The Heaven-Defying Charmer on the Magic Continent

It looks good, the plot logic can be said to be rigorous, and the story advancement is also relatively compact. When it is time to go to bed, it speeds up without any resistance and does not drag out the appetite. When fighting, it takes only a few seconds and no hard work, which is also a feature. There are two obvious flaws that can be considered poisonous points: 1: The author uses this label to attract readers, but sometimes forgets to realize that the initial magic power also has a chunyao effect. He is obviously a succubus, but he still has to listen to the wishes of his own woman when opening a harem. Two: The realization of combat power is too vague. The protagonist is too strong but never tells the readers in advance when he becomes stronger. Everyone is instantly hit and the readers are confused. Overall, I feel comfortable watching it. After all, in Tomato, there is no such novice rz point that makes people speechless. Some basic logic and framework are already hard to come by, thanks to the support of my peers.

Yes, there is imagination, and the main characters all have IQs. However, the portrayal of the female characters is a bit hollow, the characters are a bit not full, and they feel like accessories to the protagonist. If it's about daily life, I feel like it can be written from multiple angles, making the female character's personality more complex and not just the same character all the time. By the way, we should sort out the priorities of female characters. The main ones can be more scenes and character portrayals. The second priority is to deepen her character through some events and reduce the number of scenes. There is no need to complicate the character. In addition to this, you can also add some personality flaws to the female character. For example, tsundere is a well-known flaw. As long as it is added well, it will basically give the character a feeling of coming to life. Of course, the author can write according to his own ideas. I am just making a suggestion.

Being chased in the early stage was a bit dissuasive, but later on, it was okay to take revenge. Logically speaking, the protagonist's golden finger can just go around hunting for beauty, and he becomes stronger just by lying down [face covering]

It's beautiful, the writing is delicate, and the words and sentences are particularly comfortable. I love watching it, the succubus setting, coupled with the decisive character of the protagonist, I am hooked. It's worth watching, with ups and downs, and you can't guess what's going to happen next. There are pitfalls and pitfalls, and it's worth chasing after... The author is great!

When I saw the part about Mila's mother, I decided to give it a good review. There are so few novels these days that can explain things in an organized and not far-fetched way. At least I can't find faults. I can find faults more or less in other novels, which makes me feel uncomfortable. The writing is really good.

It's okay. There's nothing poisonous about it at the moment. Come on.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Ziqian for 300 years, and Sun Wukong waited for Tang Monk for 500 years. In the year, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, and Huacheng waited for Xie Lian has been waiting for 800 years, Feng Qingxue has been waiting for Baili Tusu for 900 years, Nightshade has been waiting for Long Yang for 1000 years, White Snake has been waiting for Xu Xian for 1000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has been waiting for Yu Shu for 2000 years, Su Jiu has been waiting for 1000 years. My son has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, and Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands. Years ago, Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives. And i have been Waiting for your update... ... On a certain day, a certain month, a man was lying weakly on the bed, with an unconcealable paleness on his face. There was a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update...

It took me a few days to read it. How can I put it this way, this book is quite good. Although it is a harem, it is not a stallion. I will accept one after another, but the frequency in the early stage is slightly faster. But through the title of the book, you can know the emotional foreshadowing, but I personally think it is okay. If you can't accept this, you probably won't be able to watch it either. Some of the plot developments were beyond my expectations. I thought it would be the same old routine, but it turned out to be reversed on the next page. The plot rhythm is okay, but the description of battles and the division of strength are vague. But the protagonist basically has no opponent. I'm not good at words, so I can only say so much. Overall, it's okay. It's one of the few books I've read in 🍅 Get one from 5 stars

No one is watching? I find it quite interesting, cheers for the author [Like]

Well written, clear outline, compact and reasonable content

The story is wonderfully told and can make people ponder a lot of truths. The author also writes smoothly and it is not difficult to read at all. The plot is compact and not verbose, and the scene descriptions just pulled me into that world. It's great!

Although some of the plots are cliche, the acquisition of girls is indeed very fast. It should be said that it is the fastest since I read novels. The content is still more in line with my taste, and it is highly recommended. I will read the remaining one star for reference later [Please pay attention][Please pay attention][Please pay attention] By the way, I am afraid that many people are unhappy with the mistreatment of the first two heroines, but the author still has some lightning protection style. For example, he was imprisoned in a women's prison, and the only problem in the middle was poor environment and not enough food [Chigua]

Many women, cool writing. The plot is pretty good, the details are average, and the article is fairly concise.

It's super interesting and the pace doesn't drag. Anyway, I quite like it

The writing is beautiful, why are there so few people?

The book is a good book, but this Rock Kingdom is a bit difficult [laughs awkwardly]

The process of reading this book is like making a pot of tea in the rain and watching the light and shadow flow on the paper.

The writing is okay, but I don't know why no one reads it.

I am very satisfied with this book, but it lacks some details. I will write more details in the future and stop searching so hard.

Summary: Remove the nook and cranny of CG

It's still pretty good. I also finished reading your last book by Lei Ze, and today I suddenly discovered that this one is still written by you.

Come on author, a lot of people should read this book [Love]

I'm tired of seeing people being the system's bastards. It's so cool to watch this. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's nice to look at. Let's keep it up first and come back to see it after it's fattened up.

Well written, it made me feel happy. Cheers.

Every foreshadowing in it has been filled in, which is great!

It seems very smooth. After watching all kinds of funny and forced passion, it's interesting to see this kind of person who controls the overall situation.

The concept is ingenious and imaginative. Magic, elves, and other worlds are so bizarre. I read it in one go and it was very interesting.

It's not brainless, the story is very logical, the content is quite compact, and the characters of each woman are well developed.

I still like the Liyana I met at the beginning