I Turned in the Edge of the Star Sea

I have read Chapter 17 so far. Generally speaking, it is not bad, but it is too detailed. It makes people feel cumbersome. It feels like you need to know how many grains of salt to add when cooking.

The score is mainly given to the theme. As for the plot and characters, I personally feel that it gives me a sense of homework rather than a story. The narrative article is really a bit empty and boring. Everyone has their own opinions on the authenticity of the farming operation, so I won't go into it.

This article is not a cool article, and the selected games are not for the general public. The science fiction theme is also particularly restrained when combined with the country's vision. It is not an ordinary country or system article. It strives to explain the technical process and stage changes clearly. As an author, please allow me to give myself five points without shame. I hope everyone can comment more and give me feedback and opportunities for revision and improvement.

It is indeed well written, and the creativity is relatively novel. It is considered a very good article among similar articles. The advancement of various things is supported, the arguments are detailed, and the rationality is sufficient. It will look very comfortable. The protagonist has a very upright mind, a traditional red mind, and his IQ is online, even very high, and his battle of wits and courage with the system is also very interesting. There are just too many descriptions and developments in some places. I personally think it is a bit complicated and affects the perception, but it varies from person to person.

Every place is described in too much detail, making the plot advance too slowly.

It's very good, but it's a little slow to warm up. If you watch it, it will be very interesting. It has the logic of normal people and the actions of the country are also in line with normal logic. There is a lot of popular science content in it. Not a cool article, not a cool article, not a cool article. Say important things three times.

Cool, but isn't it a bit of a waste to post this book on Tomato?

It is very positive energy and has popularized a lot of knowledge, but I don't know if you have heard this sentence before: Don't have absolute admiration for anything that rejects greatness or has no shortcomings. The original words may not be like this, but the meaning is the same, especially for a group like this, and the author is a bit evasive, [Cool] Of course, this is a novel just for fun, and he limits the scope of group portraits to a relatively small size. In this case, there is a certain replicability of reality. It can even be said that there is definitely such a group of people in reality. But this requires specific conditions, so this thing requires rational consideration and rationality.

Looks great, and there's also a percussion beast! Knock Beast! A fluffy percussion beast! I want to see this! ! !

The author checked a lot of information and was very careful. It's just that the progress of the story is a bit slow, and some technical explanations can be omitted. Just talk about the functional applications [face covering]

Progress Chapter 44 Farming enthusiasts rejoice! ! ! I really like the daily articles on infrastructure construction under the cloak of the fourth natural disaster. It's like following the original guy's live broadcast.

There is no poisonous point. This is the first time I have seen such a logical and detailed book on Tomato. The only shortcoming is that there are too few [Punch Out] Update soon.

It's not bad. I finally found a good book on Taobao. The logic is clear and the content is written in detail, but it's just too detailed [eating melon]. Recommended by Seedlings

The subject matter is quite good, but maybe life is too fickle and not suitable for reading this kind of novel.

It's good to read. Except for Chapter 8, which was a bit difficult to write, everything else was okay.

Although some parts are a bit difficult to understand, it made me think like I had read science fiction novels before, and the speed slowed down unconsciously. The biggest shortcoming is that there are too few, which is huge. Come on, there will be more!

Not bad, feel free to rate it

I'm so damn anxious. There are five people here and I'm ready to study something thoroughly.

Two fighter jets, one early warning aircraft, and one 076. The author will not update it.

It's a bit interesting. Traveling around the world is still fun.

Except it's a little cumbersome, I think everything else is okay.

A very good world text, very different from previous player templates

A very high-quality world text, and the reasonable adaptation of the game content is very interesting. The most surprising thing is the excellent interpretation of the sci-fi core of the original work. The peak of good grass. The combat power of the Earth and edge planets has been balanced At the beginning, a single molecule is given and a Zeus hammer is given. The wealth of more than a hundred people is attacked by a team of small pistols and corpses. Psychics can also be awakened by the so-called will. It's open, it's open, and you still complain about how desperate you are being targeted...

The content is quite good, but I don't know why it always feels weak. Maybe some realism should be added. It's a two-way thing after all.

Beautiful, but too realistic

The logic is very good and the writing is very good.

I finished watching it in one night (sad)

Yes, the author is more sincere

Not bad, I hope the author can write some mouse mods

Very good-looking, I really like Lu Jiuyuan.