What? I Am Bai Yueguang Who Died Early in the World of Immortality

(I cached it and read it, so I saw the latest chapter of the book) To be honest, the writing is not bad, the plot is generally okay, and it has enough expectations. I don't really want to say depressing words. The biggest weakness is that the pace is too slow. The heroine is too pretentious and weak, and she doesn't have a long mouth. She leaves half of what she says. One or two of the male supporting characters are as inexplicable as Chun Zhu. The female villain is well-shaped. Success, but the heroine seems to have no brains, and is extremely weak. She has no ability, no background, and is bullied throughout the whole process. I hope the pace is faster and faster, otherwise it is human nature to abandon the book. After all, it is too frustrating and uncomfortable to watch. Please update the author quickly [love] [love] [love]

It's a sadistic story... The early stage of sadistically abusing the heroine has been laid out for too long [face covering]

I feel that Su Ningyin's portrayal is better than that of the heroine [Thinking] The villainous female supporting role is more attractive and she is a scheming little rice dumpling, although it is unlikely that the heroine will be replaced [Sending my heart] I hope that Su Ningyin's appearances can be greatly increased

The slap scene really made me happy. I hope the heroine will become stronger soon and torture those men to death. Come on

I only gave it four stars because it made me feel angry. Can you get better soon?

There is no cheat, no system, and the heroine has no broken character. Who knows if I really like this kind of writing? I hope it will be updated soon. I can't wait.

I hope that female majors will get better and better

It's good to watch, but I feel a little sorry for the heroine (I also feel sorry for the original heroine. Without her backing master, she is not very good at cultivation and has low self-esteem. She is not good at refuting and watching someone who treats her well say that she is disgusting for another person). She has no ability to protect herself from being bullied by these people. I hope there will be more scenes of slaps in the face.

No, aren't you feeling aggrieved?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, too much, too little, not enough to watch at all. I was just starting, and it was gone. Shocking! ! ! !

An unknown fire, I really... Can you update it quickly? ! ! ! ! ! ! I might be pissed off watching this! ! ! ! ! ! Please, it's time for a slap in the face! ! ! ! ! ! ! Really unknown fire! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

Very nice, but too little. [Blowing kiss][admiration][admiration]

The author writes well. The writing is very good. I love you. 😘

Why is this rating so low? I took a look and found that the author's chapter on "It's Better to Change Your Name" is a bit long.

Wonderful wonderful wonderful

Good looking good looking good looking

Not bad, good, very good-looking It's pretty good, but it's been discontinued for half a year. I don't know when it will be updated.

This is the second time I have read a new book on Tomato. I can read it. I hope the author will update it more!

This is step by step, and the male protagonist's liking is not the old and domineering kind. The male protagonist's liking is something that we feel we should like at first sight.

Okay, okay, come on, I think it looks good

It's okay. It's just that the male characters are not very good at shaping them. I don't believe that they can become top people. I don't believe they only have such brains. Also, there are too few and they are not interesting enough.

It's very beautiful, gradually progressing, not bad, not bad

This book is really beautiful. It is my favorite book among all the books I have read. [Like]

Hope there will be a big turnaround later

Wonderful content, good looking support

It looks good. I love it. Hurry up and write.

It looks pretty good so far

It's very well written. Good luck, author.

It's great. It's pretty.