Divine Time

First of all, why not give it three or five stars. First point, the content of the first eight chapters is indeed very general. It would be much better if the previous chapters were written with their own ideas, so as not to fail to retain people. The second point is that until the beginning of Chapter 9, the rest of the content finally makes people have the urge to read on. It is obvious that a lot of thought was put into writing it. The third point is that blind imitation is not enough. You have to have your own style. The author's world conception is pretty good. If the mistakes in the first eight chapters could have been noticed earlier, maybe it could have been saved. Fourth point, it's no wonder that so few people are reading it. It's really hard to read the first few chapters, but I can still persist in reading it. I'd like to give you some suggestions. Okay, this is just my own idea, not intended to be targeted. The writing is getting better and better, like it👍🏻