Traveling into Shaobai's World, He Was Saved by a Killer at the Beginning

Very beautiful, beyond my expectation(•́⌄•́๑)૭✧ This is a young white horse fanfic that rarely focuses on women. In other articles, Yi Wenjun Yueyao is described as a heinous person, but in this book I seem to see them as they should be. As women, we should understand women more. The author's writing is very good, well-founded, and the emotions are natural. I just hope it can be sweeter later on. I quite like watching lively scenes. It's so fun to see so many young people gathering together. It would be great if we could have a meal together in the end. This book is really a breath of fresh air among Shōnen Hakuba fanfics. It's really beautifully written. ୧(๑•̀ɜ•́๑)૭✧It's great.

Four stars. The male protagonist is owned by Su Changhe. Four stars. 😭😭 Will there be no more Anhe patriarchs in the future? Well, I don't know why the heroine supports Luo Qinghe's junior sister to resist and escape from marriage. In my personal eyes, you should bear the responsibility according to your identity. There is no such thing as enjoying resources without paying the price. Civilians live a simple but poor life. They don't have much responsibility but they are running for life every day and face death all the time. Either it is caused by the country. Either it's the aftermath of a martial arts master, or it's eating unknown food. In short, there is no guarantee of life. The upper class people have no worries about food and drink since they were born. They are served by slaves. There is no need to use modern people's concepts to always be in the people of their time. In my opinion, an era has its own rules. Modern ideas may not necessarily have good results if they are compared with the same era in ancient times. Well, that's probably what it means. I don't have much culture and I can't express it.

The writing is very good. I really like the portrayal of female characters in the book. Everyone has a different understanding of love, but life should not only be about love, but also about the beauty of the world. Instead of having to live or die for love, you are the protagonist of life.

It's good-looking, there's no problem with the logic, and there are really very few cp fanfics about Su Changhe. The anime version of Su Changhe looks good [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The author writes very well! The character's IQ is online, but the system's speaking style is a bit normal, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch.

You can read this book, but you have to persevere. It will take at least 50 chapters before you can read it. The plot at the end is very interesting, and the heroine's speech is also very interesting. In the early stage, I was annoyed by the flying system. [Laughing awkwardly] It always looked like I couldn't pronounce words clearly. I skipped it like crazy, which affected my mood. After that, the flying system kept letting me down.，，，，，，，，

It's very interesting, the women here are not weakened, they have rich personalities, and they all remain rational, but I feel like the system is useless.

It's rare to see the male protagonist belong to Su Changhe. I finally got to enjoy him. I really like the interaction between the female protagonist and Su Changhe.

It's good to watch. This is the second one I've watched from Shao Bai's The Legend of the Dark River and then runs through Shao Ge's [Love]. The heroine is a common people and a woman. She loves herself the most but not just herself. She helps Yi Wenjun awaken to his self-awareness and helps Yueyao, Bai Hehuai and others escape from their destined fate. The idea that men are superior to women is too deep-rooted in the world. She is not afraid of power and attacks everyone who wants to instill these ideas into her equally. Yun Cang Yuehe always puts herself first! [Like] Yun Cang Yue He: The heir to the Department of Agriculture, his precious daughter Yun Cangxi, his confidant Xie Xuan, his money-making partner Ji Ruofeng, his eldest daughter-in-law Bai Hehuai, and her husband-in-law Su Changhe [Cool] The heroine came from a time travel and had a bad childhood. In addition, she was tied to the farming system and had no martial arts skills at all. The Yama Palm practiced by Xiao Su would affect the mind, so she would be afraid after being together. She had many thoughts of leaving her father and leaving her son (it was fine, but it was solved in the end, Su Changhe abolished the technique [rolled his eyes]). Also, the little system was a three-year-old child, and his pronunciation was not clear until he was four years old, so I stuck to it! And Walnut Su is indeed a role model for our generation. After becoming the Marquis of Jiu'an, it is in line with his status to speak out about his three husbands and four pets when faced with emotional problems! [Blowing kiss] [Historical records: Yun Cang, the food official, passed away at the age of ninety. Five years later, her husband Su Changhe died of illness. Thirty-seven years later, the only daughter Jiu'an Hou Yun Cangxi passed away at the age of more than 110 years old. Marquis Jiu'an remained unmarried all his life. He had several lovers and gave birth to a boy and a girl. The man succeeded Su Changhe and became the patriarch of Anhe; the woman inherited the legacy of her ancestors and succeeded as the head of the Department of Agriculture. A family of three, two generations of legends, have all come to an end since then.

After reading it, it's my first time to give a humanistic review to Dark River, but the reason for the review has nothing to do with the story of Dark River. I rated this book because of the values and actions of the heroine and her babies. I highly recommend everyone to read it. This book will also affect my behavior and thoughts in the future. Girls who are confused in their thoughts can read it. The behavior and thoughts of the heroine and her babies gave me an answer to a lot of confusion and doubts, and an action. If you haven't already, If you are watching it at the beginning or are still watching it, if you can't stand it, you will quickly read it until the heroine and the hero start to formally interact with each other, and it will start to look better. One is the actions of the heroine, and the other is the warm relationship between the heroine and the heroine. They are both very attractive. The debates before and after they are together are also very thought-provoking. After reading it, I really feel a lot. This book is really good. I hope my review can let more book friends read this book.

A very nice book, quite female-centric. There are no black women, which is a very good point. Because in this world of martial arts, I feel that there are basically no women who are particularly strong in martial arts, so it is impossible for them to not affect the situation, especially Yi Wenjun. There are always people who think that all these tragedies are related to Yi Wenjun, but in fact, if you take Yi Wenjun out of the story, you will find that everything that should happen will still happen. Without Yi Wenjun, there will be others. I don't understand why many fans hate Yi Wenjun first. From the current situation, Yi Wenjun's biggest fault is that she is a woman, and she is also a beautiful woman who is loved by men. Yi Wenjun owed Ye Anshi a little, but she didn't feel sorry for Xiao Yu at all. She was the product of QJ behavior, so why should she ask the victim to love him. There is another point that the author really mentioned, which is the matter of Lei Mengsha visiting a brothel. I really don't understand how a son-in-law of his has the nerve to visit a brothel. Is this really not a mistake? Oh my God! I'm really convinced.

I really like the interaction between the male and female protagonists! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting to read, but the systematic way of speaking in the first few chapters is a bit difficult, so just ignore it as much as possible. The rest of it is very interesting to watch, and the heroine has very upright views, not a virgin.

I like to express characters and thoughts, and I admire every author of a completed novel. Thank you to the author for meeting my reading needs of Dark River fan fiction. Come on, the author, the writing style can be improved.

It's very interesting, very interesting, it's rare to find a fan fiction that focuses on Su Changhe, and it doesn't have OOC, it's really good, and it doesn't have to force CP. One star is deducted for the system's loud talk. It really looked awkward to me, and the female protagonist is mainly engaged in farming, so there are very few people who can find this angle.

So well written! The heroine has such a positive outlook! I can love you but only if I love myself the most! Very nice! The ending is pretty good! Quite satisfactory! After reading this novel, I don't care much about the novel itself! I am only deeply attracted to the heroine. Whether you love me or not, I am the best! There are many moments where I feel like leaving the father behind and leaving the son alone is beautiful! Not even worthy of her! Xie Xuan can be excluded!

It's a great book. It's different from all the Shaobai fanfics I've read so far. I love it.

This book has its good points and bad points. The author really wanted to make changes to the original plot and succeeded, but in the process it made people feel very depressing while reading. Half of the article is the plot, and the other half is the heroine's various thoughts and psychological analysis. Most of these thoughts are about the plight and sorrow of women. In addition, the heroine in the story is constantly thinking and struggling, and looks at the problem indifferently. Therefore, it feels very depressing, but he did change the ending of the original work. After watching it, the subsequent part of the song sped up and ended quickly. The ending is quite sudden, but the extra chapter is very heartwarming. The heroine's daughter inherits her thoughts, which further improves the woman's status.

A strong spiritual core, a view of love that is so positive that it can be evil, nothing important besides life and death, be brave and fearless, move forward, enrich yourself, and break through the prison

It's great, it's not just a fanfic, the protagonist remains rational and stands firm from beginning to end. The original female characters are also self-reliant and no longer puppets.

Very interesting, very interesting, different from other novels, unconventional

The book is quite good. It looks at the problem from a different perspective and the subject matter is novel. Book reviews that are true and objective, with multi-dimensional descriptions, clear structure, and substantial content can help more book lovers.

At present, I see that the heroine cannot practice martial arts. I am very curious about how she survives in the world of high martial arts and finally becomes like a fish in water. Is there anyone who has seen the later stage who can give me an answer?

My dear friends, we have opened a new book, let's spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers🌸 When I wrote it, I conceived the plot based on the stills of the actors. You can feel free to make any comments and insert them into it. Spread the flowers, spread the flowers🌸

It's so good-looking, and the male lead is so touching as Su Changhe, played by Chang Huasen.

It's really to the point. The points in the article point out the problems in our real life.

The heroine brings the farming culture system to a world of high martial arts and low mystery. Is it the loss of morality or the annihilation of unity [Petrified]? Please watch the heroine's survival record in another world [Chigua]

The writing is very good so far, looking forward to the follow-up

The author's writing is really beautiful. Please give me a lot of encouragement and believe that I will write better in the future.

This book really makes the sisters feel comfortable reading it. Dear, please create an if plot and what will happen if Walnut Pastry goes through the original plot.