Difficult to Sink In

Zhihuo saw the so-called "paragraph review", so I followed the clues. The following are all personal opinions. If you have any objections, please explain. Although I did not distinguish it carefully, from the table of contents, a chapter of only 1,000 words seems to be considered a flaw. However, considering that this friend is writing for the first time, it is understandable that if he wants to try again, he might as well write more. One of the shortcomings of a small number of words is the content. For example, in the first chapter, most of them just explain the psychology of "I" rather than the actions. As well as the language filling, it was rushed by in just one sentence, which is a pity. However, Han Zhijiu established his lively and flamboyant character with just one sentence. This is not what you are good at. Therefore, I hope that when you try again, you can try to fill in the details of actions and language. Of course, I know that I am not as good at writing as a sparrow, so it is just my humble opinion. I apologize for any mistakes. This five-star review is an encouragement. I hope my friends can write less hesitantly and be more polished. If they write enough, maybe one day they can have a place in the literary world. As the saying goes, "If you don't accumulate small steps, you can't reach a thousand miles, and if you don't accumulate small streams, you can't reach a river." If a friend intends to become a great writer, Zhimou will be one of the witnesses.

So funny 6 people are reading... Well, get yourself a sofa 2025.4.29 Let me review for myself. Where is your main plot? I can't find it. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I want to change the whole text... How can people be so stupid? I accidentally lost the main plot while writing super. When I reflect on my own plot development, I actually don't know which node or stage it has developed... The character prototype I thought of at the beginning and the subsequent characterization are actually not connected. It's not working. . . Let's start from the beginning from the next chapter [sad] [sad] [sad] That's how I am! !