There Is Something Wrong with This World, Let's Fix It

The theme is not new, but with this theme and the cooperation of multiple time-travelers to overcome the level, there is no single specific protagonist. The most important thing is the author's writing style. It does not seem strange at all that a bunch of time-travelers are together. My knowledge is very limited and I can't say anything good. I can only say that I have been reading novels for almost ten years. Don't look at the length of my reading. After all, Tomato was not famous before. This book does not talk about great gods, but it can still be regarded as fairy grass. The plot development is reasonable and reasonable. The atmosphere of dozens of time travelers is harmonious. The spirit of red is not intuitively expressed, but it can be seen that there is no poisonous point, because if you think about it from another perspective, you really can't think of any better way to deal with it. Of course, the main thing when reading novels is the sense of immersion. There is no sense of immersion in many novels about multiple time travellers. The story is good but it doesn't seem that exciting. But here you can be immersed in it, as if you have become one of this small group working hard to save their own world. The author is very good at controlling emotions, so I recommend it. I hope you can support the author and don't let the author cut this book. If that is the case, it would be a shame. Brother, you don't have to open a new book directly. The original team can just go out again. The main universe has suffered a catastrophe and has not yet recovered. In order to avoid being invaded again, it is ready to continue to regain its own territory, build a solid defense line, and strive to push the war into the enemy's territory, cause trouble on their territory, and keep the battle out of their own territory. The book also shows how ideology affects the material plane (the head of state section) as follows; This is what I think, the true main universe (us), the main universe, the auxiliary universe (parallel plane) (the subordinate universe of the auxiliary universe, the universe created by ideological interference in the formation of the universe) and further down are the parallel branches of the ideological universe. (Novel, animation, film and television, etc. The time traveler belongs to the last layer) Just like the earth, there is a world tree on the earth, with big branches on the tree, twigs on the big branches, and leaves on the twigs. On the other hand, for a party that wants to devour the opponent's main universe, it is too difficult to directly attack the tree itself. However, starting from the ideological universe, gradually advancing to the subsidiary universe, and finally surrounding the main universe, grinding can also grind the main universe to death. In this way, there are infinitely many topics that can be written about. The main universe in the book has been saved. According to the performance of those worlds, it belongs to the subsidiary universe. There are two major categories below, namely the universe affected by ideology (the story itself) and their branches (the story's fans) This can be considered a fan type theme. The main point of the story is to restore the plot to its original state. It doesn't matter if it branches. It's a fan work in itself. All it needs is world peace and eradication of foreign objects entering the world. If you want to write about your own worldview, just skip this stage. (If you want to relax for a while and take a rest in the future, you can write this paragraph. Compared with others, creating your own world is indeed simpler and more popular.) Skipping this stage is to attack the enemy's territory. It's still the same as before. The branches don't matter, as long as there are foreign objects interfering. The story itself is in the universe and destroys the plot (just the opposite of the above) Based on this book Skip the real universe (us) In order to protect and save the main universe and restore the normal development of the auxiliary universe The book is defensive phase 1 For the type of fandom, I classify these two stages as defensive stage 2 (recovering plot development), and final defensive stage 3 (it doesn't matter the plot, just clear the abnormalities, it's okay to do whatever you want) Invading the enemy's territory, then it is attack phase 3 (filling the abnormality) and attack phase 2 (destroying the plot) These four stages are different types of gameplay for fans. The final attack stage 1 is the opposite parallel universe. It is the same as what the protagonist group is doing, except to destroy it (it doesn't have to be destroyed, you can occupy it, capture it directly, and use it as a bridgehead to recharge your batteries and continue the attack) At this stage, it's time to create your own worldview again. It all depends on how the author uses it. If you take down the parallel universe and hold it, the main universe will be a turtle in the urn. If there is no way to recover, it means victory. (Note: The plot of this book is also that the parallel universe is being occupied, and the main universe is affected, but it has not been completely taken over, so there is still a glimmer of hope. The appearance of the protagonist group and the progress of the plot are reasonable) What's going on? Is there any progress? Two lawful fan gameplays, two evil order fan gameplays, plus a self-created world view. (Note: Evil does not necessarily mean destruction and killing. You can refer to Toby, Spider-Man and Venom. Evil also comes in different sizes. It all depends on how you want to write it. Like Black Bullet, evil is good.) Just make this book into a series. Defend Moscow! ! ! Recover lost ground! Attack! Attack! ! Attack! ! !

Seeing that it is a typical group portrait story is a bit false. I had the same reaction when I first read "Qiming". It must be due to personal reasons. For a protagonist, I only need to assume the personality, emotions and psychology of one person. It is very easy and simple. If it is a group portrait, it will be very troublesome. It is impossible for everyone to be a good person. It's impossible for everyone to really be on the same page. The author can stop writing those bullshit things, but I can't be a normal substitute. Every additional character will make me tired and think twice. I don't want to have such a hard entertainment, so "Qiming" or this book just read a few chapters and put it down. Speaking of this book alone, it is unexpectedly excellent. The writing is somewhat skillful and the characters are portrayed in detail. I don't know why the author seems to have concerns. The main character feels a little bit reluctant to let go. The story is attractive. I haven't read the specific plot in detail, but there are a few paragraphs that are quite interesting to read and the details! Reality! Steady! Military fans who like group portraits will love this book and recommend it.

Summary: Divine Book is a potential stock, but it was killed by the Tomato Review. Super high-quality group portraits, I personally feel that it can be ranked in the top 10% of brainy masterpieces on Tomato. The protagonists are neither holy nor indiscriminate, nor brainless. The world's crises unfold logically, and the reversal is reasonable and eye-catching. However, because World No. 2 Played the Führer joke and was chased by the Tomato review, I can only say (** Tomato review)

It's quite interesting. This novel is a roguelike. A new world will be refreshed each time, and the equipment will be cleared, but the unlocked technologies will be retained. Under this framework, it can be constantly fresh and the combat effectiveness will not collapse, which makes people look forward to the next development. Relaxation is the biggest feeling when reading this novel. The protagonists are all sunny, and their superpowers allow people to use their imagination. There is basically no difficulty in solving problems. In a world, you can play any tricks and there is logic. (Mainly the first world. The second world looks a bit complicated. I haven't figured out the situation yet and what kind of world it is.) One thing that can be improved is that each world can be discussed later. This is also very interesting. I am also looking forward to the subsequent development of each world and the memory of the protagonist group.

This is the first time I read a salvation story about a group of protagonists. Every characteristic key word of this book perfectly hits my preference. It's so damn good. The latest chapter has bombarded book friends [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] It's too crude

The setting is so good, it's so comfortable to watch. There are tears and joys, overcoming difficulties and desperate situations, chasing goals and hopes. They are partners on the journey and brothers on the battlefield! Let's go hand in hand and go to tomorrow together!

The writing is really good. The plot and world view are all very good. In my opinion, this book will definitely achieve good results. When the author becomes popular in the future, I will be the first batch of fans of the author.

This is a post-apocalyptic story where groups of people travel through time and space, cooperate with each other, and each utilizes their own strengths. Currently, there is no heroine, no female protagonist, and there will be no stallion. This type is rare. I recommend reading it.

The writing is good, the plot is good, the content is smooth, and it is very healing because there are no villains and everyone is cute. It's obviously a post-apocalyptic novel, but it feels like it has a strong urban atmosphere [laughing] and has vitality.

One of the best novels, different from fast food novels. Although the characters in it have golden fingers, they are not invincible. Most of them rely on their own professional knowledge and manual skills to work together as a team to get further and further. I hope this novel can go further. It's been a long time since I've seen something this good.

A very novel apocalyptic theme. I finally understand why the country doesn't allow singles to stay together for retirement. There are all kinds of ideas and fun people, and all kinds of skills. It's so cool and dangerous [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Nice! ! ! Pay attention to group portraits. The author is excellent in both common sense and details. The author will also make relatively perfect patches for places that may seem a little unreasonable at first. It's a pity that the quantity is small

It's funny. I've been reading for so long and looking for gold in the world every day. I found out here that I haven't slept all night. It's January 18, 2025, and now it's 10.21 In the morning of January 19, 2025. I read the latest chapter all night, and I'm not sleepy [shy][shy][shy] Not bad, the author keeps up the good work

Super beautiful, a group portrait work that reaches the level of a master. It feels like watching a science fiction version of Lingao Qiming. The complete story has two and a half worlds. Although it was unfinished due to objective reasons, the independent stories are great and the ending is also well written.

Come on, author, it's very good-looking but a little short. The infinite flow style gave me a feeling of being in ten days. It can be seen that this is another good book. As a reader of one or two thousand hours, I strongly recommend this book to be very good-looking. Unfortunately, it is delayed by the name. If a physical book is to be published, I suggest the author change a nice name.

The writing is very awesome, it doesn't look like a new book, like a great god opening a vest [Thinking] It has many advantages, but there is only one shortcoming, and that is that there are too few updates. It is best to update it ten times a day [laughing]

It's good to watch. I haven't seen this kind of subject before. It's generally positive and upbeat, without the decadence of the apocalypse. It makes people feel hopeful.

It's pretty good after seeing 148 pictures, but the growth attributes of the protagonist group are too low, and I feel that the characters will not change. After staying in the original world for so long, it has not changed at all. The first world has not changed, the second world has not changed, and the third world is still the same. However, it is still quite good compared to other novels, and there are some small flaws in the setting. Of course, overall this novel is worth reading. And every world is pretty good I've seen Chapter 204, and now I'm wondering if I should give it three stars? We have already reached the fourth world. My physical fitness has not improved and my alert level has not improved. I feel like I am playing a game of life. I have no sense of crisis. I am here to save the world. Those who are not traveling have reached the fourth world and have no brains at all. I really want to give it three stars, but I can still watch it. Then there's the matter of plot. When I was kidnapped by those locals in the fourth world, no one came out. I am very curious. Did the person who injured half of the people in the encounter in the small town in the third world not kill anyone? ? Or a zombie? ? In addition to this, there are some small poisonous points There is also quite little sense of crisis. Don't they want to be there for their families in the original world? ? Could it be that they were having fun during those years in the original world? And every time they don't improve their skills, they just talk about temporary training or something. And after experiencing so many worlds in each world, their mentality should have changed a bit, right?

Except for being slow, the whole book is generally very well written, and it is really rare to see a group portrait novel in the end of the world. If the character's personality does not collapse in the later period, and the team is gradually improved, it will be a very good group portrait novel. Except that the author is a bit lazy, it is actually good. Generally speaking, the first world is really well written, and the second world is okay, but in the end, due to the author's own reasons, I feel that the quality has obviously deteriorated. I want to give it four and a half stars, but I can't seem to give it, so forget it?

A very nice group portrait, the characters are flesh and blood, the plot is serious when it should be serious, and funny when it should be funny, the world view is also well set, there is a sense of mission, and the author is relatively knowledgeable, so it looks good in every aspect.

It's quite good. This book is very good. It can be said to be a relatively rare type in Tomato. At least I haven't read many of them, but I just need to update it soon.

Group Portrait Salvation Article But the difference is that even if the remaining one dies, he can be resurrected as long as the mission is completed, so there is not so much intrigue. It is very interesting to watch, but the only shortcoming is that the author has not entered the farmer game I created, otherwise I will give him an opening of 100 consecutive draws (physics) and give him code word acceleration.

The author's writing is very good👍The characterization and plot are all on point. You can see that he is skilled and attentive! Come on, keep writing, and don't stop updating!

The writing is very good and the subject matter is really new. I started reading online articles in the third grade of elementary school and now in my third year of college, I finally have this feeling of being impacted by new themes.

The best group portrait article I have ever read, with a novel and simple setting. There are hang-ups but not overly dependent. Everyone is working hard and everyone is thinking of solutions. Real, flesh and blood, like every ordinary person. And everyone has real thoughts and personalities.

A very good book with a relatively new subject matter. The characters are described vividly and logically, and the author is working hard to update it every day. Rather than personal heroism, I prefer everyone working together for a common goal. This book really touched my heart!

It's very beautiful. Although the content seems ordinary, it looks very comfortable. It's a very good book. It's beautiful, I hope I can keep it up

Overall it's good, the pace is stable, the plot could be sped up a bit, it's best not to have more than 150 chapters in each world, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to write later [laughing]

It's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing toxic about it so far. I didn't understand. I checked it out and found that they were all five-star reviews, but why was it only 7.1?

It's really good-looking. It made me stay up late from zero to three o'clock. I went to bed satisfied after reading it. It's good-looking. Come on. Author [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]