Sun Chaser: a Survival Game That Starts on a Raft

The front row of its kind. Recommend giving it a try. The plot is smooth, and the protagonist's status and strength don't feel aggrieved. It's not a mindless killing, killing, killing, refreshing. Just like his talent name, the protagonist will keep exploring, keep his original intention, pursue a normal life in a world that is not normal at all, or fight with his life when he should fight.

So far, there are no obvious poisonous points. The set world view is very ambitious, the character design is on the safe side, the plot design is a bit bland, and the establishment of talent gradients still lacks realism. But the most important problem is that the language needs more practice. Although I am good at combat description, I lack character description and macro-scale narrative control. The ideas in the general direction are all sound and the future is promising.

It looks good. It can be seen that the author has an outline and ideas, and the setting of the world view is quite complete. The profession of the protagonist is very suitable for revealing the world view. As long as there is a suitable outline and it can be written normally, it will not be bad.

Look! It's just that I saw it too early, and it's hard to wait for the update [Petrochemical]. There are still some interesting things that haven't been written out. For example, the protagonist said "We can't stop the sun from setting, but we can chase the sun." It's not very exciting here. It's obviously a very shocking sentence. It would be nice to add a little reaction from the supporting characters, but it shouldn't be too much and too exaggerated.

Although it is still ambiguous when there is a female protagonist... This book gave me a good feeling, and the ambiguity was indeed cut off directly later (referring to the little girl's dependence), but the fleet is all female... Forget it, the creativity is not bad, and the pictures are

It's okay. What's the talent level? There's nothing poisonous about it.

It doesn't feel like a newbie at all, and the fighting scenes are quite mature, which is a rare feeling. A survival novel like this without the tension of fighting will not achieve good results. After reading it, this book is considered to be very good.

It's very good. I hope the author will keep updating, update every day, don't stop updating, and update more and more. The overall style and design is very attractive, and it is considered a masterpiece among survival and gram-like novels in Red Persimmon.

It was relatively dull at the beginning, but became more and more complicated as it went on. The author should update it soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Stare]

It's a good article in Tomato

The unique sea survival is really interesting.

It's beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, come on, author [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The plot so far is reasonable, but there are a lot of pitfalls. By the way, single girl or multiple girls?

It's okay. I just want to ask when can the slave contract and employee contract captured before be used? Why not recruit teammates over there in the mangrove forest? Did you, the author, forget that there is such a thing as a contract?

It is a rare work among national survival stories that one has the brains to read, and I hope it can be maintained in the future.

If you have any expectations for the development direction of the plot, you can tell me here and I will refer to it [Blowing Kiss] According to reader feedback, this book is determined to be a work with a single female protagonist, and you can tell who the female protagonist is after Chapter 72. Only for cooperation or friendship with other women. There will be no harem, and of course there will be no other men in the protagonist's territory. In the subsequent chapters of Chapter 72, I will reduce the description of the emotional line and focus on the story and development.

Reasonable, good-looking, and temporarily non-toxic

I found another treasure, thumbs up!

Yes, there is a world view, although many authors arrange female teammates to meet the function. But multiple special IDs are good talents, but they are not very good.

It looks good, but who is the heroine? I hope it's Xiaojiang [sending my heart]

The world view is reasonable, the combat power has not collapsed, the characters are pretty good, and the plot is quite novel. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write the story well [Thoughts]

It's so good to read, especially chapters 38 to 46. I felt really refreshed after reading it.

Love to watch Love to watch Love to watch

Ok ok ok

The world view setting is good

The world view of this book has an epic feel. If the details are polished more, it will be a particularly good work.

The world view is quite good, much better than other novels of this type that I have read before.

Five-star support

Not bad, no big problem

A very interesting novel about the world view