A Stall Was Set up to Sell Jelly, and the People in the City Were Greedy.

The writing is still good, but there are a few points that I feel could be handled better: First, the two of them understand each other, why don't they invite a matchmaker to come to get engaged? No matter how simple and open the folk customs are, it is still ancient times. In addition, there is no shortage of talkative women everywhere, and there are many pairs of female protagonists. Reputation has an impact. Secondly, the pace of the following chapters is too fast. Lu Chen, Asing, Ashu, and the development of the restaurant are all mentioned in one stroke. It would be better if it was written in more detail. Thirdly, Xia He, no matter how good or bad, did not give her an ending, or it would be good to publish a separate book with Xia He as the heroine.

It's beautiful. If it weren't for the ancient times, I would have thought the heroine would be beautiful alone, but it would be nice to have someone who knows both coldness and warmth. The heroine is really good at cooking, but I don't seem to understand it after watching it. Cooking is also a technical job.

The plot is reasonable, there is no exaggerated golden finger, but the ending is too hasty.

Love, love, love, love, love, love, love! Super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, perfect! Super perfect! Super perfect! Super perfect! Super perfect! Just like this! Highly sweet! The best ones! It's just that the ending is too hasty [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like]

The story is very warm and short but very comfortable to watch. The plot progresses very quickly [Shy] It's not the best. It's an ordinary little life. The emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are very comfortable and not awkward. [Love] Although this book has a low rating, I personally think it's a good book to read in your spare time.

It looks good, but can you go faster? (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)

I like it very much. I can see that Da Da is very talented. I must have made a lot of preparations for this novel. It's really true. Love it~

This cover is so cute hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.

Good looking, I really like the male and female protagonists

It's so good, but the ending is too short.

It is a very ordinary, simple and heartwarming short story. Except for the final reveal of the identity of the male protagonist as a general, the whole text is a description of the story of a small character. It has fireworks and family warmth, but no vigorous intrigues. It is just a story that happened around me. I personally like this kind of thing. At least there is no trace of AI [laughing] The ending is a bit rushed, and a few more chapters will make it more perfect [laughing]

Really good, come on

It's pretty good. The villains are the second aunt and the second uncle's family. It ends like this. Although the ending is good, I'm quite curious about how little Xia He [Thinking] described.

It's quite interesting. The passages describing food made me very greedy (๑´ڡ`๑), but the ending was so sudden, hahaha. There are appropriate villain characters, and it won't look dull or angry. It's good. Even if Xia He didn't write the ending at the beginning, it can still show that the ending is really anxious, haha. This kind of thing suits my idea. Everyone is happy hahaha. My favorite is that my sister is the top pick in the end👍👍👍Recommended

Although the ending was unexpected, it is a very warm and sweet article~ I really like the people and things in it [Love]

I've read a few chapters, it's pretty good

Ordinary happy life

Very nice, but a bit short.

Beautiful, long flowing water

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! !

Every time I come across a book that I can read, it's all bad [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

It's good to watch, but I just didn't get enough of it. The ending ended too hastily

Looks good, but the ending feels a bit rushed

It felt a little too rushed for the ending, but it was still fun to watch.

It's good, but not enough. It ends too soon.

It's still pretty good-looking. If you work hard to live, you will be ordinary without blood. Being ordinary is happiness.

I like, like, like this kind of article, but I haven't read enough [crying]

I think it's pretty good so far. I'll finish reading it. Thank you to the author ^0^~

Although the number of words is small, the content is good, a warm food article

It's pretty good, but the ending is very fast.