Naruto: The Shadow Corps from the Start

I can't stand it, brother. I don't know about others.

It's too boring and not interesting. I feel like the author is just too idle and just writes for fun, and I'm pretty idle to make random comments, hahahaha.

It's only 80,000 words. You've at least missed 20,000 words.

The writing is so boring, the female character has no soul, the protagonist is like a male dog in heat all the time, and the emotional line is a mess. I don't know how I can write a book that is invincible at the beginning and write it well. Maybe the writing is a little bit confusing. It just feels like a native of the motherland. I love it so much. Women basically fall behind. Now that I have a showdown with my father, I don't intend to hide my abilities, so I might as well be more thorough and directly use geass to control those old people and turn the Fire Country into my own back garden. You can try to see if the Earth Reincarnation can sign in, and then take Aunt Snake and cooperate with the curse seal to develop the Black Shadow Corps. It may be interesting, and then throw in the psychic beasts and tailed beasts for experiments. Besides, don't you like to take in girls? It just so happens that the Shadow Corps needs generals. Give them this position to play and cultivate, secretly unify the ninja world, study chakra fruits, and plant trees in other worlds. The Pirate World is good, and it just has the ability to give your nine-in-one Shadow Ninja a lot. Fruit, finally harvested the chakra fruit, and then counterattacked Otsutsuki. The pirate world can also accept girls who happen to be able to use the water character. Fewer ones who like this or that one will drop the B-square, and write more about saving the "girl who lost her footing." Those who deserve to be destroyed will be destroyed. The main character is to do whatever you want, and combine the training methods and technology of the two worlds to create a women's corps. You don't have to do it yourself, just play the big scene. Don't you happen to have the Yonko Pirates? When the copy is cleared, try not to accept too many, and make some distinctions in character. The high-end combat power of the Naruto world is quite strong. If I want to write it down, I can only expand the map, which is basically the sea of ​​​​dead fire. It only takes one punch to clear these three worlds (the map is too small for short-term only). Dragon Ball, Ultraman and other categories can be written. The remaining low combat power is boring to write. It is really difficult to write.

What's going on when you accept Yongdaimei from all kinds of women?

The first volume ends inexplicably with no ending

I knew that this kind of invincible writing would eventually turn into a happy article and become the author's self-pleasure article.

I gave up when I saw traveling to other worlds [smile]

The plot is pretty good

Hinata and Ino. It's okay to say. The rest. Speechless🤦‍♀️