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It can be regarded as a comprehensive manga of the Invincible style. The writing style is also relatively comfortable. There are no naive immortals who look like elementary school students. The male protagonist's personality and personality are quite online. One more thing I have to mention is that instead of joining the service department, Yukino was asked to join the protagonist's department. For this reason, I think the manga bookworm has to come in and give it a try [OK]. Anyway, if I had seen this before watching, I would have definitely started watching it.

Although the title of this book sounds like it has no heroine, Wuqing is just a previous life, not this life, and it is wearing something that directly replaces the original white carp. The white carp in this world disappears directly. It is not a soul passage, but a wearing of the body. There is a female protagonist, maybe a harem, one is already on the list, and there are many who like the male protagonist. A bit of fun, not boring or mediocre There are also shortcomings, such as there are really few, and the strength of the protagonist is very mysterious, but the actual performance is very average, but it is enough, and it can be considered invincible. Summary: This book is still readable. If I were to rate it, I could give it 4.5 Stars, but since I wanted to give it three stars, I gave it four stars.

Come on, there are quite a few Miura books. I have also written this type of novel, so just think of it as giving some useless advice. We must grasp the identity of the protagonist as a practitioner. Practitioners will not be inferior to others, will not be coerced by others, will not change their hearts easily, and will not express love emotions as easily as people in reality. If you grasp it well and stick to the original setting of the protagonist, this book will definitely be popular.

It's pretty good, but the confirmation of the relationship with Miura is too abrupt. I feel that the steady rhythm has been disrupted, and it is not conducive to maintaining the strong character of the male protagonist. If the author is worried that some readers will say that the male protagonist is a eunuch, then there is really no need to speed up the pace suddenly. The sudden plot points are hard to accept for a while. In short, I hope the author can continue to work hard [Love]

This is the only comprehensive comic from Tomato that I can read, and it basically doesn't have any big bad points. The other books are either ambiguous, pure love, or straight up eunuchs, none of which can be beaten. This one of yours is really great [laughing][laughing]

🧐Evaluate it, it is considered to be the top batch of comprehensive comics and humanities in Tomato (personal preference) If the update is not interrupted due to uncontrollable factors, it can be said that I will read it for a lifetime. So, please, please keep updating, other book friends will do everything😭

Miura Yuko is such a rare choice. 7 Of the 10 harem manga series were not available on the table, but now she is in trouble.

Favorite episode. Finally, there is a pure fanfic light novel that does not have pretentiousness, knotted wings, male supporting characters stealing the show, and the male protagonist feeding his stomach. When writing about love and love, there is no need to talk about business wars and political struggles, there is no need to talk about family ethics, and there is no need to use force without a knife. It can be said to be the most interesting comic series [Like]

Very well written, good luck to the author! [Admiration][Admiration] I am a student, I don't have much money, so I will give you my love for only 5 yuan, which makes me look more sincere. [Note][Note][Note] I would like to add that I am a student and I take a month off at a time. Sometimes it's no wonder that I don't catch up. I don't advocate keeping books. In addition, 5 yuan is not much for me. Support for the author is mainly psychological. I haven't seen a good new book in a long time. I sincerely hope that the author will stick to it. Book reviews and suggestions (without any malice, I have written some novels by hand before): 1. To be honest, in the later stage, I may take the heroine... Uh... To practice. Yes, but it's best not to increase their strength too quickly, and not to have the same abilities as the protagonist. After all, it's a fun story, so it's best to avoid overweighting them. 2. I wonder if the author has thought about adding a big background? For example, demons are rampant in the dark, the inner world, the gate to the other side, etc. On the one hand, it enriches the plot, and on the other hand, it can also enhance the relationship with the heroine through these, uh... People. 3. If there is really a villain, it is best that only a few people know about the other side of the world, and try not to disclose it to the public, because it is difficult to grasp, so be cautious. 4. For the sake of the longevity of the novel, sometimes you can look for inspiration in classics. Appropriate quotations from classics, philosophical plots, etc. Can help enrich the content of the novel and make it more conducive to writing for a long time. 5. Use rhetorical techniques appropriately. Gorgeous sentences are a good thing, indicating excellence in vocabulary and thinking, but there is a technique in literature called line drawing, and art also has a saying of leaving blank space. Simple descriptions of characters' psychology, language, appearance, movements, demeanor, and environment descriptions (without modifications such as metaphors) can sometimes work wonders. 6. After all, Internet articles can be funny and interesting at the same time. I hope the author can stick to it (the words are typed by my hand) and not be too affected by my suggestions. The author has his own characteristics. To be honest, publishing novels on Tomato is mostly not to make money, but to share the stories hidden in my heart. I believe that the author has his own arrangements and plans, and I hope to stick to them. I also wish you to gain recognition from more people (of course, having money is better😁).

It's not bad, maybe I'm too rigid and boring. Most of the jokes in this book affect the viewing experience, and the understanding is the same. Especially the male white carp is very dramatic. After all, he is comparable to an immortal, and ordinary people can't just be ordinary people. Although I don't know the character of Cong Yu in the original work, and I have never watched a light lily, let alone the game (it can be said to be a stereotype), but from a parent's perspective, which parent has not imagined having a cute, lively, cheerful, clingy, obedient, and sensible daughter? What can improve readers' tolerance is not only the original anime characters, but also stable human settings, at least not online parenting. The Internet is useful for learning and working, but it does not have the ability to educate people (just think of me as being over the top). Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonist can be passive but not suppressed. Come on!

Yes, there are obvious lightning protections, but I haven't even seen the heroine. Five-star evacuation.

It's so beautiful, but I don't feel it's necessary to give one person too many perspectives. A woman gave almost 40% of the perspective of this book [Punch Out]. I was already very disgusted with it, but the second personality made it even more disgusting. Apart from this, everything else is very good, very beautiful, and comparable to the best, but I prefer stable updates without interruption.

The writing is very good, the updates are stable, and the writing style is also on a high level. I just want to write more about Yukino. I am a member of the Harmono Party.

The writing is pretty good, and the main character is not a eunuch, so I have to eat it in chapter 37.

It's a good book, but I feel that the progress is a bit too fast and abrupt. I'm afraid that the author has nothing to write later, so it ends suddenly, which is not enough to read. Overall, it's good. The characterization is quite consistent with the original work, and the driving speed is quite fast. However, there are some deleted parts that I hope the author will not put in the ellipses comment area, so as to meet the needs of readers. Some people may say it's brainless, but this is just a brainless and cool article, just feel good and that's it [laughing]

It's a very good book. I hope the author will stick to it and not finish it. Otherwise, I might be tempted to give the author some different souvenirs!

The main character in the manga, a former Immortal Cultivator of Qingqing Dao, passively opens a harem, and is more of an everyday person. Although he is "severely injured", he is invincible. Although the humanoid succubus has a character that never takes the initiative, it is reasonable for someone who used to practice the ruthless path to gradually regain his humanity. Although he is passive, he is not just a piece of wood, so he has to eat it.

Here I go again. My rating is: very good, recommended. Although the plot is similar to most comprehensive comics, the content is slower and gives people a very comfortable feeling, similar to the feeling of catching up slowly. However, it is a pity that there are so many female protagonists in such good content. I personally feel that it would be more interesting if it had a single female protagonist, but it is also a very good book.

It's so beautiful. I wish the author can always win the resurrection competition [laughing evilly] You can't stop updating such a beautiful book.

It's great, simply great. I was dismissive of Zongman at first. Unexpectedly, this movie has too many elements and is complex and beautiful. That is, can the author give us a little more plot for Chongno [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Advantages: The writing is good, and it can control the inner drama. Although the male protagonist's character is insufficiently developed, the side description of him and the meat-eating plot make up for this part. After having a girlfriend, my feelings skyrocketed. Disadvantages: The pacing of the first hundred chapters is not well controlled, making it difficult to read. Giving it to Yumeko for the first time is a bit novel, and some people may not understand it. Summary: You can see the author's growth, especially in the plot arrangement.

There are so many characters, some of them are invisible, but they are well written and feel okay [Chigua]

Not bad, I finished reading it in one sitting, keep up the good work [eat melon] [learned]

Not bad, not bad, finally not the protagonist of 🐏W. Five-star review

It's a very good novel. If you like reading comics, I recommend reading this novel directly. I haven't seen anything toxic at all so far. The novel's description of emotions is still okay. Of course, except for the protagonist, it is very relaxing and refreshing. I suggest that you can describe some of the protagonist's emotions and slowly bring some of the protagonist's emotions back. I feel that the protagonist's emotions are a bit too bland. I suggest writing a two-way redemption. In addition, if you like Invincible's daily life, which is bland, you can start it directly.

It's a great fanfic, nothing toxic (in my opinion). The protagonist's personality is also very gentle, not crazy, and the description of the female character is also quite good. Anyway, I think it's OK.

It looks good, I think I should update more chapters. Wow, Darcy can do anything.

It looks good, so it must be the God-incarnation Heavenly Lord who comes to turn the world into kirakiradokidoki!

It's very good. It's quite good at Tomato level. It has multiple female protagonists in the harem.

The rhythm of the plot advancement is well controlled, using strength but not deliberately using it to appear cool and cool, and there is no killing with sparks and lightning all the way. It's a bland and warm daily life, and I haven't seen "big refreshment" yet, but "little refreshment" continues. My personal evaluation is 4.5 Points. If there is no half-point option, then full points will be given.