I Turned in the Edge of the Star Sea

I have read Chapter 17 so far. Generally speaking, it is not bad, but it is too detailed. It makes people feel cumbersome. It feels like you need to know how many grains of salt to add when cooking.

The score is mainly given to the theme. As for the plot and characters, I personally feel that it gives me a sense of homework rather than a story. The narrative article is really a bit empty and boring. Everyone has their own opinions on the authenticity of the farming operation, so I won't go into it.

This article is not a cool article, and the selected games are not for the general public. The science fiction theme is also particularly restrained when combined with the country's vision. It is not an ordinary country or system article. It strives to explain the technical process and stage changes clearly. As an author, please allow me to give myself five points without shame. I hope everyone can comment more and give me feedback and opportunities for revision and improvement.

It is indeed well written, and the creativity is relatively novel. It is considered a very good article among similar articles. The advancement of various things is supported, the arguments are detailed, and the rationality is sufficient. It will look very comfortable. The protagonist has a very upright mind, a traditional red mind, and his IQ is online, even very high, and his battle of wits and courage with the system is also very interesting. There are just too many descriptions and developments in some places. I personally think it is a bit complicated and affects the perception, but it varies from person to person.

It's very good, but it's a little slow to warm up. If you watch it, it will be very interesting. It has the logic of normal people and the actions of the country are also in line with normal logic. There is a lot of popular science content in it. Not a cool article, not a cool article, not a cool article. Say important things three times.

Every place is described in too much detail, making the plot advance too slowly.

Cool, but isn't it a bit of a waste to post this book on Tomato?

It is very positive energy and has popularized a lot of knowledge, but I don't know if you have heard this sentence before: Don't have absolute admiration for anything that rejects greatness or has no shortcomings. The original words may not be like this, but the meaning is the same, especially for a group like this, and the author is a bit evasive, 😎 Of course, this is a novel just for fun, and he limits the scope of group portraits to a relatively small size. In this case, there is a certain replicability of reality. It can even be said that there is definitely such a group of people in reality. But this requires specific conditions, so this thing requires rational consideration and rationality.

Looks great, and there's also a percussion beast! Knock Beast! A fluffy percussion beast! I want to see this!!!

The author checked a lot of information and was very careful. It's just that the progress of the story is a bit slow, and some technical explanations can be omitted. Just talk about the functional applications 🤦