Let's Hope the Evil God of Warhammer Doesn't Dream of a Blue Tanuki

I don't usually post book reviews, so I gave four stars just to prove that I'm not a reviewer, and I haven't had much confidence in free novels since I've been on Tomato for a long time. But this one is really good. There is a saying that goes well, if it's too serious, you will inevitably want to change your taste. Not everyone likes the lifeless and depressing atmosphere of Warhammer all the time. Your book is really okay. Don't make mistakes in settings. Your writing style really needs to be improved. Don't write randomly. Occasionally, you can also read the advice of normal book fans. Don't panic if you make a mistake. You can just change it in time. You must keep it normal! (Some people on Tomato use free novels as a shield. This is the reason for free novels, but it doesn't mean you can use it to disgust people.) Sometimes the content of some service plots is acceptable. Just write this kind of article so that most people can read it comfortably. If a small number of people have normal opinions, just ignore the abnormal and extreme ones. As long as your plot can be rounded and reasonable, it is acceptable. Sometimes the content can be simplified as much as possible or not too much. After all, the highlight of this book is that most people are focused on how to watch the protagonist use Dora A. The magical props of dreams, some of the twenty or so chapters written by the author may be a little too long. Here I will mention the ones I mentioned above. Simplified, some small details and plot introduction. Most people can accept that you write a few more words or hundreds or thousands of words, at least to understand why. Of course, how to grasp the specifics depends on your personal performance. Don't be limited by "free novels" to limit your progress.

Although there are a lot of weird things written, it's fun. It's too heavy. It's good to save what you can save. That's it. And that figure is so fun. Arena (I can forgive all the poisonous points for the sake of this fun)

This is also quite explosive among Warhammer fans. It's so beautiful, really.

It's well written. I'll comment on the details. I'll just add one point. The supporting characters are well-cast, but the protagonist's portrayal and setting are a bit lacking. With Tinkerbell taking the lead, he can show some action. Many things in the first half of the plot can be avoided. I know it's for the sake of the plot, but the plot line is stretched too deliberately and makes the protagonist look completely different from the adult in the setting. Maybe it would be better to change it to a student.

It's super good-looking, the plot is compact and interlocking, the story is also very interesting, the characters are very detailed, every important character is very specific, especially the psychological activities of the characters, the descriptions are realistic.

Come on, I think it's well written, but the names of several characters are repeated.

Why did I read it some time ago, but I stopped reading it after reading it. Yesterday, I suddenly ran out of novels I wanted to read, so I remembered this one. It was really good, and I regret it now when I think about it!

This book allowed me to see that every character is three-dimensional and has a full personality. The logic is sound and unexpected (at least to me) and the author is very thoughtful.

The ups and downs, both the climax and the continuation are compact, and coupled with occasional humor, they are all very attractive. The characters are very distinct, and the storyline is well-founded. I praise the author's talent.

Wow, it's amazing! I can't use the word "distinct characters" to describe it. I feel that the characters in this book are no longer paper figures, but have been given real souls by the author. It is so well written.

The writing is brilliant! The writing is brilliant! To be honest, I almost never comment on novels, but I really can't help but want to say a few words about this book. Wonderful! I have only read the first part so far, but I can't help but express my thoughts. It's really beautiful.

The author's writing is smooth, the plot design has ups and downs, the conception is rigorous, and the character descriptions are vivid and delicate, making people want to explore the follow-up. It is a high-quality masterpiece, and I support the author's 5-star praise.

The writing is okay, author, keep it up (ง•̀_•́)ง

Juejuezi, a rare good article from Tomato. The writing is smooth, logical and humorous. The characters are all quite fleshed out and fleshed out. The hole dug in the middle has basically been filled. Every character has his own destination.

It is very beautiful, with a compact plot, no tediousness, no wording, and no procrastination; this novel has a good rhythm and is wonderful.

It's really good to read, the author's writing style is good, and the characters written by the author have very distinct characteristics. I have been short of books recently, but I came across this book. The plot is really exciting, and I really love the author to death.

The author's knowledge is very rich and broad. The novel is wonderful, ups and downs, and exciting. I look forward to reading it.

The personality traits of each character are perfectly depicted, and the gaps are filled to the brim. The plot connection is very smooth, and there is no trace of water in the word count. It is also very beautiful.

I like it very much. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. It is exciting! It is a rare and good book!

The story is attractive and the plot is easy to understand. I always want to keep reading. It's good.

It's a very good novel, the subject matter is very novel, and I was very passionate about it. I haven't felt this way in a novel for a long time.

Delicate feelings and attention to details. Super awesome!

It's true that there are a lot of good characters written, the characters are delicate and beautiful.

It's super good-looking. I like the rhythm of the plot development. The people around the protagonist are very interesting.

It's really beautiful, an absolute masterpiece. The enemy of the protagonist is so strong that it made me tremble with fear, as if the protagonist is going to die in the next chapter. . .

The characters are vividly depicted, with flesh and blood, and the story is vivid and agile. The plot is rigorous, the logic is clear, the words are sophisticated, the writing skills are solid, and the author is very useful.

The plot is compact, the content is exciting, and the characters' emotions and details are described in great detail. It is a good book and worth reading.

The writing is very good, and the process is full of twists and turns, making people want to read more.

A good novel. It can be seen that the author is very careful, filling in the pits and recycling the foreshadowing is great.

The characters and plots are delicately drawn. Everyone has their own characteristics and suits my taste.