Tianfumen Cultivation Story

It took me two days to read more than 100 chapters. Overall, it's pretty good. Let's talk about the advantages first. 1. The description of the fighting scenes is pretty good, there is no procrastination, and there are no particularly long explanations or useless psychological descriptions. 2. The portrayal of the protagonist is okay. It vividly reflects the feeling of an ordinary sect monk who has adventures. Various behaviors can also reflect the characteristics of his age group. 3. The emotional lines of the sect are well designed and reflect the atmosphere very well. 4. The dungeon is well planned and the Forest of Nine Deaths dungeon is well drawn. Now let's talk about the shortcomings 1. The portrayal of the old man is very unstable. There is no sense of vicissitudes of living for tens of thousands of years. The feeling of an old child is too serious. 2. The protagonist does not have much subjective initiative in cultivation. It seems that cultivation is just muddling along. After returning from the Forest of Nine Deaths, the protagonist gave me the feeling that he is not practicing as hard as before. 3. The protagonist is too easily led away by women. Whether it is fighting monsters with Chen Ning in the Jiang family, or getting along with Senior Sister Cheng in daily life, I can only say that the innocent little virgin is like this. 4. Typo, nothing to say about this The above only represents my personal opinion. It's not easy to find one that I can read.

Dear Lord, please watch. Let me talk about the concept of this book. Many books nowadays may write stories about bitterness and hatred, aggravating the confrontation in the storyline, but there are more such books now, so this book does not intend to write about such dramas about bitterness and hatred. The protagonist will not have explosive intelligence as soon as he reaches his teenage years, and all kinds of monsters will crush ordinary people with their minds. I feel that cultivating immortality involves not only cruel competition, but also entanglements of family affection, friendship, and even love. Therefore, I will add some such dramas in the early stage, but as time and events progress, the protagonist will have emotional joys and sorrows, emotional ups and downs, and face the ugly and insidious nature of human nature, and will gradually become more mature and stable after experiencing intrigues. Thus, he finally devoted himself to the Tao and continued on the road of cultivating immortality.

It's very good. Although it's a novel about ordinary people, it saves a lot of introductions about ordinary people in the early stage. The opening chapter is based on the little people in the world of immortality. It's good that the theme enters early. Come on, keep reading.

Highly recommend this book. The author describes all aspects of the talisman in great detail, and his writing style is smooth and easy to understand. Moreover, the battle scene with the monster is depicted as if it were a immersive scene. Give it five stars.

Nice. However, If possible, I personally think the author can reduce the plot about those demons, ancient demons, and heavenly demons. There are not many similar plots that appear in other immortality novels.

It looks good, it should be the Tianfu Sect in the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Both Xiang Zhili and Han Li have been to this sect! The spirit descending talisman, the Liuding Tianjia talisman. I wonder if there will be any connection with mortal stories in the future! Looking forward to the next article, the author will give you a lot of support, and there will be more updates.

Cultivating immortals with a humane and sophisticated mind is called cultivating a demon without a humane and sophisticated person.

The beginning of the chapter is good. You quickly enter the Immortal Cultivation Sect. There is no vicious uncle, but the warmth of the sect at the beginning. I have just read the first chapter, which gives people a refreshing feeling. After reading the author's vision, I greatly sigh and support it. I comment first to respect it and look forward to more exciting things later.

The writing is getting better and better. If I can continue writing, it will not be a dream to surpass ordinary people.

A very good realistic novel about immortality, with almost no poisonous points, and not even a cheat. Among a lot of underworld novels about immortality, it is considered a clean one!

I really like this, not procrastination

Come on, come on, the revolution has not yet been successful, comrades still need to work hard [laughing]

Moisturizing things silently and eloquently speaking, a rare novel about cultivating immortals

The writing is pretty good

It's good so far, very good. I hope there won't be any scenes where you beat monsters by leapfrogging, cheating on you, pretending to be 13 and getting slapped in the face. Don't be a stallion 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

This book is well written, but not enough to read. I highly recommend this book, the score shouldn't be so low. The author's narrative style and rhythm are very good, especially the copy is very well written. I hope there will be more interaction between the protagonist and Han Li later on. Stay tuned and look forward to the author's follow-up!

Will you write more in the future? I really want to see it

I have only read the first ten chapters so far. They are very well written and make people want to read more. I hope the author will keep reading and I hope this book becomes popular!

The pace is good, it can be called a high-quality novel for ordinary people. If there is a female protagonist, I hope she will be a strong woman and not a slut.

Yes, it's my type. I feel that in the novels about cultivating immortals these days, they are always frowning, gloomy, and solemn. They are all alchemy monks. They have lived for hundreds of years, and some small things are like facing big enemies. Cultivation to immortality is like a dog. Instead, they are still chatting and chatting hard when life and death are at stake.

Come on come on come on come on

The starting point is good and sentimental.

Recommend it, it is well written, the number of readers is currently low, the author should keep silently and persevere!

Great book! Fellow Taoist, come on, keep at it!

A very good novel to kill time during work hours.

Holy shit! It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day [angry]

Seeing the true meaning in the ordinary, I am looking forward to it!

The author writes carefully and his writing style is also good

The writing is very good, unconventional, and the characters and plots are very good. Come on! ! !

You can do better in writing.