Tang Guihun

When the last period fell, this persistence finally gained concrete weight. Not hastily ending due to data anxiety is the best explanation for the readers who have always been with you - those late-night chapter reviews, paragraph controversies, and the resonance of the characters' fates have all turned into a contract between the pages of the book. As a debut novel, it carries the inevitable naivety of all novices: unbalanced rhythm, loopholes in the setting, and clumsy adaptation to market rules. But it is these biting gravel that make the words gradually shine through during the journey of millions of words. Some creative dogmas are always difficult to tame my pen, just like a stubborn wild horse that always wants to break free of the reins. This pain just proves that I have not yet become a craftsman on the assembly line. The outline of the next book has already taken shape, and the details still need some polishing. In order to avoid the plot dragging out when I am nervous again, I plan to write a hundred chapters before publishing it. Those passages in this book that readers marked as "tears should be here" but failed to reach, and those flat characters that could have become classic villains, will become the grindstone for the new work. Try to make each chapter like an ancient bronze - it has both the shape of the bones cast by the story and the lines engraved by the text, which can refract different lights in the sun. Please allow me to temporarily disappear into the material library of life. When the new book opens, you will see a more calm storyteller returning with a tempered edge.

The only book I've read word for word in so many years, it's wonderful

The concept is novel. Only by changing the age timeline of the parallel world can the story develop. Don't worry about age. The story is wonderful. The male protagonist is a warm-hearted man who kills decisively. The author must persevere even though he has nothing to say to his own people [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The writing is good and the plot is very detailed. It is a bit different from other novels. The pace is a bit slow. It is worth reading. It gets better around chapter 100.

The writing is good. In ancient times, classical Chinese was usually spoken in formal occasions. In private, there were a lot of vulgar words, like the curse words we use in Sichuan. Moreover, the people of Sichuan now came to Sichuan because the Qing Dynasty massacred a large number of ethnic minorities and the Han people migrated from the south of the Yangtze River.

The writing is really good. First of all, the words and sentences are consistent, the characters have distinct personalities, and the plot is reasonable. I have read a lot of Tang Dynasty books, and this book ranks among the top. The slight drawback is that the protagonist is relatively soft in dealing with things. After all, this is an imperial system, and people cannot stand firm if they are not ruthless [laughs]

Let's just talk about the writing. It's really good and deserves five stars. AI doesn't have that flavor, so I won't talk about the logic. This poem is really good The golden pond is suddenly divided into scales, and the blue sea is about to cut off its branches. A blue bird carries three cocoons in its mouth, while a red fish can hardly deliver nine palindromes. Spring blouses are embroidered to mend the Yuanyang Grotto, and candles are burning at night to leave traces of jadeite. Even though there are thirteen wild goose pillars, there is not even a trace of Yunluo Fu.

Let's give it four stars for now! The key is that the system doesn't look comfortable, nor is it too exaggerated.

The writing is really good! But don't keep messing around with a bunch of women, okay?

Very good! Worth reading! Thanks!

Good, good, good, good

The author's writing style is really good, the structure is quite compact, and the narrative is neither fast nor slow, unfolding the story slowly like a scroll. It's quite comfortable to chase more!

Really well written

The writing is good, not draggy, worth reading, great

The writing is very good

So far, it looks good.

Beautiful and sentimental

Good, good, good

It's still ok, a sense of immersion

Books to spread positive energy

I like reading books like this

Beautiful, love to read and write more

Nice. The story is not fast paced

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

Very good keep up the good work

The article is carefully worded and the author has good skills

The writing is good, the story is fast-paced and gradually gets better. It is one of the top historical works that I, an old bookworm, have read.

It's really good, with details and soul. Like!

The most beautiful thing in time travel, cheers for the author

I have read so many books. The details of this book, the background of the protagonist, and all aspects are very good.