The System Raises an Army: I Begin to Rule as King

The overall management feels smooth, the plot and opening are good, but it is too short and updates are too slow. I hope the author will write well

"How can I sit idly by and ignore the fact that the common people are suffering and the imperial court is corrupt? I have an ambition to restore peace to the people and build a peaceful and prosperous age. If you are willing to help me, you will achieve great things." Zou Gongjin said solemnly: "I and you alone cannot change the overall situation. Although your words are kind, this move is extremely risky. If you are not careful, you will be doomed." Zou Gongjin drank the wine in his glass, stood with Jiang Chuan, and looked in the direction where Jiang Chuan was looking. "To be able to stand up to the current of the secular world, it is already a lot of hardships. In this age when ambition is hard to achieve and everything is hard to achieve, it is probably more difficult to get ahead and reach the Dragon Platform than to reach the sky." Jiangchuan picked up another cake and threw it into the pond. "Sir, please see, the water in this pond is calm and calm, but a piece of pastry can stir up waves. If the water in this pond remains unchanged, it will be a pool of stagnant water in the future. I don't know how many fish in this water can survive. Seeing such words, I can't help but sigh in my heart. Why are we not fish in the pond?

It's actually pretty good. I think the protagonist's IQ is pretty good, and the scene layout is basically reasonable.

Author, will you greet military commanders and civil servants in the future?

The writing style of this novel is smooth and natural, the plot is ups and downs, and the author's characterization of the characters is so vivid and emotional that I was immersed in the story. It makes people want to read it in one go. I really admire the author's imagination and writing skills, and look forward to more exciting works in the future. Please write more about the system. I came in because of the system. .

It can be fun to integrate some modern things 😳

I think this is the first time the author has written a book. There are many things in it that are not too concrete. I hope the author will work hard. The subsequent plot can be written better.