Warhammer, but with Doraemon

I don't usually post book reviews, so I gave four stars just to prove that I'm not a reviewer, and I haven't had much confidence in free novels since I've been on Tomato for a long time. But this one is really good. There is a saying that goes well, if it's too serious, you will inevitably want to change your taste. Not everyone likes the lifeless and depressing atmosphere of Warhammer all the time. Your book is really okay. Don't make mistakes in settings. Your writing style really needs to be improved. Don't write randomly. Occasionally, you can also read the advice of normal book fans. Don't panic if you make a mistake. You can just change it in time. You must keep it normal! (Some people on Tomato use free novels as a shield. This is the reason for free novels, but it doesn't mean you can use it to disgust people.) Sometimes the content of some service plots is acceptable. Just write this kind of article so that most people can read it comfortably. If a small number of people have normal opinions, just ignore the abnormal and extreme ones. As long as your plot can be rounded and reasonable, it is acceptable. Sometimes the content can be simplified as much as possible or not too much. After all, the highlight of this book is that most people are focused on how to watch the protagonist use Dora A. The magical props of dreams, some of the twenty or so chapters written by the author may be a little too long. Here I will mention the ones I mentioned above. Simplified, some small details and plot introduction. Most people can accept that you write a few more words or hundreds or thousands of words, at least to understand why. Of course, how to grasp the specifics depends on your personal performance. Don't be limited by "free novels" to limit your progress.

This is the first time I saw someone writing about Doraemon in Warhammer. Good luck, I can write it till the end.

It's well written. I'll comment on the details. I'll just add one point. The supporting characters are well-cast, but the protagonist's portrayal and setting are a bit lacking. With Tinkerbell taking the lead, he can show some action. Many things in the first half of the plot can be avoided. I know it's for the sake of the plot, but the plot line is stretched too deliberately and makes the protagonist look completely different from the adult in the setting. Maybe it would be better to change it to a student.

It's super good-looking, the plot is compact and interlocking, the story is also very interesting, the characters are very detailed, every important character is very specific, especially the psychological activities of the characters, the descriptions are realistic.

Although there are a lot of weird things written, it's fun. It's too heavy. It's good to save what you can save. That's it. And that figure is so fun. Arena (I can forgive all the poisonous points for the sake of this fun)

This is also quite explosive among Warhammer fans. It's so beautiful, really.

Why did I read it some time ago, but I stopped reading it after reading it. Yesterday, I suddenly ran out of novels I wanted to read, so I remembered this one. It was really good, and I regret it now when I think about it!

I've read so many novels, but there are only a handful that I actually want to keep reading. This book was really engaging and I wanted to know what was going to happen next, so hopefully the author can give us more plot development and keep us more invested. Hahaha. . .

This book allowed me to see that every character is three-dimensional and has a full personality. The logic is sound and unexpected (at least to me) and the author is very thoughtful.

The ups and downs, both the climax and the continuation are compact, and coupled with occasional humor, they are all very attractive. The characters are very distinct, and the storyline is well-founded. I praise the author's talent.