Sun-Chasing Ark: Catch Up to the Sun or Die

So far, there are no obvious poisonous points. The set world view is very ambitious, the character design is on the safe side, the plot design is a bit bland, and the establishment of talent gradients still lacks realism. But the most important problem is that the language needs to be practiced more. Although it is good at combat description, it lacks control of character description and macro-scale narrative. The general direction of thinking is sound, and the future can be expected.

The front row of its kind. Recommend giving it a try. The plot is smooth, and the protagonist's status and strength don't feel aggrieved. It's not a mindless killing, killing, killing, refreshing. Just like his talent name, the protagonist will keep exploring, keep his original intention, pursue a normal life in a world that is not a bit normal, or fight with his life when he should fight.

Look! It's just that I saw it too early, and it's hard to wait for the update [Petrochemical]. There are still some interesting things that haven't been written out. For example, the protagonist said "We can't stop the sun from setting, but we can chase the sun." It's not very exciting here. It's obviously a very shocking sentence. It would be nice to add a little reaction from the supporting characters, but it shouldn't be too much and too exaggerated.

It looks good. It can be seen that the author has an outline and ideas, and the setting of the world view is quite complete. The profession of the protagonist is very suitable for revealing the world view. As long as there is a suitable outline and it can be written normally, it will not be bad.

Although it is still ambiguous when there is a female protagonist... This book gave me a good feeling, and the ambiguity was indeed cut off directly later (referring to the little girl's dependence), but the fleet is all female... Forget it, the creativity is not bad, and the pictures are

It doesn't feel like a newbie at all, and the fighting scenes are quite mature, which is a rare feeling. A survival novel like this without the tension of fighting will not achieve good results. After reading it, this book is considered to be very good.

It's very good. I hope the author will keep updating, update every day, don't stop updating, and update more and more. The overall style and design is very attractive, and it is considered a masterpiece among survival and gram-like novels in Red Persimmon.

It's okay. What's the talent level? There's nothing poisonous about it.

It was relatively dull at the beginning, but became more and more complicated as it went on. The author should update it soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [Stare]

It's okay. I just want to ask when can the slave contract and employee contract captured before be used? Why not recruit teammates over there in the mangrove forest? Did you, the author, forget that there is such a thing as a contract?