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Saw Chapter 59. The harem opened too fast. The topic selection is good, but the writing style is not a big problem. Well, the development of mobile vendors is also good. What can I say, if you like harem stories, you can read it. If you don't like harem stories, don't read it. Overall the architecture is good.

It's okay. I've read Chapter 104 so far. The various settings are quite interesting. The writing style is average but has improved compared to the beginning. If you are short of books, you can read it. It's a pity that it's about survival and starting a harem, and the description of the emotional line is not very good.

Survival in the winter: I am a traveling businessman Sleeping during the day to teach A pretty standard novel for a novice in the game survival genre. Goldfinger is more interesting, the creativity is also interesting, the plot is quite satisfactory, and the story development is not particularly new. The characters are passable and the plot is okay, but the main characters are a little less charming. Three and a half to four and a half stars.

The Traveling Merchant should be wandering around to trade with players, and can recruit some subordinates. In fact, the protagonist has better martial arts and can insert some transformations. If you want twins, it will take a lot of time. Although it is most likely because the carriage cannot withstand the low temperature. After casually looking at the catalog, I feel that he should be returning to the Traveling Merchant. There is also the part about Bai Xiaosheng's dragon egg, if you want the protagonist to get it, don't bind it. I probably haven't finished reading these opinions. Come on.

The subject matter is really good. You can completely write the world view in a larger size. There is no need to write a small h.

See Chapter 43, purebred licking dog [Like]

It's a very good lord novel, very innovative. It's okay in the later stages, but I'd better give it a higher rating for the sake of having more girls.

It's okay. It's much better than other articles, at least you don't feel like you've been poisoned and died.

I've read a lot about survival. This is the first time I've seen this game setting. Quite interesting. It's rare that I keep following you.

Come on, the birth of a new genre is always difficult.

Very well written, cheers

Overall not bad.

Interesting survival article

You can see it and lead the mainstream. The plot is very good

Very good, you can get into it

The back is pretty nice.

The setting is interesting and the plot is good.

There are some minor flaws, but it still looks pretty good.

The article about seeking "birth" starts with twin sisters.

It's still very good to pass the time.

Very interesting, I read it in one sitting

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

It feels like a mini game turned into a novel, it's okay

Not bad, the creativity is novel and the rhythm is very good.

A rare good book with clear thinking and rigorous logic. The author must work hard.

I think it looks good, and the plug-in is just right

Come on, come on, it's very nice, but some of the descriptions are still unclear. I hope I can improve it when I write in the future [smile]

Nice! It's really good, the subject matter is novel!

Seeing that it is still very good-looking now, I hope it will continue. In the later stage, don't be too invincible and develop slowly. Since it is a traveling merchant setting, let's continue writing in this direction and focus on more business plots. One thing is that everything can be traded online. Traveling merchants have nothing to travel to. The fun of going from one base to another is gone.

I can only say that the plot is not bad, but the setting of Youshang is quite good.