[Light novel + campus + two-dimensional + funny + non-cool writing + daily relaxation + no system] What does it feel like to look like a murderer? I think no one in the world knows better than me. A girl once said to me, "Your appearance is not ugly, nor is it appropriate to use the term vicious. It should be aggressive. Just looking at you will make you feel violated." Invasion? Is this such an exaggeration?
Reader comments
How should I put it? Well, I remembered the novel-turned-comic I read a long time ago, "I Will Not Be Bullied by Girls." The character templates are quite similar, especially the chapter about the blond lolita. The plot of the comic is that the protagonist's mother leaves his father, and the blond lolita is his sister. There is also the monitor, Qingmei, but the story is different.
Love it, I love it. Please give me a lot of support from the author and update it quickly [Love]
The writing needs to be improved, but the plot is okay. Come on
To be honest, some of the plots actually need not be a little bit like that. I know that it will be misunderstood, but I still have to do it.
It's similar to the old Japanese light novels. After the male protagonist is hurt by the female protagonist, the female protagonist then sends the male protagonist to compete, and then they get back together later. Alas, it's so difficult.
A very good plot, as long as I can get used to the author's writing habits
Looks great, five stars for support.
Is it Ye Qi's parallel world [laughing evilly]
One of the few good first-person perspective books
Novelty, daily plot
A bit like my talent
The first chapter I thought was not good.
The first thing that gives people the impression is that of a sadistic protagonist. I think there are many ways to establish the protagonist's "spring thing" and "lonely bear" character, and to unfold the story.
To be honest, after reading Chapter 50, it's actually quite interesting. In terms of plot, it's still the same story where the male protagonist attracts beautiful girls. The advantage is that the female protagonist's image is stable and her daily dialogue is steady and sweet.
It is indeed a Nissei flavor, but I always feel that the depiction of the squad leader fails to capture the essence of the Japanese manga. Still need polishing
Not bad, not bad
Very good writing style, full of youthful embarrassment, the protagonist's complaints, well, it's pretty good [laughing]
How should I put it? Well, I remembered the novel-turned-comic I read a long time ago, "I Will Not Be Bullied by Girls." The character templates are quite similar, especially the chapter about the blond lolita. The plot of the comic is that the protagonist's mother leaves his father, and the blond lolita is his sister. There is also the monitor, Qingmei, but the story is different.
Love it, I love it. Please give me a lot of support from the author and update it quickly [Love]
The writing needs to be improved, but the plot is okay. Come on
To be honest, some of the plots actually need not be a little bit like that. I know that it will be misunderstood, but I still have to do it. It's similar to the old Japanese light novels. After the male protagonist is hurt by the female protagonist, the female protagonist then sends the male protagonist to compete, and then they get back together later. Alas, it's so difficult.
A very good plot, as long as I can get used to the author's writing habits
Looks great, five stars for support.
Is it Ye Qi's parallel world [laughing evilly]
One of the few good first-person perspective books
Novelty, daily plot
A bit like my talent
The first chapter I thought was not good. The first thing that gives people the impression is that of a sadistic protagonist. I think there are many ways to establish the protagonist's "spring thing" and "lonely bear" character, and to unfold the story. To be honest, after reading Chapter 50, it's actually quite interesting. In terms of plot, it's still the same story where the male protagonist attracts beautiful girls. The advantage is that the female protagonist's image is stable and her daily dialogue is steady and sweet.
It is indeed a Nissei flavor, but I always feel that the depiction of the squad leader fails to capture the essence of the Japanese manga. Still need polishing
Not bad, not bad
Very good writing style, full of youthful embarrassment, the protagonist's complaints, well, it's pretty good [laughing]