Fate: If Kiritsugu Survives to the Fifth Battle

Saber is too weak. If Shirou practiced magic circuits in the correct way and Kiritsugu was there to teach him, then the magical Saber would not be so weak. It feels like only Red A's strength is online, weakening the strength of others [Thinking]

I give full marks. Although I can see that the writing is lacking in some places, the writing is very good. I wrote according to the setting in the early stage, and it started to become interesting when I started to come up with my own ideas. Especially after Red A left the plot, it became amazing. The story is good. I have read it to the last chapter.

It's pretty good among Fate fans, but it's a pity that it's not very popular.

Inhibition: Another different Shirou~

Come on, this is my first time seeing Kiritsugu's living book ()

This idea is very new, that's why no one sees it

Yes, there is no delay at all. The pace is so fast at first that you can't grasp it, but after you get familiar with it later, it feels very comfortable. Of course, the fast pace means that some people who have never seen fate cannot understand some things. Of course, those who have known fate will find it very enjoyable to read. In short, the fat intestines are good (≧∇≦*) Author, keep up the good work^ω^

Alas - Fate's unique low heat

The three-line-in-one adaptation is pretty good, and it's not as well-received as FGO World. 5 Battles on the third line + 4 battles + Mo Yi, the plot is quite interesting, and the writing is also good. PS: If you don't concentrate on Sakura, will there be a Shura field?

The writing is quite good, but why are there so few people? Now I really hope it won't be too harsh. The original novel doesn't have a good ending.

It's great, I'm looking forward to the sequel. Do any book friends recommend any other books related to Shirou?

I insist on mentioning the author. There seem to be a lot more fate books recently. I could add more descriptions to enrich the content.

The problem I see so far is that it can't be ignited. I can write more about the fighting, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to be stuck there. I hope it can be improved in the future.

Author, please work hard next time [love] [love] [love]

Good-looking and great, no need to say more [Send heartfelt message]

I think it's pretty good

Please support me first, it's a very interesting idea.

Shirou Emiya's only chance of speeding up is Chaldea

It's very good. The author tried his best to restore it. Although some of the fate characters are a bit uninteresting, they are still quite interesting. They are better than most fanfics.

Not bad except that I feel a little bit wrong at the back

Looking forward to new works [Blowing Kiss]

Beautiful, the more you look at it, the better it looks

Give the author a thumbs up

Not bad, leave a good review.

I want to read the follow-up to the next book

Please support it and hope more people will watch it.

Not bad, just a little too short

Tells a different story line, worth watching

Very good-looking, looking forward to Mo Yi's extra chapter [laughing and crying]

The plot is good, not draggy, enjoyable to watch, waiting for the sequel