reading the plot at the end (not that the author's writing is not good), and this book should be regarded as a male video, right? Why does it feel awkward at the end, the cycle of reincarnation is carried out from beginning to end but cannot be broken, and it lacks the spirit that most male videos should have (I can't help my destiny?), Overall it is worth reading.

Write slowly. To be honest, there aren't many novels with a positive outlook on things in Tomato. It's good if the protagonist is kind, but just don't write it to pieces.

Come on, author, this book is so beautiful, the plot description is so detailed, and the characterization is so detailed, but I personally can't accept a single female protagonist. It would be a pity not to include so many other female characters, so goodbye, author, come on, author.

It's good to watch, I love watching it, but it's too short. I really want to see the heroine win over the hero soon.

One thing I have to say is that it is really good-looking, and the ending is not too abrupt. Although I haven't finished it yet, I guess I didn't want to write it. There are too many emotional threads, so in a sense, there is a lot more behind this novel, and the author is not willing to let go of it at all.

It's good to watch, but I hope the heroine kills the hero at the end, and then runs to the hero's world to chase her husband, which just opens the second book

Hao Kanhao, look, this is what I want to see ah ah [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] Even though there was an exam the next day, I still saw [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] at around five in the morning, and fast forward to the heroine's collapse [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

It's a very good novel, I hope it won't stop updating [Like][Like][Like]

It has a yandere single female protagonist, the plot is interesting and has some depth. Highly recommended to watch.

Overall, it's actually okay. I quite like this book. It doesn't have any negative points for the general public. It just hit one of my favorite points. That is, the protagonist will go back in the future. If not, I will still follow it. The book is quite good and the subject matter is quite novel.