Quick Travel: Whose Cannon Fodder Can Become an Immortal?

This is called Immortal Lord, this is the Pure World upgraded nanny

It's pretty good. I saw in the previous comments that the segmentation problem was mentioned. I think it's been solved. It doesn't seem to be a problem.

It's okay, it's interesting, but not amazing.

. . . Well enough. . . It's just that the word count doesn't necessarily mean you need to use punctuation marks every day. . . I thought my display was wrong. . . .

The writing is pretty good, but a bit short, about twenty chapters.

Just entered the pit, it feels very good! And it's CP-free! Come on, I'm just too thin now and not good enough.

It's okay so far, and some in the comments section are right about being a babysitter for the world. Don't like to enter with caution

Writing is not easy, whether it looks good or not, give it five stars.

It looks good. I love watching it. Not bad.

It's fun to watch, come on author

Very nice and fresh

Ok ok ok

The story is well written