Just an Ordinary Day in Xun

Did the author get the inspiration from watching the Qianjinqiu episode 😂 It took a long time to write, but it was not as good as Qianjinqiu. The author did not dare to let the heroine give birth to a son, because the two legitimate sons would definitely embarrass the hero. The false he is entirely maintained by the top love-minded female protagonist. In the female protagonist's heart, her own life is not as important as the male protagonist's love. 😂

The writing is capable, concise and beautiful. The male and female protagonists are childhood sweethearts, and their emotions are genuine. The heroine was framed and the hero was betrayed, they all really happened. It would be nice if the author could narrate the story normally and write the male and female protagonists as normal people. The two people who were supposed to have a good outcome were teased by fate, and finally they were able to turn their fate around on their own, instead of being coerced by fate and abandoning their original selves. Worth a look

It's pretty good, there's no intrigue, and the two of them have a normal mentality. It's not like some novels where people who are clearly in love have to cause trouble to misunderstand each other. There will be entanglements, but there will be no obsession. It was very peaceful, but it was a bit short and the ending was unexpected!

Although the length is short, I think the entire psychological changes of the heroine are written in an unobtrusive way. The author has written it in detail, and I think the heroine's behavior at each stage is reasonable. However, due to the short length, the heroine's initial plan to run away, the hero's inner conflict and awkwardness, and the hero's pursuit of his wife all passed quickly. These two paragraphs are actually the most interesting. It would be nice to write more about the tension and conflict.

So far, it seems that the writing style is plain but vivid, and the reading is relatively smooth, surpassing 🍅80% of novels. The plot setting is also unconventional. The author is a very thoughtful person and does not follow what others say. The heroine looks very sober now. The character creation of the male protagonist is very interesting. He claims to be affectionate, but in fact he is highly narcissistic. A quite plump character.

The author talks about ordinary people and ordinary things, but they are very attractive. The characters have distinct personalities and are very in line with human nature. Everyone works hard to live their true self. This is life. 👍👍👍

Not bad, the story is told in a straightforward manner, without any ups and downs, but the overall color is gray. The heroine's thoughts, words and deeds are all very realistic. Life is all about looking forward. In real life, there are many times when a couple can't get along. They always look at the past, feeling resentment and resentment in their hearts, and getting into trouble. So ignore the past and look forward. It's not about forgetting the past, it's about not being stuck in the past. Then look forward more rationally, live it if you can, and don't suffer if you can't.

It's a short article, but the writing is really good. The previous misses, entanglements, and regrets made me so heartbroken. It's not perfect, but the most important thing is to move forward and look forward. But in real life, there is no rebirth. Damn, I like this one the most. Although it is cruel, it is very realistic. Anyway, it impressed me. Thank you for your creation.

Leave a comment. In fact, this evaluation can be divided or combined, but I still prefer the ending of this combination. Originally, the previous life was bitter, but it is not easy to be together in this life. It can eliminate the misunderstanding and it is good to be together.

Although it is a rebirth novel, the story is short and concise, making it addictive to read. Although it is not a double story, the male and female protagonists have their own difficulties. After experiencing external interference and inner struggles, the two of them were finally able to let go of the past, cherish the present, and live a good life in the future. It also reminds us not to dwell on the bad things in the past and to live well in the present.