My Pale Life

In writing this book, I combined real life experiences and life insights. Some of the stories in it are real things that happened in reality. So far, although the results of this book are not very good, I will write it carefully and update it while ensuring its quality. As a novice writer, sometimes the descriptions are not in place or unreasonable. I hope everyone can understand. Thank you for your support. No matter what the results of this book are, I will give it an ending. Thank you everyone for your company. [Laughing][salute]😏❤️😘

It's a very good novel. It kills decisively and without regard for the consequences. But it should add some Taoist priests or craftsmen. Otherwise, it will look like the only capable male protagonist in the world. All in all, it is very interesting.

I didn't expect it to end suddenly. It has too much stamina. I like Li Qian so much and I also like the male protagonist. I didn't expect the death to be so tragic. I don't know if the protagonist is dead. How can Li Qian survive as a ghost? The extra story is saying that she went to the cemetery to kill ghosts alone? Is it just to vent your anger? It's hard to calm down. I hope I can continue writing in the future. Don't change the protagonist. After all, the protagonist has the ability to be immortal. It's not difficult to find a way to resurrect him.

I finished reading it in three days. It's quite beautiful. I can't put it into words, probably because it's very novel. It's like a fairy tale about fighting monsters and upgrading, but it's well integrated with urban life. I hope this style can be maintained. The writing progresses like a running account. I'm not criticizing the author. It really gives me this feeling, but it's also really confusing. You can't guess what will happen next. The story of fighting and killing has the flavor of Water Margin, where grudges are happy, revenge must be avenged, and kindness must be repaid, so it is very comfortable to read. Although the writing is a bit streamlined, the author is like a waiter in a members-only restaurant. It provides readers who are gourmets with delicacies that fit their status without following the routine. Although it is a bit nonsensical, you can feel that the author is constructing a world view. I guess some side projects, talismans, etc. Will be an important part of the plot in the future. I feel that the character He Si will have more roles. Furthermore, can the main character eat more delicious food? Don't eat boiled pork with dipping sauce every day. I'm tired of watching the main character even if he doesn't get tired of it. Eat some beef. Beef is delicious. It is cheaper to buy frozen goods in large quantities at the frozen goods wholesale market. Just buy a freezer and store it. Chicken is cheaper, just eat some chicken

It's pretty good so far. Why are so few people reading it with low ratings? Isn't the title of the book a weak introduction? The beginning of the game has the feeling of a supernatural novel from many years ago, the kind of first-person supernatural novel posted on a forum. Basically, this kind of novel is quite good-looking.

Now that I have almost finished reading it, I would like to share my thoughts. The subject matter is very novel, and this development also makes me want to watch it. However, I may need to explain the system and the talisman later (referring to why this talisman has such power, and if I remember correctly, is it the protagonist's grandfather or who left it? This place should involve past grievances). It should also write about the official organization, otherwise it will not be very good for you to be such a haunted person.

Good looking. The author is a bit overactive, surely because there are so few readers. The story is very well written, and the protagonist has a very three-dimensional character, a somewhat generous character, but also relatively simple and down-to-earth, and very slow to emotions. It was really a hug when I met the thighs. Now I have to rely on two golden thighs and my own golden finger to survive.

A very good setting. It abandons the old routine of pretending to be cool and slaps people in the face, and there is no chance encounter between a wealthy daughter and a cruel person. Instead, there is real society and the fight against terror. Quick update!!! Stay up late until 12pm for two chapters 🙂

Treasure author, just read it

It's really good. The story should be adapted from real people and real events. Generally speaking, the first person pronoun is used. I believe in ghosts. I've seen people get seriously ill afterwards, but I can't remember what it was like.