One Person: Starting from Trinity, Simulate Becoming an Immortal

Basically invincible, how long can I keep writing the original plot behind it? The protagonist is like a dog, his fighting power is almost immortal, he still knows the plot, he can be cheated by Qu Tong, he is forced to sit on the leniency bench by the company, and he is forced to ask powerful secrets by Bi Youlong, but the glass is smashed😄

A must-read for the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates. [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Okay, the plot is so powerful and it hasn't collapsed yet. The author has deep foundation.

In fact, according to the character and dreams of the male protagonist, there is no need for a female protagonist.

The writing is quite good. I just finished reading the latest chapter, but I feel that the pace has suddenly become faster and I am instantly invincible. I don't know what will happen in the future. I am looking forward to it. The Luotian Dajiao is not over yet, so don't finish it too quickly [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This novel is very interesting and enjoyable. I thought it was a novel without a heroine. I prefer novels without a heroine. I didn't expect that when I got together with Lu Linglong [crying], I couldn't stand it at all. It's so good but I just can't accept it [crying] [crying] [crying]

What is a fairy? This is a false proposition. Don't be afraid that the simulator will take you to the next level. Before becoming an immortal, he is just like a frog in a well looking at the moon in the sky. After emerging, he is like a mayfly looking at the blue sky. I hope the author's story can be extended more, bold simulation, careful and stable updates

It's very nice, but the author is too short, right? I feel really sorry for my sister-in-law. What will my sister-in-law do in the future? Give it three stars. When I saw Chapter 129, I didn't understand. The protagonist's combat power was mentioned very hard at the beginning, but he had to pretend to be a grandson later. I read it for a while and felt that the latter part was not as interesting as the Dior book.

The writing is okay. After all, it is a free novel, so I won't criticize it. The main problem is the river crab, which makes Shuangwen not happy to the end [Thoughts] I hope the author can develop his original work. It is best to develop an imaginary world view, so that he will not be easily forced to avoid taboos on some things [laughter]

Good reviews for Testing the Poison. The only pity is that the pace after Quanxing Shanna is too fast. It would have been better if we had followed the previous rhythm. The too-fast rhythm caused a break. The acquired abilities were not displayed and matched with a reasonable plot before entering the next plot. It felt like it was finished in a hurry. It is a pity that the delicate rhythm of character portrayal has problems.

At first glance, it doesn't look too exciting. Zhang Chulan's college roommate cultivated immortality through simulation. Step by step on the road to immortality, killing decisively is a bit like the rules of the world of cultivation. Looking forward to the subsequent plot development [cool] [cool]

The author really did a lot of homework on the original work. Regarding the explanation of the Eight Magic Skills, such as the Immortal Thief of Liuku, Fenghou Qimen is really written to fit the original work. Now the author is invincible, I hope the follow-up will continue to be so good

I never give five stars. Four stars is the highest rating. The most praiseworthy thing about this book is the psychological state of the protagonist, which is consistent with the original characters. The author's writing style is good and the sentences are quite fluent. Although it does not deviate too much from following the original story line, isn't it like this when reading fan fiction? If you want to read a new story, why should you read a fan fiction.

The back part is pretty good. If there wasn't that private part in the front, more people would read your book and the rating would be higher.

It is a very interesting novel. It is short in length and has an unsatisfactory ending, but it does not make people feel tired or tired. It is quite relaxing. For me, as a fan, it is also an incredible novel.

To be honest, you can change the world, otherwise there will be basically no play in the future.

It's very well written, and it's so beautiful that you can hear the ending without even realizing it. I think this is the most interesting of all the one-person novels I've read so far. I've read not just hundreds of one-person novels, but there are always six or seventy. I have to say that this is a pretty good book. I recommend it.

Author, your villain is really well written. This book doesn't seek to be a villain, but don't be too aggrieved, don't be a eunuch, I will definitely read it

Forget it, newcomer, keep your private goods with your private goods.

Come on, author, I'm wondering when you're going to reveal the third level of the three layers of reverse life [Like] to save Lu Jin

Emm, let's leave it like this for now. It feels a bit tough to reduce the combat power this time [face covering]

Whatever suits my taste, I will give the highest score.

The best novel I've ever read

The power system is described in great detail, and there are some exciting parts in the plot but also a lot of frustrating parts.

It's well written in the fanfic

If you don't defend the tower, you will almost lose this game.

High-energy plot design The characterization is penetrating There is always a sense of fragmentation when reading it [laughing] [laughing evilly] [like]

Okay, okay, it's one of the most enjoyable books I've ever read. Only for myself, not for others.

Just don't add it, just connect it everywhere

Very well written